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... that ''']''' founded ''' { /* Using the attribute selector hides this from IE */ position: fixed; height: 100%; /* If you shrink the browser too small, the */ overflow: auto; /* side column will become scrollable, so stuff */ z-index: 2; /* is always accessible, albeit ugly */ } #p-logo { /* Make logo inline with other divs */ position:static; } #column-one { /* Sidebar column start at the top screen edge */ padding-top: 0; } #p-lang .pBody ul{ /* Sets the language box to a fixed height and */ height: 6em; /* scrollable if too long to fit on screen */ overflow: auto; } /* Fix the background image, too, so it looks nice as you scroll */ body { background-attachment: fixed; } /* Fix the footer so it looks nice and doesn't overlap the sidebar */ #footer { margin-left: 13.6em; border-left: solid 1px rgb(250, 189, 35); -moz-border-radius-topleft: 1em; -moz-border-radius-bottomleft: 1em; } /* Keep personal links at the top right */ #p-personal { width:100%; white-space:nowrap; padding:0 0 0 0; margin:0; position:absolute; left:0px; top:0px; z-index: 0; border: none; background: none; overflow: visible; line-height: 1.2em; } #p-personal h5 { display:none; } #p-personal .portlet, #p-personal .pBody { padding:0; margin:0; border: none; z-index:0; overflow: visible; background: none; } /* this is the ul contained in the portlet */ #p-personal ul { border: none; line-height: 1.4em; color: #2f6fab; padding: 0em 2em 0 3em; margin: 0; text-align: right; text-transform: lowercase; list-style: none; z-index:0; background: none; } #p-personal li { z-index:0; border:none; padding:0; display: inline; color: #2f6fab; margin-left: 1em; line-height: 1.2em; background: none; } #p-personal li a { text-decoration: none; color: #005896; padding-bottom: 0.2em; background: none; } #p-personal li a:hover { background-color: White; padding-bottom: 0.2em; text-decoration: none; } </style>nited States]]''' in 1924, only to see it destroyed in less than a year following accusations that it was a "strange sex cult"? self-nom. Gerber is just waiting for a non-controversial deletion of a redirect to be moved to article space. Society for Human Rights is, I ''think'', a 5x expansion but I can't seem to figure out how to make DYKCheck work. ] (]) 14:19, 27 August 2009 (UTC)
... that ''']''' founded ''']''' in 1924, only to see it destroyed in less than a year following accusations that it was a "strange sex cult"? self-nom. Gerber is just waiting for a non-controversial deletion of a redirect to be moved to article space. Society for Human Rights is, I ''think'', a 5x expansion but I can't seem to figure out how to make DYKCheck work. ] (]) 14:19, 27 August 2009 (UTC)
:* OK, Gerber's been moved to article space. ] (]) 15:35, 27 August 2009 (UTC) :* OK, Gerber's been moved to article space. ] (]) 15:35, 27 August 2009 (UTC)
::*] Society for Human Rights is a 6271/2098=3x expansion. DYKcheck instructions are at ] or at ]. ] (]) 18:25, 27 August 2009 (UTC) ::*] Society for Human Rights is a 6271/2098=3x expansion. DYKcheck instructions are at ] or at ]. ] (]) 18:25, 27 August 2009 (UTC)
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*** Apparently the creator of DYKcheck did not take into consideration that "footnotes", which are asides of readable prose that are broken out from the main text because, while interesting, are not necessarily directly on point, are not "notes" which serve as references. Nor did s/he contemplate that prose generated by templates like {{tl|fact}}, which generates "" within the text, does not fall under the heading of "readable". The article is now at 10,272. The unexpanded version is 2,098 but DYKcheck is ''clearly'' counting three instances of "" as readable prose. Three such instances total 51 characters. These characters should not be considered in the pre-expansion article's count. Adjusting the count to reflect this, the pre-expansion article is 2047. 10272/2947 = 5.018 expansion. Blindly adhering to a character count because DYKcheck says so, despite reasonable arguments to the contrary, seems pedantic. ] (]) 22:05, 28 August 2009 (UTC) *** Apparently the creator of DYKcheck did not take into consideration that "footnotes", which are asides of readable prose that are broken out from the main text because, while interesting, are not necessarily directly on point, are not "notes" which serve as references. Nor did s/he contemplate that prose generated by templates like {{tl|fact}}, which generates "" within the text, does not fall under the heading of "readable". The article is now at 10,272. The unexpanded version is 2,098 but DYKcheck is ''clearly'' counting three instances of "" as readable prose. Three such instances total 51 characters. These characters should not be considered in the pre-expansion article's count. Adjusting the count to reflect this, the pre-expansion article is 2047. 10272/2947 = 5.018 expansion. Blindly adhering to a character count because DYKcheck says so, despite reasonable arguments to the contrary, seems pedantic. ] (]) 22:05, 28 August 2009 (UTC)
****The DYKcheck counts are usually pretty accurate. The current count is 10,280 characters and the count for the version before you started editing was 2,098, which puts the expansion at almost 4.9x, putting you a mere 210 characters below 5x. You should have no problem meeting that with some additional details in the article. ] (]) 23:01, 28 August 2009 (UTC) ****The DYKcheck counts are usually pretty accurate. The current count is 10,280 characters and the count for the version before you started editing was 2,098, which puts the expansion at almost 4.9x, putting you a mere 210 characters below 5x. You should have no problem meeting that with some additional details in the article. ] (]) 23:01, 28 August 2009 (UTC)
***** Do you believe that three instances of "" should be counted toward the readable prose count in the pre-expansion article, because DYKcheck doesn't exclude them? ] (]) 23:20, 28 August 2009 (UTC)


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Candidate entries

Articles created/expanded on August 28

Leucopholiota

Created by Sasata (talk). Self nom at 22:31, 28 August 2009 (UTC)

List of UFO religions

Created by Cirt (talk). Self nom at 22:10, 28 August 2009 (UTC)


Glensanda

  • ... that Glensanda was an ancient deserted settlement in the Highlands of Scotland, but now it is a super-quarry which exports 6,000,000 tons of granite every year?

new article by Autodidactyl (talk). Self nom at 20:18, 28 August 2009 (UTC)

1892 vote of no confidence against the government of the Marquess of Salisbury

5x expanded by Sam Blacketer (talk). Self nom at 19:18, 28 August 2009 (UTC)

American Sound Studio

5x expanded by Shoessss (Shoessss). Self nom at 17:47, 28 August 2009 (UTC)

Argos Archaeological Museum

  • ... that a miniature clay figurine of a woman or goddess in the Argos Archaeological Museum in Greece is one of the oldest sculptural representations of humans found in Europe to date?

5x expanded by Himalayan Explorer (talk). Self nom at 17:45, 28 August 2009 (UTC)

Dion Archaeological Museum

5x expanded by Himalayan Explorer (talk). Self nom at 13:35, 28 August 2009 (UTC)

Anti-tank dog

5x expanded by Materialscientist (talk). Self nom at 05:55, 28 August 2009 (UTC)

The first hook is only applicable to Eastern Front (not the whole war), and as Zaloga says, only "in sectors where they appeared" (FWIW). NVO (talk) 07:48, 28 August 2009 (UTC)
Perhaps OT. Stephen Zaloga is a reliable author, but the referenced book is littered with too many typos that make it appear sloppy, unreliable. NVO (talk) 07:54, 28 August 2009 (UTC)
I've looked through quite some sources, sifting through junk, and have no doubt now regarding the Soviet deployment facts. Many Russian sources are actually more trustworthy than Zaloga. Yes, only Eastern Front, but most parts of it. I changed the hook. Materialscientist (talk) 08:18, 28 August 2009 (UTC)
Am I the only one who hates the "WWII" and "WWI" abbreviations in hooks? Dahn (talk) 13:09, 28 August 2009 (UTC)
No, you're not. First World War and Second World War are much better. Mjroots (talk) 15:42, 28 August 2009 (UTC)
Done. Materialscientist (talk) 23:02, 28 August 2009 (UTC)

Lord Have Mercy on the Working Man

  • Comment: 180 characters by my count; I don't want to omit any of the names.

Created by TenPoundHammer (talk). Self nom at 03:51, 28 August 2009 (UTC)


New Jersey Route 64

  • ... that the alignment of New Jersey Route 64 is shorter than Route 31A, the highway it replaced?

5x expanded by Mitchazenia (talk). Self nom at 02:56, 28 August 2009 (UTC)


List of Pittsburgh Pirates Opening Day starting pitchers

5x expanded by Rlendog (talk). Self nom at 02:36, 28 August 2009 (UTC)

Your article says "1968", not "1966". --74.13.125.201 (talk) 03:47, 28 August 2009 (UTC)

Articles created/expanded on August 27

Henry Dorling

Created by PamD (talk). Self nom at 18:00, 28 August 2009 (UTC)


Kavala Archaeological Museum

5x expanded by Himalayan Explorer (talk). Self nom at 12:00, 28 August 2009 (UTC)

Hand of God (art)

Created by Johnbod (talk). Self nom at 13:21, 28 August 2009 (UTC)

William Weston (Explorer)

Created by Malick78 (talk). Self nom at 10:32, 28 August 2009 (UTC)

The pioneer (painting)

Created by Mattinbgn (talk). Self nom at 22:43, 27 August 2009 (UTC)

Alice Ayres

  • ... that in 1885, over 10,000 mourners attended the funeral of Alice Ayres (pictured)?
  • Comment: This is intentionally "Who is that and why haven't I heard of her?". There's no obvious way to summarise her in <200 characters without diluting the impact to ridiculous levels ("DYK... that Alice Ayres was unquestionably heroic but little is known about her life, and consequently political, social and artistic movements across the political spectrum have projected their own values onto her?").

Created by Iridescent (talk). Self nom at 22:00, 27 August 2009 (UTC)

  • "1885" gives the period; "in England" would just look silly, while "the funeral service which began in Southwark and proceeded on foot for approximately 12 miles (19 km) to Isleworth" would be awkward and anything else would be inaccurate; "occupation" is completely irrelevant to the subject. Have you even read the article? – iridescent 12:20, 28 August 2009 (UTC)
  • I fail too see the problem in calling her an "English nursemaid" or something, and I also have to wonder about how it would spoil the hook. Dahn (talk) 13:06, 28 August 2009 (UTC)
  • Personally, I think "English nursemaid" or similar is far too misleading; although she worked as a nursemaid to her sister, it implies an employment relationship. Since the whole significance of Ayres is that the media fabricated a past for her in which she was an employee of the Chandlers rather than a relative, we shouldn't be perpetuating that. This was 19th century Surrey; women didn't have occupations in the sense they do today. – iridescent 13:15, 28 August 2009 (UTC)
  • Look, as I am writing this, the very first line of the article says " was a household assistant and nursemaid to the family of her brother-in-law and sister, Henry and Mary Ann Chandler." We don't really perpetuate anything by mentioning that's what she worked as, whatever else she was. but if that's really a problem, since the entire issue is supposedly complicated, and since it's not that interesting that 10,000 people went to a funeral of someone whom the reader can't say right away should or shouldn't have received that sort of tribute (my own gut reaction was "so?"), why not make that into a hook? By "that" I mean the way in which someone rescuing her relatives was made to look like someone rescuing her employers. Dahn (talk) 13:28, 28 August 2009 (UTC)

J. Vivian, Jr. and Company Building

Created by Andrew Jameson (talk). Self nom at 19:27, 27 August 2009 (UTC)

Kirātārjunīya

  • ... that Kirātārjunīya, a Sanskrit epic by Bharavi, is noted for its verbal complexity, including the verse "na nonanunno nunnono nānā nānānanā nanu / nunno'nunno nanunneno nānena nunnanunnanut"?

Created by Shreevatsa (talk). Self nom at 17:16, 27 August 2009 (UTC)

  • Comment: It is not necessary to include the full verse; I only chose it because the long string of nnnns might be eye-catching and intriguing. Something like "na nonanunno nunnono… nunnanunnanut" might do as well, and it is also fine to simply drop all the diacritic marks (the article name itself could be "Kiratarjuniya"). Or the hook could mention the actual details: "a verse that is 'palindromic from every direction'?", "verses consisting of just one consonant?", "verses that are mirror images of each other?", etc. Shreevatsa (talk) 11:04, 28 August 2009 (UTC)
  • Comment Not that this is anything to go by, but some of the symbols don't show on my display (the ones after "nanu" and "nunnanunnanut"). The regular diacritics, however, are fine. Dahn (talk) 13:03, 28 August 2009 (UTC)
  • Oh I see. Those two were just end-of-line markers; I've replaced them with the English '/' — best not to have anything that wouldn't be visible to everyone. (The other diacritics used, 'ā' and 'ī', seem to be present in most common English fonts.) Thanks for pointing it out, Shreevatsa (talk) 15:36, 28 August 2009 (UTC)

Yokomo

Created by Donnie Park (talk). Self nom at 16:37, 27 August 2009 (UTC)

Aoyagi Metals Company

Created by Donnie Park (talk). Self nom at 15:55, 27 August 2009 (UTC)


Jørn Holme

Created by Geschichte (talk). Self nom at 14:46, 27 August 2009 (UTC) accurate hook and long enough  Francium12  16:20, 27 August 2009 (UTC)

Henry Gerber, Society for Human Rights

... that Henry Gerber founded the first gay rights organization in the U<style type="text/css"> /* Fix the sidebar's position while you scroll */ div { /* Using the attribute selector hides this from IE */ position: fixed; height: 100%; /* If you shrink the browser too small, the */ overflow: auto; /* side column will become scrollable, so stuff */ z-index: 2; /* is always accessible, albeit ugly */ } #p-logo { /* Make logo inline with other divs */ position:static; } #column-one { /* Sidebar column start at the top screen edge */ padding-top: 0; } #p-lang .pBody ul{ /* Sets the language box to a fixed height and */ height: 6em; /* scrollable if too long to fit on screen */ overflow: auto; } /* Fix the background image, too, so it looks nice as you scroll */ body { background-attachment: fixed; } /* Fix the footer so it looks nice and doesn't overlap the sidebar */ #footer { margin-left: 13.6em; border-left: solid 1px rgb(250, 189, 35); -moz-border-radius-topleft: 1em; -moz-border-radius-bottomleft: 1em; } /* Keep personal links at the top right */ #p-personal { width:100%; white-space:nowrap; padding:0 0 0 0; margin:0; position:absolute; left:0px; top:0px; z-index: 0; border: none; background: none; overflow: visible; line-height: 1.2em; } #p-personal h5 { display:none; } #p-personal .portlet, #p-personal .pBody { padding:0; margin:0; border: none; z-index:0; overflow: visible; background: none; } /* this is the ul contained in the portlet */ #p-personal ul { border: none; line-height: 1.4em; color: #2f6fab; padding: 0em 2em 0 3em; margin: 0; text-align: right; text-transform: lowercase; list-style: none; z-index:0; background: none; } #p-personal li { z-index:0; border:none; padding:0; display: inline; color: #2f6fab; margin-left: 1em; line-height: 1.2em; background: none; } #p-personal li a { text-decoration: none; color: #005896; padding-bottom: 0.2em; background: none; } #p-personal li a:hover { background-color: White; padding-bottom: 0.2em; text-decoration: none; } </style>nited States in 1924, only to see it destroyed in less than a year following accusations that it was a "strange sex cult"? self-nom. Gerber is just waiting for a non-controversial deletion of a redirect to be moved to article space. Society for Human Rights is, I think, a 5x expansion but I can't seem to figure out how to make DYKCheck work. Otto4711 (talk) 14:19, 27 August 2009 (UTC)

  • Henry Gerber is new enough because of F3.
  • Your monobook.js says 'User:Otto4711/DYKcheck.js' instead of 'User:Shubinator/DYKcheck.js'.
  • Your monobook.js appears to have prosesize installed correctly, so you could use prosesize to measure article length (DYKcheck is recommended instead, because it also checks for other problems.)
  • There are now 8409 bytes of prose as we define it. 8409/2098=4x.
  • The counter you used counts length, but it doesn't automate the removal of all the items we don't count. That's why we emphasize the word "prose", not total text. As WP:Did you know/DYKcheck#Counting prose characters without DYKcheck explains, "You'll probably make a mistake trying to count this way ..." At least you didn't count the entire article; that would be 15,788 characters. Art LaPella (talk) 07:35, 28 August 2009 (UTC)
  • I counted the main text including the lede and sections "Henry Gerber", "Founding the Society", "Demise", "Legacy" and "Footnotes", manually removing the TOC, section headers, "main article" line and reference indicators (and never counting the notes, references, external links or categories) and I come up with 11,174 both on my unofficial counter and the linked counter. Both count the pre-expansion at 2,048. I don't understand where the discrepancies are coming from that could account for a nearly 2,500 character discrepancy. No matter what I have on my monobook page I get no tool indicators Otto4711 (talk) 10:34, 28 August 2009 (UTC)
  • OK, I think I see the issue. When I click "DYK check" on the pre-expansion article I get 2098 but it appears to be counting three instances of "citation needed" and a blank line as prose. On the expanded article I'm getting 8409 but the tool is not counting the "Footnotes" section. That section should be included because that's readable text, not references. Including that section adds about another 1,100 characters to the count. Subtracting out incorrectly counted text from the starting point and adding the uncounted characters to the expansion takes the article over the 5x threshold.
  • Honestly I don't care about this as much as it may seem I do from the effort I'm putting in here. If I get credit for the SHR article or not it's all good. I just thought it would be cool to score a double. Otto4711 (talk) 10:52, 28 August 2009 (UTC)
    • Footnotes aren't formally mentioned on the list of things we don't consider "prose". However, WP:Did you know/DYKcheck does say "DYKcheck (or prosesizebytes, or prosesize, which give the same count) is the preferred method for counting characters in an article's prose, and usually carries the most weight at DYK, because it counts only the prose as defined by Did You Know rules, thus avoiding mistakes and providing an impartial settlement of disputed counting." I don't approve nominations, but it's been months since anyone has successfully argued that DYKcheck is wrong, because of footnotes or any other reason. Art LaPella (talk) 21:14, 28 August 2009 (UTC)
      • Apparently the creator of DYKcheck did not take into consideration that "footnotes", which are asides of readable prose that are broken out from the main text because, while interesting, are not necessarily directly on point, are not "notes" which serve as references. Nor did s/he contemplate that prose generated by templates like {{fact}}, which generates "" within the text, does not fall under the heading of "readable". The article is now at 10,272. The unexpanded version is 2,098 but DYKcheck is clearly counting three instances of "" as readable prose. Three such instances total 51 characters. These characters should not be considered in the pre-expansion article's count. Adjusting the count to reflect this, the pre-expansion article is 2047. 10272/2947 = 5.018 expansion. Blindly adhering to a character count because DYKcheck says so, despite reasonable arguments to the contrary, seems pedantic. Otto4711 (talk) 22:05, 28 August 2009 (UTC)
        • The DYKcheck counts are usually pretty accurate. The current count is 10,280 characters and the count for the version before you started editing was 2,098, which puts the expansion at almost 4.9x, putting you a mere 210 characters below 5x. You should have no problem meeting that with some additional details in the article. Alansohn (talk) 23:01, 28 August 2009 (UTC)
          • Do you believe that three instances of "" should be counted toward the readable prose count in the pre-expansion article, because DYKcheck doesn't exclude them? Otto4711 (talk) 23:20, 28 August 2009 (UTC)

Lazăr Şăineanu

Created by Dahn (talk). Self nom at 12:55, 27 August 2009 (UTC)

Since the article talks abouit naturalization, should not it be explicitly mentioned what his original citizenship was (or was he stateless)? Vmenkov (talk) 06:15, 28 August 2009 (UTC)
Technically, he was a non-emancipated Jew. He was a subject of the Romanian Kingdom (which is why he was conscripted supposed to be conscripted into the Army), but he was not a citizen with full rights. Dahn (talk) 08:16, 28 August 2009 (UTC)

Red Mahogany

Created by Poyt448 (talk). Self nom at 07:51, 27 August 2009 (UTC)

Australian Military Court

Created by Canley (talk). Self nom at 06:10, 27 August 2009 (UTC)

  • Comment Interesting hook! I think "challenged it" sounds a little vague, a reader may not be able to pick up what "it" is that is being challenged. I am not sure it is clear in the hook, that it was the constitutional validity that was being challenged. Perhaps a reword along the lines of ALT1... that in a case involving a sailor accused of "teabagging" a superior officer, the High Court of Australia ruled that the Australian Military Court was constitutionally invalid?

Taxco

  • ... that in Taxco during Holy Week some perform penance by carrying large crosses or bundles in procession in the town?

5x expanded by Thelmadatter (talk). Self nom at 01:56, 27 August 2009 (UTC)

... that in Taxco during Holy Week some perform penance by walking in procession with 40-50 kilo bundles of thorned blackberry canes on their backs for hours? (Id mention the other two brotherhood who carry 50kilo crosses and whip themselves periodically and those who walk for hours stooped over but that would make this too long.)AlejandroLinaresGarcia (talk) 14:27, 27 August 2009 (UTC)

Jenisch house

Created by Sebastian scha. (talk). Self nom at 04:05, 27 August 2009 (UTC)


Sverre Dick Henriksen

  • Comment: Quite unusual as he didn't work in Poland, and in general few people become honorary members of organizations.

Created by Geschichte (talk). Self nom at 10:26, 27 August 2009 (UTC)


Articles created/expanded on August 26

Nasutitermes corniger

Created by Smartse (talk). Self nom at 02:40, 28 August 2009 (UTC)

Note Any help reducing the number of red links in the article would be greatly appreciated. Smartse (talk) 02:40, 28 August 2009 (UTC)

Intimidator (roller coaster)

Created by FSUNolez06 (talk). Nominated by Patriarca12 (talk) at 00:01, 28 August 2009 (UTC)


Caney Lakes Recreation Area

Created by Billy Hathorn (talk). Self nom at 18:59, 27 August 2009 (UTC)

Ford ACT

Created by Maury Markowitz (talk). Self nom at 01:58, 27 August 2009 (UTC)

Fair enough, lets try this...
"... that Ford developed a people mover system known as ACT, but the only one to see service was built between a hotel and shopping mall on Ford-developed lands in Dearborn, MI?
As to the references, 5 majors and 20 inlines seems like more than enough for a 13 paragraph article. Maury Markowitz (talk) 14:07, 28 August 2009 (UTC)

Baila Mi Rumba

number-one song "Baila Mi Rumba"? Created by Jaespinoza (talk) 01:16, 27 August 2009 (UTC). Self nom at 01:15, 27 August 2009 (UTC)

2009 Upton Park riots

  • ... that supporters invaded the pitch on three occasions during a football match between West Ham United and Millwall in 2009?

Created by 03md (talk), PeeJay2K3 (talk). Nominated by 03md (talk) at 00:14, 27 August 2009 (UTC)

Curly Top (film)

5x expanded by Kathyrncelestewright (talk). Self nom at 23:15, 26 August 2009 (UTC)

Ramstad

Created by Geschichte (talk). Self nom at 21:37, 26 August 2009 (UTC)


Eddie Sweat

Created by Handicapper (talk). Self nom at 18:03, 26 August 2009 (UTC)

Reflections on copper lines

Created by Spinningspark (talk). Self nom at 16:45, 26 August 2009 (UTC)

  • Hook needs rewriting. A non-specialist might think of it as "Sun reflections on bare copper wires cause power lines in my home to vibrate at high frequency producing annoying sound" :-) Some jargon could be unavoidable, but confusion could be reduced here. Materialscientist (talk) 03:24, 27 August 2009 (UTC)
  • Come off it, "ringing" is carefully wikilinked to an article which makes clear it does not have the meaning you suggest. "Reflection" is the universally used term for these phenomena and the first line of the article (a signal travelling along an electrical transmission line will be partly, or wholly, reflected back in the opposite direction...) and the second para (this article is about signal reflections on electrically conducting lines...) make clear the meaning intended. To use a different term (do you have a suggestion?) will require the main article name to be piped, to explain the term will require more than the 150 characters allowed by DYK. SpinningSpark 07:34, 27 August 2009 (UTC)
I agree; besides, I recommend taking copper out of equation - it is quite rare in power lines, usually it's aluminum over steel core isn't it? Hell, a whole new generation identifies transmission lines with optic fiber :) NVO (talk) 08:01, 28 August 2009 (UTC)
Oh, what's the matter with you people, copper is a beautiful metal. Ok, I've changed the article title. SpinningSpark 11:01, 28 August 2009 (UTC)

Helga Karlsen

Helga Karlsen in 1935

Created by Lampman (talk). Self nom at 16:25, 26 August 2009 (UTC)

Torf-Einarr

5x expanded by DrKiernan (talk). Self nom at 14:46, 26 August 2009 (UTC)

Magnolia × soulangeana

5x expanded by Casliber (talk). Self nom at 14:15, 26 August 2009 (UTC)

Articles created/expanded on August 25

Ola Lindholm

Created by Theleftorium (talk). Self nom at 17:28, 28 August 2009 (UTC)


Sir Rory Mor's Horn

Created by Hotspur23 (talk), Celtus (talk). Self nom at 08:53, 28 August 2009 (UTC)

Lake Bistineau

Lake Bistineau

Created by Billy Hathorn (talk). Self nom at 14:47, 26 August 2009 (UTC)

Jewish cemetery in Chernivtsi

Created by Julia myasyshcheva (talk). Nominated by Chzz (talk) at 00:48, 26 August 2009 (UTC)

  • Date and length are Ok, but there is a major problems with references: we require at least one per paragraph; besides, ref. 1 is incomplete and hardly accessible, ref. 2 does not seem a "reliable source". Materialscientist (talk) 06:35, 26 August 2009 (UTC)
Comment I will speak to the article creator, and see if they can improve the refs.  Chzz  ►  07:52, 26 August 2009 (UTC)
...that the links for Austrian, Turkish and Romanian lead nowhere? - Biruitorul 01:15, 27 August 2009 (UTC)
Dabs fixed  Chzz  ►  04:27, 27 August 2009 (UTC)

File:Jewish cemetery Chernivtsi.JPG

Please consider adding the picture shown here to this DYK nomination, thanks (the pic was not available when I first nominated it)  Chzz  ►  19:01, 28 August 2009 (UTC)

Sicklefin lemon shark

5x expanded by Yzx (talk). Self nom at 23:45, 25 August 2009 (UTC)

  • As I understand it, most of what was left of the Tethys Sea (which had already been shrinking for quite some time then) literally closed up when Arabia, India, and parts of Italy collided with the rest of Eurasia. No part of it survived in the Indian Ocean. In any case "closure" is the wording used by the source. -- Yzx (talk) 18:41, 26 August 2009 (UTC)

Grini

Large expansion by Geschichte (talk). Self nom at 21:51, 25 August 2009 (UTC)

  • I looked it up at www.dictionary.com a while ago, and it says: "Although sometimes criticized as redundant on the grounds that “from” is implied by the word whence, the idiom from whence is old in the language, well established, and standard". I'm not a native speaker though, so anyone could and should brush up my language. Geschichte (talk) 21:45, 26 August 2009 (UTC)

De Eendracht, Anjum

Created/expanded by Mjroots (talk). Self nom at 20:35, 25 August 2009 (UTC)

Iron Duke class battleship

5x expanded by Parsecboy (talk). Self nom at 19:41, 25 August 2009 (UTC)

Beverley Randolph Mason

Gunston Hall School building at 1906 Florida Avenue, N.W. in the Dupont Circle neighborhood of Washington, D.C. The building is currently home to the National Museum of American Jewish Military History.

Created/5x expanded by Caponer (talk). Self nom at 17:05, 25 August 2009 (UTC)

Fiddler's Reach Fog Signal

Fiddler's Reach Fog Signal, with beam to hold bell, in August 2009

Created by Doncram (talk), Jameslwoodward (talk). Self nom at 14:40, 25 August 2009 (UTC)

I'm fine with the alternate suggestion, it's better, thanks! doncram (talk) 01:47, 26 August 2009 (UTC)
I suggest correcting the link to bell to point to whichever specific bell is meant. Perhaps bell (instrument)? orangefreak 16:47, 28 August 2009 (UTC)
Thanks! Done. doncram (talk) 23:01, 28 August 2009 (UTC)

Dalarö wreck, Bartmann jug

Bartmann jugs in situ on the Dalarö wreck

Created by Peter Isotalo (talk). Self nom at 13:54, 25 August 2009 (UTC)

Actually the references need a little work as there isn't one per paragraph at the moment.
Fixed.
Peter 06:44, 27 August 2009 (UTC)

Rizal Monument

Rizal Monument in Manila

  • ... that a tall stainless steel pylon was added to the Rizal Monument in Manila in 1961, but removed a year later?

Created by TheCoffee (talk). Self nom at 12:26, 25 August 2009 (UTC)

Yummy Dough

  • ... that two German girls thought about creating edible dough?
  • ALT1:... that two German girls thought about creating edible dough after tasting ordinary dough and finding it horrible?
  • ALT2:... that Yummy Dough is the first commercially distributed dough that has been designed to be eaten as well as played with?
  • Comment: Previously incorrectly deleted at AFD (one of too many examples where WP:BEFORE was ignored). Recreated and expanded with multiple reliable sources. SoWhy 10:37, 25 August 2009 (UTC)

Created by Jiashwu (talk), SoWhy (talk). Self nom at 10:37, 25 August 2009 (UTC)

  • First two suggested hooks make no sense as dough is normally edible. Third one is okay, and in regards to the former AFD, the article appears to have sufficient sourcing to justify its existence now. However, the article currently reads a little like an advertisement, and I'm a bit reluctant to approve. Anyone else have an opinion? Gatoclass (talk) 13:18, 25 August 2009 (UTC)
  • (edit conflict) Yeah, you know, I'll use that "not a native speaker" excuse here. I wanted to point out the fact that dough is usually not meant to be eaten nor tastes good when someone does. As for the advertising part, I can assure you I am not an evil spammer but with that "not a native speaker" thing again it's of course possible that parts of it sound more spammy than intended. It's a wiki, you are all welcome to fix it ;-) Regards SoWhy 13:29, 25 August 2009 (UTC)
  • I concur. The article reads like a press release issued by the company that created the product. Just because references exist and can be cited doesn't necessarily make a subject notable enough to warrant an article. MovieMadness (talk) 13:25, 25 August 2009 (UTC)
  • I think that, for "dough", read modelling clay. Play-Doh pretty much made the use of the word dough a standard for substances that children play with (but not eat!). Referring to an edible modelling clay could make for a more interesting hook, too. Maedin\ 13:27, 25 August 2009 (UTC)

Wellingsbüttel Manor

Frontside (2006)

Created by Fifat (talk). Nominated by Sebastian scha. (talk) at 20:38, 27 August 2009 (UTC)

Articles created/expanded on August 24

Surface integrity

  • ... that the term surface integrity was first coined by Michael Field and John F. Kahles in 1964 and defined as the nature of the surface condition of a workpiece after being affected by manufacturing processes?

Created by Wizard191 (talk). Self nom at 22:24, 28 August 2009 (UTC)


Louis Gaston Mayila

Created by Himalayan Explorer (talk). and Everyking (talk).Self nom at 11:50, 27 August 2009 (UTC)

Med Hondo

Created by Belovedfreak (talk). Self nom at 13:03, 26 August 2009 (UTC)

  • Article length > 1500 chars. Creation date < 5 days ago. Hook length < 200 chars. Great to have an African francophone as a DYK subject. There is an inline citation of the hook fact, and the cited source is a nice secondary source, rather than some IMdB-esque article. So it more than likely passes DYK review. But I suppose my only little question would be whether inline citation of a fact in a filmography is enough. The article proper doesn't mention Shrek at all. You'd have to scroll all the way to the bottom of the page to find the DYK fact. I wonder if other, more experienced DYK reviewers would comment on this?
(Also, and this doesn't derail the nomination at all because there are in fact many other sources, one of the more-used sources is the subject's own webpage, which would seem to be an invalid source under WP:SELFPUB.) CzechOut | 17:45, 26 August 2009 (UTC)
That's a fair point. It's kind of a work in progress and I'd overlooked that, but I agree with you, so I've added a sentence specifically mentioning Shrek. As far as I can tell from WP:SELFPUB, using his own website is ok — I don't think I've gone against any of the five points listed there. Thanks for your comments. --BelovedFreak 20:14, 26 August 2009 (UTC)

Dorcheat Bayou

Created by Billy Hathorn (talk). Self nom at 18:58, 25 August 2009 (UTC)

Giuseppe Ricciotti

  • ... that Giuseppe Ricciotti's famous book "Life of Jesus Christ" was edited in 1941 and reedited and reprinted several times?

Created by A ntv (talk). Self nom at 17:51, 25 August 2009 (UTC)

ALT1... that in 1934 Giuseppe Ricciotti published the translations in Italian of sermons of Cardinal Michael von Faulhaber in favour of the Hebrews? A ntv (talk) 06:17, 27 August 2009 (UTC)

Lac-des-Écorces, Quebec

Created by P199 (talk). Self nom at 16:04, 25 August 2009 (UTC)

Church of Heavenly Peace, Fuzhou

Church of Heavenly Peace

Created by GnuDoyng (talk). Self nom at 05:07, 25 August 2009 (UTC)

Z. Marcas

Created by Scartol (talk). Self nom at 00:46, 25 August 2009 (UTC)

Note: This can be verified with an online source. Scartol • Tok 00:46, 25 August 2009 (UTC)
  • Basics are good. Aricle > 1500 chars, Hook <200 chars, creation date fine. But hook not supported by inline citation. I'm not sure of the right way to inline source a bit from Wikisource (which is what the above online source is), but the article makes no attempt to source the hook at all. WP:CITE doesn't mention WIkisource, and the guidelines at WP:Wikisource seem to contradict WP:CITE, in that WP:Wikisource doesn't provide for specific citation of the work. Nevertheless, WP:CITE does say, "Add your source even if you are unsure how to format it." CzechOut | 18:29, 26 August 2009 (UTC)
  • I'm really confused. this note in the "Writing and publication" section of the article refers to the book by Sandars, as well as two other texts with the same information. The Sandars book was first published in 1905, and the OCLC information is available in the References part of the article. What am I missing? Scartol • Tok 21:38, 26 August 2009 (UTC)
The hook fact must be cited in the article with an inline citation, since inline citations are used to support specific statements in an article. The hook fact must have an inline citation right after it since the fact is an extraordinary claim; citing the hook fact at the end of the paragraph is not acceptable.
The exact wording of your hook is mentioned in the article in the lead, where it receives no inline citation. The Sanders citation to which you refer establishes where the character of Marcas got his name, but it doesn't precisely state your hook, which insists that the tailor's sign inspired the writing of the novelette. Again, the language of the hook must be immediately followed by an inline citation. Thus, you could use something like:
ALT1: ... that the novelette Z. Marcas has been described "as a vehicle for a characteristic Balzacian whimsy"?
although some editors seem to prefer that quotations not be in hooks. Thus, the following might be more appropriate:
ALT2: ... that the novelette Z. Marcas was said to have accurately predicted the French Revolution of 1848?
Since your article is pretty well-sourced, there may be additional facts which could be used without altering the article at all. Still, if we proceed with one of the alternates, you'll still want to somehow cite your Wikisource, as it's a great source that adds extra verifiability to the claim in the lead. CzechOut | 01:31, 27 August 2009 (UTC)
Well, how about this?
ALT3: ... that French author Honoré de Balzac chose the title character's name for his 1840 novelette Z. Marcas from a sign outside a tailor's shop in Paris?
I revised the wording in the lead so that it matches this alt hook. Scartol • Tok 11:30, 27 August 2009 (UTC)

Mythographus Homericus

Created by Wetman (talk). Self nom at 23:15, 24 August 2009 (UTC)

Stefano Bardini

Created by Wetman (talk). Self nom at 22:56, 24 August 2009 (UTC)

  • "many well-known works of Renaissance art"? This had better be a really well-known piece that an average reader of the main page would know. Otherwise this hook doesn't work. Any examples with a picture to show on the main page? --74.14.19.4 (talk) 06:37, 26 August 2009 (UTC)

Wrinkle-faced Bat

  • ... that the Wrinkle-faced Bat is able to bite 20% harder than other bats of a similar size allowing it to eat a wider range of fruits?

5x expanded by Smartse (talk). Self nom at 21:44, 24 August 2009 (UTC)

Primary line constants

Created by Spinningspark (talk). Self nom at 21:08, 24 August 2009 (UTC)

Scutching, Heckling (flax)

Created by Loggie (talk). Self nom at 14:45, 24 August 2009 (UTC)

Articles created/expanded on August 23

Omar Doom

Created by Scanlan (talk). Nominated by Hunter Kahn (talk) at 13:44, 28 August 2009 (UTC)


Triangle (The Beau Brummels album)

Created by Gongshow (talk). Self nom at 06:47, 28 August 2009 (UTC)

Mercury-Atlas 8

  • Comment: It was surprisingly hard to find a hook, but I felt "...was the first ever uninteresting spaceflight?" might be a bit silly.

5x expanded by Shimgray (talk). Self nom at 03:14, 28 August 2009 (UTC)

The New Yorkers

  • ... that the 1930 musical The New Yorkers received critics for bad taste, and its song "Love for Sale" was subsequently banned from the radio?

5x expanded by JeanColumbia (talk), Oceanh (talk). Self nom at 00:13, 28 August 2009 (UTC)

2009 Big Ten Conference football season

5x expanded by TonyTheTiger (talk). Self nom at 04:06, 27 August 2009 (UTC)


Euanthe sanderiana

Euanthe sanderiana, a proposed new national flower of the Philippines
Euanthe sanderiana, a proposed new national flower of the Philippines

Created by Kguirnela (talk). Self nom at 05:36, 26 August 2009 (UTC)

Motoko Sasaki

  • ... that Japanese erotic film actress Motoko Sasaki made her screen debut at the advanced age, for the field, of 29, and won a Best Actress award at 36?

Created by Dekkappai (talk). Self nom at 19:29, 25 August 2009 (UTC)

Dorcheat Historical Association Museum

The Dorcheat Historical Association Museum in Minden, Louisiana, preserves the culture of the Dixie Overland Highway joining the American South with the Pacific Coast.

Created by Billy Hathorn (talk). Self nom at 19:19, 25 August 2009 (UTC)

  • Article length: >1500 chars. Date: fine. But hook is 203 characters, which immediately brings out the big orange X. Worse, in my view, is that the inline citation for the hook comes from an invalid source, which violates WP:SELFPUB. A brochure printed by the subject of the article is a little sketchy for my tastes. Yes, self-published sources may be used as sources of information about themselves, but only so long as "the material is not unduly self-serving". The whole point of most brochures is that they are in fact advertisements, and therefore obviously self-serving.
Another question surrounds the basic information that the hook conveys. Is the most interesting thing about this topic a simple description of what the subject is? Surely there's something "hookier" to say about it. The article would greatly benefit of an injection of fresh, secondary sources. A Google search does reveal newspaper articles, which might be of benefit to the article. If the nominator is local to the area, he or she might also be able to find sources not on the internet.
I'm not saying that another hook couldn't be found, or that the article couldn't be improved in time for this DYK nomination to be reassessed, but the present hook is unsuitable both for reasons of length and attribution. CzechOut | 02:09, 27 August 2009 (UTC)
Furthermore, I think that your nomination of Germantown Colony and Museum on the same day runs the risk of covering some of the same ground in too short of time. If the Germantown Colony article is approved for DYK, this one should, at least, not be approved for the same day's DYK, per WP:Did you know/Guide#Guidance for "prep area" editors. We should be trying to "include items from varied fields of interest, time periods, and parts of the world". CzechOut | 02:21, 27 August 2009 (UTC)
I don't know how to measure, but I think the article is above 1,500 characters.Billy Hathorn (talk) 19:04, 27 August 2009 (UTC)
CzechOut knows that, so please read his other objections. ">1500 chars" means "greater than 1500 characters" (see Greater than sign). If you want, I think I could install DYKcheck into your account. I've never done it before except for myself, but I believe I could just create User:Billy Hathorn/monobook.js with the line importScript('User:Shubinator/DYKcheck.js'); //DYKcheck tool
Art LaPella (talk) 07:35, 28 August 2009 (UTC)

Sapta Puri

Created/expanded by Nvvchar (talk). Self nom at 09:09, 25 August 2009 (UTC)

Rock Creek Canyon Bridge

Rock Creek Canyon Bridge

Created by AndrewEnns (talk). Nominated by Maedin (talk) at 22:42, 24 August 2009 (UTC)

Loews Philadelphia Hotel

Created by Medvedenko (talk). Self nom at 20:06, 24 August 2009 (UTC)

Cengiz Topel

Created by CeeGee (talk). Self nom at 20:20, 23 August 2009 (UTC)

  • 18px - foreign language ref accepted in good faith.Ed (TalkContribs) 03:48, 24 August 2009 (UTC)Next time I'll Google translate them.
  • : - There are numerous doubts if these foreign and kinda pro-Turkish sources are really considered wp:rs. However, it would be ok if some rewording job could be done in order to secure neutrality. My main objections are focused on the phrases:
  1. "Turkey's military intervention to protect Turkish Cypriots" (see: Turkish occupation of Cyprus, seems the real reasons are a bit more complicated),
  2. "where they tortured and murdered him." (Did third part non-Turkish sources confirm that?)Alexikoua (talk) 14:10, 24 August 2009 (UTC)
reply to 1) Please read carefully Cyprus Navy and Marine Police#Combat Actions of 1964. The article is about the incidents in 1964 and not in 1974 what you mean.
to 2) I would respect it when you could bring a reliable source saying he was welcome.CeeGee (talk) 18:27, 24 August 2009 (UTC)
  1. Please read Cyprus_intercommunal_violence#Intercommunal_violence, about the 1964 events, which contradict the specific reason listed on the article (a carefull rewording is needed).
  2. As far as there are not third part sources about what happened after the planecrash I suggest to follow carefull wp:npov description.Alexikoua (talk) 20:03, 24 August 2009 (UTC)

Market Forces (The Spectacular Spider-Man)

Created by SuperFlash101 (talk). Self nom at 17:56, 23 August 2009 (UTC)

Peace of Canterbury

  • Comment: What are the rules on Wiktionary links in the hook? Clod is not really worthy of an encyclopaedic article, but at the same time it might be too archaic a term for many to understand.

Created by Lampman (talk). Self nom at 17:53, 23 August 2009 (UTC)

Suggest a footnote in the article to explain this archaic term. Wiktionary isn't helpful in this instance. --74.14.19.4 (talk) 06:46, 26 August 2009 (UTC)
Would not that be WP:OR? Anyway, what is confusing about it? Lampman (talk) 17:35, 26 August 2009 (UTC)
Or archaic? I've called them "dirt clods" since childhood (I'm American). I found this sense of "clod" in several dictionaries, and none of them called it archaic or obsolete. Art LaPella (talk) 23:12, 26 August 2009 (UTC)

Construction of the Trans-Alaska Pipeline System

Created by JKBrooks85 (talk). Self nom at 12:32, 23 August 2009 (UTC)

  • Good to go. Date, length, hook fact and cite all check out - and very well done on the lengthy and (IMO) well written article! --Saalstin (talk) 16:58, 23 August 2009 (UTC) Whilst I don't think it needs to be called 'disgusting', 74.14.19.4 is correct, and the content dates from long before August 20th when it was extracted. My apologies for missing this when ticking it --Saalstin (talk) 18:32, 26 August 2009 (UTC)
  • Can I suggest adding that splits are verboten to the rules? It was a split asked for by a GA review, and nothing harmful was intended. If you want to waste time checking my DYKs, feel free. JKBrooks85 (talk) 11:23, 28 August 2009 (UTC)

Chrystian Piotr Aigner

Created by Nihil novi (talk). Self nom at 11:33, 23 August 2009 (UTC)

Older nominations

Articles created/expanded on August 22

Ihab Ali Nawawi

... that American cab driver Ihab Ali Nawawi crashed a Sabre jet belonging to Osama bin Laden into a Sudanese sand dune? Sherurcij 01:22, 28 August 2009 (UTC)

Martin Demaine

Created by David Eppstein (talk). Self nom at 20:03, 27 August 2009 (UTC). Sorry for the late nomination, but I only today finished expanding the article above 1500 characters of text after creating it on August 22. The "youngest ever" part of the hook is sourced in the article on Erik D.

Sheridan, Oregon

5x expanded by Aboutmovies (talk). Self nom at 10:18, 26 August 2009 (UTC)


Louisiana Political Museum and Hall of Fame

Created by Billy Hathorn (talk). Self nom at 23:19, 23 August 2009 (UTC)

Youssef Seddik (revolutionary)

Created by Dr. Blofeld (talk) and Al Ameer son (talk) . Self nom at 18:23, 23 August 2009 (UTC) Note that Dr. Blofeld has abandoned his old account and replaced with me so any DYK credit here and below should be accredited to me... Himalayan Explorer 18:24, 23 August 2009 (UTC)

White pox disease

Created by Mattisse (talk). Self nom at 20:30, 22 August 2009 (UTC)

Mansfield State Historic Site

Created by Billy Hathorn (talk). Self nom at 19:03, 22 August 2009 (UTC)

Robin Hoare

  • ... that Robin Hoare received the Albert Medal for removing depth charges from HM Motor Launch 356 after its engine room exploded, despite the flames, thus preventing a further explosion?

Created by Dormskirk (talk). Nominated by Jujutacular (talk) at 17:26, 22 August 2009 (UTC)

  • Article length and date are fine. Hook is referenced with an inline citation, but that citation (#11) should likely be moved to the end of the quote from the London Gazette. I'm not wild about the wording of the hook, because it's a little unwieldy. Might I suggest something punchier?
ALT 1: ... that Robin Hoare received the Albert Medal for removing depth charges from a ship while it was on fire? CzechOut | 03:18, 27 August 2009 (UTC)
I can support that alternative. I do understand what you mean, the original is bit unwieldy now that you mention it. Jujutacular contribs 08:04, 27 August 2009 (UTC)
I have moved the citation as suggested; the alternative looks good to me Dormskirk (talk) 20:46, 27 August 2009 (UTC)

Artillery of Japan

Created by PHG (talk). Self nom at 16:15, 22 August 2009 (UTC)

I support the alternative. The wording is slightly confusing in the first hook. Jujutacular contribs 17:55, 22 August 2009 (UTC)

Mayor of Gibraltar

Created by Gibmetal77 (talk). Self nom at 12:32, 22 August 2009 (UTC)

Sorry, I don't see anything unusual or interesting about this, since mayoral appointments usually follow a similar format. Does the appointment give any unusual or interesting rights or duties? That might be better-qualified for DYK. Rodhullandemu 00:17, 23 August 2009 (UTC)
If you look at the article you can see this is a new thing as the Mayor had to be appointed from within Parliament. I hope this helps... Thanks, --Gibmetal 77 01:05, 23 August 2009 (UTC)


Articles created/expanded on August 21

Fuzhou Tanka (ethnic group)

Created by Luhungnguong (talk). Self nom at 02:53, 25 August 2009 (UTC)

Charles Durrett

Charles Durrett in August, 2009

Created by Doncram (talk). Self nom at 01:02, 25 August 2009 (UTC)

Mount Hope Estate

Created by Cmadler (talk). Nominated by Niagara (talk) at 16:59, 24 August 2009 (UTC)

Samuel Wilbert Tucker

Created by AbbyKelleyite (talk). Self nom at 13:44, 24 August 2009 (UTC)

Ellisland Farm, Dumfries

Robert Burns

Created by Rosser1954 (talk). Nominated by PFHLai (talk) at 14:18, 23 August 2009 (UTC)

Transport in Hamburg

Created by Sebastian scha. (talk). Self nom at 12:28, 22 August 2009 (UTC)

Note: the article was moved from my userspace without clearing the page history before. There are entries for March 2009 with no connection to this article. Ty. Sebastian scha. (talk) 12:28, 22 August 2009 (UTC)

Is there are more interesting hook? The hook could apply to transport in any major city Francium12 (talk) 09:34, 23 August 2009 (UTC)

  • Sure it is!
  • Steve: nice work. I'm going to give this a provisional for now, at least until the {{expand section}} tags can be removed. There also seems to be unfinished thoughts in the article, like "Long distance bus lines start at the central bus station (German: Zentraler Omnibusbahnhof Hamburg)." Well, where do they go? etc etc. Cheers, —Ed (TalkContribs) 14:38, 24 August 2009 (UTC)
  • Thank you, Stephan. Ed: I expanded the sentence about the bus station a little bit, but I really don't see why the {{expand section}} tags are not wanted? For me, it is a hint, that there is more and the article lacks some elements (like a section for bicycles totally, public bus transport, general freight data for the rail way, or a sentence more about the Elbe river). This is not a GA review, but thanks for your review and opinion. Sebastian scha. (talk) 15:33, 24 August 2009 (UTC)
Note to Sebastian: We don't feature on the Main Page any articles carrying problem tags. Nothing to do with DYK or GA review. --74.14.19.4 (talk) 00:38, 25 August 2009 (UTC)
I find that rather surprising. Not only does it not correspond to my experience, I also think it rather troubling. Why would we disadvantage articles for being clear about their deficiencies when we allow developing news stories like Naro-1 or fluff pieces like Stefanía Fernández? It's not as if this article is an NPOV bomb, or a stub - it's just that it is a potentially large topic that has not been exhaustively covered yet. And neither completeness nor tag-freeness are listed in any DYK criteria I have seen so far. --Stephan Schulz (talk) 17:59, 25 August 2009 (UTC)
Okay, I expanded the tagged sections, and deleted the tags. And ALT1 is my favored hook. (I don't want to start a discussion about these tags in articles here.) Sebastian scha. (talk) 19:39, 25 August 2009 (UTC)

List of Hospital ships sunk in World War I

Created by Esemono (talk). Self nom at 10:35, 21 August 2009 (UTC)

Llandovery Castle seen on a 1914 postcard

Britannic seen on a 1914 postcard

Britannic sinking 21 November 1916

Gloucester Castle sinking

Harvard Beats Yale 29-29

Created by MichaelQSchmidt (talk). Self nom at 08:09, 22 August 2009 (UTC)

As implied by the the rules, the hook needs a link to the new article. --Allen3  09:22, 22 August 2009 (UTC)
  • Well, the article length, creation date, hook length, and inline citation for at least ALT 1 do check out. But I think the article is a bit unfocussed, as it gives way more attention to the game than it does to the documentary. There are a lot more sources out there, which this article could use to improve its coverage of the documentary itself. Still, the DYK nomination is unlikely to be impeded by this objection. I suppose I'm not prepared to give this thing a tick mark yet because I'm really not crazy about either hook. Both are quite indirect. How about:
ALT 2 ... that the documentary Harvard Beats Yale 29-29 gets its name from an actual headline in the Harvard Crimson?
or
ALT 3 ... that the documentary Harvard Beats Yale 29-29 tells the story of a football game that has been called the most famous in Ivy League history? CzechOut | 00:55, 25 August 2009 (UTC)
I edited three of these four hooks to change the wording from "is considered the most famous..." (or just "is the most famous...") to "has been called the most famous..." There's a huge difference... --Orlady (talk) 01:13, 25 August 2009 (UTC)
Wow! I am quite pleased with both ALT 2 and ALT 3. Thank you all for your input and sugestions. And yes, I will continue tweaking the article to expand on the documentary. There's always room for improvement. Thank you, MichaelQSchmidt (talk) 06:45, 25 August 2009 (UTC)

Germantown Colony and Museum

Created by Billy Hathorn (talk). Self nom at 02:42, 22 August 2009 (UTC)

  • The pictures made the article hard to read and cluttered it up so I put them in a gallery. Otherwise, it looks good so far but the sentence containing the "utopia" fact used in the hook needs to have a reference directly at its end. Regards SoWhy 11:04, 25 August 2009 (UTC)

Natural Selection (The Spectacular Spider-Man)

Created by SuperFlash101 (talk). Self nom at 17:56, 21 August 2009 (UTC)

  • Changed "it's" to "its" because nobody can ever get that right for some reason. Ten Pound Hammer, his otters and a clue-bat • 17:58, 21 August 2009 (UTC)

Feed Jake

Created by TenPoundHammer (talk). Self nom at 17:21, 21 August 2009 (UTC)

Believed by whom? DS (talk) 00:16, 22 August 2009 (UTC)
Source 2 implies that the gay community believed so. "…and those who watch it in heavy rotation on cable's Country Music Videos channel may see it differently than do some folks at bars and clubs frequented mostly by gay men and lesbians." Is that enough to change it to "believed by the gay community"? Ten Pound Hammer, his otters and a clue-bat • 12:08, 22 August 2009 (UTC)
Perhaps you could change the hook to "believed by some" and then footnote the claim in the article to be clear about who "some" are. - Tim1965 (talk) 13:06, 22 August 2009 (UTC)
I changed the hook to "believed by the gay community" per the citation; the article now says the gay community believed so. Ten Pound Hammer, his otters and a clue-bat • 13:34, 22 August 2009 (UTC)

The Play of the Weather (Play)

Created by Minirenaissance (talk). Nominated by WikiDan61 (talk) at 14:08, 21 August 2009 (UTC)

Doesn't "can be seen" sound a bit weasely? And the way "allegory" is used could cause confusion: the Catholic playwright is not allegorised or allegorical. And 1533 is a little late for "medieval" England. I suggest instead:
... that The Play of the Weather by the Catholic playwright John Heywood is a plea for religious tolerance after the Reformation in the form of an allegory?
Better? Srnec (talk) 01:47, 28 August 2009 (UTC)

Ma-ubin

  • ... that an ancient pagoda on the Toe River in Ma-ubin, Burma, fell in 2002 due to river erosion and had to be rebuilt?

5x expanded by Dr. Blofeld (talk). Self nom at 10:41, 21 August 2009 (UTC)

Fernando Núñez de Lara

Created by Srnec (talk). Self nom at 04:47, 21 August 2009 (UTC)

1st Special Squadron

Created by Esemono (talk). Self nom at 04:45, 21 August 2009 (UTC)

Interactions (The Spectacular Spider-Man)

5x expanded by SuperFlash101 (talk). Self nom at 03:01, 21 August 2009 (UTC)

  • What? There was no content in the previous page, how is this not enough? No prose expansion? It had a small intro and skeleton content before, I don't see how this isn't enough.... The Flash 16:00, 23 August 2009 (UTC)
  • Scratch that, checked and unfortunately you're right. Sucks, too, because I didn't even know someone had created the page when I wrote it '__' The Flash 16:05, 23 August 2009 (UTC)


Alexis Copello

Alexis Copello at Meeting Areva on 17 July 2009

Created by 121.45.166.122 (talk). Nominated by Jeff G. (talk) at 15:03, 24 August 2009 (UTC)

Articles created/expanded on August 20

Claire Curran

5x expanded by JoRoFo (talk). Self nom at 18:35, 23 August 2009 (UTC)

Giveamanakick

  • ... that Giveamanakick's live performances involved gas masks and streamers and one of their albums was said to be "something akin to being battered round the head with a plank of wood for half an hour"?

Created by Candlewicke (talk). Self nom at 07:17, 23 August 2009 (UTC)

Waviness

Created by Wizard191 (talk). Self nom at 17:03, 22 August 2009 (UTC)

Celebration of Mexican political anniversaries in 2010

Created by Thelmadatter (talk). Self nom at 01:15, 21 August 2009 (UTC)

Kevin Lewis (American football)

  • ALT1:... that in his first career start, Kevin Lewis recorded his first career sack?

5x expanded by Giants27 (talk). Self nom at 23:46, 20 August 2009 (UTC)

Acharius Medal

  • ... that although the Acharius Medal is now awarded for lifetime achievement in lichenology, the medal's original purpose has been lost?

created and nominated by DragonflySixtyseven (talk) 20:26, 20 August 2009 (UTC)

Too short at 912 characters, expand to at least 1500. orangefreak 21:17, 20 August 2009 (UTC)

Victor Cook

Created by SuperFlash101 (talk). Self nom at 20:12, 20 August 2009 (UTC)

Alexander Gordon Lyle

Created by Kumioko (talk). Self nom at 17:44, 20 August 2009 (UTC)

Currently too short at 1278 characters, the minimum is 1500. Block quotes are not included for prose size, so the citation text is not being included in this count. orangefreak 18:10, 20 August 2009 (UTC)
 Done I added some more text so it should be long enough now. --Kumioko (talk) 12:39, 21 August 2009 (UTC)

Dallas Municipal Building

5x expanded by Dfwcre8tive (talk). Self nom at 16:03, 20 August 2009 (UTC)

Too old to be considered a new article, and expansion is only 2217/530 = 4.2x. Continue expanding. orangefreak 17:00, 20 August 2009 (UTC)

2nd Arizona Territorial Legislature

Created by Allen3 (talk). Self nom at 15:40, 20 August 2009 (UTC)

List of Supermarine Spitfire survivors

Created by Thruxton (talk). Self nom at 13:55, 20 August 2009 (UTC)

Prose length only 632 characters, much too short. Bulleted text does not count for prose length as we consider it, so de-bulleting will absolutely push this over the 1500 character minumum. orangefreak 17:03, 20 August 2009 (UTC)
 Done Thruxton (talk) 18:16, 20 August 2009 (UTC)
ALT1 - ... that out of the remaining Supermarine Spitfires, the RAF Memorial Flight Mk IIa P7350 is the only Battle of Britain survivor that is still flying? —Ed (TalkContribs) 23:42, 20 August 2009 (UTC)
As I noted on your talk page, your edit has been reverted, and other editors of the page have objected to the debulleting. I suggest attempting to reach a consensus on the talk page. orangefreak 15:38, 21 August 2009 (UTC)
As the editor that objected to the debulleting can I ask that you link to the policy/guideline on this as I occasionaly submit DYK noms myself. The article could be debulleted to get it through DYK with the formatting reinstated later but I think that would be condidered 'gaming the system'. I should note that this article is a recent copy/paste WP:SPLIT from Supermarine Spitfire and very little new text has been added. Notwithstanding, I would like to see it make DYK using WP:COMMONSENSE. Nimbus (Cumulus nimbus floats by) 23:09, 22 August 2009 (UTC)

Torbjørn Mork, Karl Evang

Created by Geschichte (talk). Self nom at 10:33, 20 August 2009 (UTC)

Jack Tenney

Created by Wehwalt (talk). Self nom at 09:14, 20 August 2009 (UTC)

Hitchcon

Created by ISD (talk). Self nom at 08:03, 20 August 2009 (UTC)

Cabot's Pueblo Museum

Created by PMDrive1061 (talk). Self nom at 07:44, 20 August 2009 (UTC)

Committee for Settling of Place Names

Created by HerkusMonte (talk), Piotrus (talk). Nominated by Skäpperöd (talk) at 14:05, 25 August 2009 (UTC)

Henri-Georges Clouzot

5x expanded by Andrzejbanas (talk). Self nom at 05:35, 20 August 2009 (UTC)

Hekerui (talk) 15:04, 24 August 2009 (UTC)

Enfants

Created by M.nelson (talk). Self nom at 05:00, 20 August 2009 (UTC)

Tohjiro

Created by Cherryblossom1982 (talk). Self nom at 00:30, 22 August 2009 (UTC)

Articles created/expanded on August 19

Dagenham Roundhouse

Created by Chzz (talk). Self nom at 00:38, 24 August 2009 (UTC)

Gus Hurdle

Created by GiantSnowman (talk), Jimbo online (talk). Self nom at 21:20, 23 August 2009 (UTC)

Krasiczyn Palace

Firearms of Japan

Created by PHG (talk). Self nom at 20:41, 20 August 2009 (UTC)

Ronnie Tod

Created by AustralianRupert (talk), David Underdown (talk). Self nom at 15:08, 20 August 2009 (UTC)

  • It says "was awarded the freedom of Athens by". How does one award a city's freedom to someone? Is something missing from the hook? Never mind: I'm not familiar with that kind of terminology. I took the liberty of adapting the hook to lose the "Athens" repetition. Dahn (talk) 21:01, 22 August 2009 (UTC)

Elizabeth Fort

  • ... that, though ostensibly built to defend the city, the citizens of Cork pulled down Elizabeth Fort within two years of its first construction – for fear that it would be used against them by James I?

Created by Guliolopez (talk). Self nom at 13:27, 20 August 2009 (UTC)

Sabalan, Safad

Created by Dr. Blofeld (talk) and Al Ameer son (talk) . Self nom at 11:44, 20 August 2009 (UTC)

  • The article says "Some believe Sabalan is supposed to be Zebulun, the son of Jacob, while others claim he was a da'is ("missionary") who joined the Druze religion". To me this is not a DYK fact. Materialscientist (talk) 05:18, 21 August 2009 (UTC)

History of Oak Park and River Forest High School

  • ... that the Ernest Hemingway short story The Killers was a continuation of a short story which Hemingway published in his high school literary magazine?

Created by LonelyBeacon (talk). Self nom at 04:38, 20 August 2009 (UTC)

DUST 514

Created by Enndr (talk). Nominated by MuZemike (talk) at 23:31, 19 August 2009 (UTC)

Can you give the hook some kind of real-world connection? Otherwise it's just "DYK that (this one fiction) connects to (this other fiction)" - and such details in fiction are typically the result of arbitrary whim. DS (talk) 16:17, 20 August 2009 (UTC)
ALT 1 ... that users in the upcoming MMORPG DUST 514 will be able to interact with users from another game EVE Online through mercenary assistance? MuZemike 19:13, 20 August 2009 (UTC)

Per Voksø, Sverre Munck

  • ... that Per Voksø resigned as editor-in-chief of Morgenposten shortly after Sverre Munck bought the newspaper?

Per Voksø is new, Sverre Munck was expanded. Geschichte (talk). Self nom at 21:43, 19 August 2009 (UTC)

Map of Rensselaerswyck

Created by Wadester16 (talk). Self nom at 21:27, 19 August 2009 (UTC)

University of Oklahoma Health Sciences Center

5x expanded by Smb1138 (talk). Self nom at 20:53, 19 August 2009 (UTC)

Nicolae Constantin Batzaria

Created by Dahn (talk). Self nom at 20:48, 19 August 2009 (UTC)

Unsinkable Seven

Created by Donnie Park (talk). Self nom at 14:43, 19 August 2009 (UTC)

I edited the hook. ChildofMidnight (talk) 16:50, 19 August 2009 (UTC)
I have made changes to accomodate that they have been given that nickname twice, plus adding another one below
  • "Joginder Singh and Nick Nowicki was". Among other changes, I would normally change "was" to "were" without comment in both versions, but someone made the opposite change. Art LaPella (talk) 02:49, 20 August 2009 (UTC)

Taschereau Bridge, Galipeault Bridge

Created by Blanchardb (talk). Self nom at 00:51, 19 August 2009 (UTC)

  • Note: This unusual DYK aims for two articles at once, and although the hook applies equally to both articles, the one on Galipeault is not eligible for DYK. -- Blanchardb -- timed 02:07, 21 August 2009 (UTC)
If it is not eligible, it can be linked but will not appear in bold. Hook changed accordingly. orangefreak 20:18, 21 August 2009 (UTC)

Harry Patch (In Memory Of)

Created by Brandt Luke Zorn (talk). Self nom at 06:00, 20 August 2009 (UTC)

ALT 1 ... that all proceeds from the 2009 Radiohead song "Harry Patch (In Memory Of)", a tribute to the last surviving soldier to have fought in the trenches of the First World War, were donated to The Royal British Legion? --Brandt Luke Zorn (talk) 01:54, 22 August 2009 (UTC)

Articles created/expanded on August 18

Parabolic loudspeaker

5x expanded by Binksternet (talk). Self nom at 16:51, 21 August 2009 (UTC)

  • If the original author is included then I submitted the article to DYK too late. August 14 was below the fold when I came here with the nomination.  :( The original text was 1226 bytes while the current text is 4402, only 3.59x expansion. I'll see if I can bring more text to the page and make this a valid entry. Binksternet (talk) 16:40, 22 August 2009 (UTC)

Dickerman Park

  • ... that since being dedicated for "park and parkway" purposes in 1909, Dickerman Park in Saint Paul, Minnesota, has been primarily used for parking lots and front yards of businesses?

Created by Eóin (talk). Self nom at 22:02, 20 August 2009 (UTC)

Rafiq al-Tamimi

A modern game pie

Created by Al Ameer son (talk) 06:23, 20 August 2009 (UTC)

Spanish Louie

Created by 72.74.197.243 (talk). Nominated by MSGJ (talk) at 11:08, 19 August 2009 (UTC)

Game pie

A modern game pie

Created/expanded by ChildofMidnight (talk), Aymatth2 (talk). Self nom at 05:42, 19 August 2009 (UTC)

I added some citations to the bit in question. ChildofMidnight (talk) 17:03, 19 August 2009 (UTC)
  • The article was nominated a bit fast - still work in progress. There is a huge variety of English pies, some with a shell and no top crust, some with no shell but a top crust as in the picture to the right, and some completely enclosed, such as the classic pork pie. The game pie has evolved from a stew baked in a coffin with a lid, with the tough pastry usually discarded, to a hot pie in an edible shell with a lid, to a cold game-in-aspic pie, to the modern game pie typically served hot with no shell but a lid. The article will illustrate this. Again - work in progress. The connection between wheat shortage and pies with no lids is completely authentic, described in the life of Beau Brummel. See : "The scarcity two years after Brummel's retirement, viz in 1800, was so great that consumption of flour for pastry was forbidden in the Royal Household, rice being used instead. The distillers left off malting ... and Wedgwood made dishes to represent piecrust."
I hereby grant you another 24 hours to finish the article. Good luck. ChildofMidnight (talk) 18:44, 20 August 2009 (UTC)
  • Think I will leave it. A lot could be added, particularly on other countries and cooking methods, but this version seems reasonably coherent. A rich subject. Aymatth2 (talk) 15:51, 21 August 2009 (UTC)

Alt. Hook ... that William Hutton, François Pierre La Varenne and Benjamin Disraeli wrote about game pie, and Josiah Wedgwood made cooking dishes for it?

In any hook, William Hutton should point directly to the William Hutton meant, not the disambig. page. orangefreak 16:50, 28 August 2009 (UTC)
I fixed the Hutton problem, assuming the article is correct to link to William Hutton (historian). Art LaPella (talk) 21:14, 28 August 2009 (UTC)

Georgia Cottage

Created by Altairisfar (talk). Self nom at 03:49, 19 August 2009 (UTC)

Postman's Park

5x expanded by Iridescent (talk). Self nom at 23:34, 18 August 2009 (UTC)

  • "instead of digging graves" and "former graveyard" don't match. If no graves have been dug, it's not a graveyard. Suggest "former burial grounds" or sth like that. --76.64.78.148 (talk) 00:22, 19 August 2009 (UTC)
    • Call it "burial ground" if you prefer - in this context (pre-Burials Act 1851 England) the two are synonymous, but if it makes things clearer to the reader it's not a problem. – iridescent 00:32, 19 August 2009 (UTC)
      • Or "cemetery". --76.64.78.148 (talk) 02:11, 19 August 2009 (UTC)
      • If you want an even more little-known fact about the Park, read the entry for the Minotaur in Philip Ward-Jackson's Public sculpture of the city of London (ISBN 9780853239772), where you'll find the fact that the statue was intended to be surrounded by a maze, in turf, which never actually materialized. You'll also find some more precise dates there. If you are really good, you'll find the two January 1973 pencil drawings of the nonexistent turf maze, done by Ayrton, in the collection of the Corporation of London. ☺ Uncle G (talk) 03:44, 19 August 2009 (UTC)
        • I'm aware - Ward-Jackson was the source I was using here - but I don't think the maze is significant enough to warrant mentioning. As I read Ward-Jackson, the only source for the "maze" story is a note in the Bruton Gallery's catalogue at the time of the statue's sale - the only thing mentioned in the planning application itself was "to purchase and install the Minotaur sculpture", with no mention of any maze. Given the cramped nature of the park, I can't believe the maze idea was ever seriously considered, and I suspect it's a misunderstanding on the gallery's part. – iridescent 13:56, 19 August 2009 (UTC)
          • Whether others considered it or not, Ayrton produced drawings for it. One of the reasons that nothing never materialized was that Ayrton fell ill with diabetes that year and couldn't work. See pages 18 and 289 of ISBN 9780814330029. Uncle G (talk) 19:24, 19 August 2009 (UTC)

Kazuhiko Nishijima

5x expanded by Headbomb (talk). Self nom at 22:42, 18 August 2009 (UTC)

  • Dates, length fact, refs are Ok, but I would rephrase the hook. For example,

ALT1 ... that Japanese theoretical physicist Kazuhiko Nishijima developed the concept of strangeness for subatomic particles? Materialscientist (talk) 03:19, 19 August 2009 (UTC)

I'm reluctant to part with the "eta-charge" part entirely, but I trimmed the fat and added context. Is this better? Headbomb {κοντριβς – WP Physics} 04:26, 19 August 2009 (UTC)
Ok with me, but I feel "eta-charge" is a scary detail which is too much for DYK and should be read in the article. Perhaps just me. Materialscientist (talk) 09:46, 19 August 2009 (UTC)

Adam Próchnik

Created by Piotrus (talk). Self nom at 18:05, 18 August 2009 (UTC)

  • From the DYK rules: "The nomination's hook must contain a fact cited in the article" Speculations, though referenced, are not facts. Be extra careful when accusing somebody of having an extramarital affair. --74.13.125.201 (talk) 03:15, 27 August 2009 (UTC)

Ibnu Parna, Acoma Party

Created by Soman (talk). Self nom at 15:44, 18 August 2009 (UTC)

Atractocarpus chartaceus, Atractocarpus fitzalanii, Atractocarpus benthamianus, Gardenia jasminoides, and Atractocarpus (i.e 5x nom)

Created by Poyt448 (talk). Nominated by Casliber (talk) at 14:29, 18 August 2009 (UTC)

I've given Gardenia a capital and italicised it as it is a genus. Smartse (talk) 14:02, 19 August 2009 (UTC)
Stop press - I'll try to make this a triple decker. I got carried away...I have Atractocarpus fitzalanii in my garden which I much prefer, and I noted it was redlinked. A doozy coming up. I should have some photos somewhere too....Casliber (talk · contribs) 03:34, 21 August 2009 (UTC)
All the articles are new or 5x expanded but only the Narrow-leaved- seems to have a reference for the flowers smelling like Common Gardenia. Any more photos would be great too. Smartse (talk) 23:01, 23 August 2009 (UTC)
Okay, have put in refs for the other two species now. I do recall having a photo somewhere on my computer. if the worst comes to the worst, there are loads of photos of Gardenia jasminoides everywhere, but I should have one of fitzalanii somewhere...many refs are still to their old genus name of Randia Casliber (talk · contribs) 00:00, 24 August 2009 (UTC)
Update: Can't find any photos on my hard drive :( Casliber (talk · contribs) 13:09, 28 August 2009 (UTC)

Al Purvis

5x expanded by Alansohn (talk). Self nom at 02:53, 18 August 2009 (UTC)

  • Character length>1500. Expanded 5x, in appropriate date range. But I don't like the hook at all. It's trying too hard, and actually combining two facts. The entire sentence therefore has no inline citation in the article. (How could such a convoluted since have attribution?) The hook should be about something notable to Al Purvis, not to Canada's Olympic Men's Ice Hockey Team. Also, article, generally, is backed by only two sources, one of them being just an encyclopedia. There's gotta be more out there about this guy. And surely there's something in the as-yet-unfound references that'll really give us something interesting to say about Al Purvis. (Not sure btw, that there's that much in graf 5 that's at all useful to this biographical article. If you could find references for what Purvis did for his team during the 1952 Olympics, that'd be sweet, but just a summary of the games doesn't really belong in an Al Purvis article. Also, article currently doesn't agree with itself as far as the date of his death. Is it the 12th, the 14th or as this really crappy source suggests the 13th of August? The man literally just died and we've got three different dates bouncing around!
So, a handful of of goals here then. 1) find more sources, 2) reorient the article so that it's about Al Purvis, not the fate of Canadian Olympic Hockey and 4) make the hook only about Al Purvis. CzechOut | 20:52, 21 August 2009 (UTC)
Additional primary/secondary sources:
Additional tertiary sources (with editorial oversight):

Articles created/expanded on August 17

Bayt Susin

  • ... that following the depopulation of the Palestinian village of Bayt Susin in 1948, the moshav of Ta'oz was established just two years later?

Dr. Blofeld (talk), Al Ameer son (talk). Self nom at 15:56, 22 August 2009 (UTC) Note Blofeld is my old account. This and the village underneath should be credited now to me. Himalayan Explorer 19:14, 23 August 2009 (UTC)

José de los Reyes Berreyesa

Created by Binksternet (talk). Self nom at 16:27, 21 August 2009 (UTC)

  • Problematic sourcing. As noted by the author of the book that reprinted the statement used as the source of this claim, "It has been claimed that the statements were published in the newspapers for their political effect on the presidential campaign of 1856." This makes the claim questionable until a secondary source can be produced showing the claim has been evaluated and found to be trustworthy. As per Misplaced Pages:No original research#Primary, secondary and tertiary sources, the article can note that this statement exists and what it claims but the article can not use the claims as unchallenged truth without appropriate secondary or tertiary sourcing. --Allen3  22:40, 23 August 2009 (UTC)
  • Zoeth Skinner Eldredge, the author of the 1912 book The Beginnings of San Francisco, is indeed the tertiary source we all like to have. The author looked at the secondary sources (newspaper articles) and evaluated them against each other and against primary sources (interviews), and came to the conclusion that the attempt to sway the 1856 campaign "cannot in any way alter the facts." Eldredge then continues to give the straightest available version of the facts. The book's pages 406–408 contain the relevant passages, exactly as seen at the SF History URL http://www.sfgenealogy.com/sf/history/hbbegd.htm ... Besides which, the facts I used in the hook are facts which were not challenged by anybody at the time. All the parties agree that Kit Carson and two other men shot and killed the de Haro twins and the 61-year-old Berreyesa. Binksternet (talk) 08:46, 24 August 2009 (UTC)

Berreyesa family

Created by Binksternet (talk). Self nom at 16:27, 21 August 2009 (UTC)

  • While the hook is sources to a tertiary source, much of the article is Original research in the form of
  • I share Allen3's concerns here, though I think Binksternet is making the point that we shouldn't go beyond the DYK rules in clearing something at DYK. Nevertheless, judgement is also supposed to be exercised in not harming WP's reputation etc in taking things to the main page. First the hook: actually, it appears that the tertiary source referred to is actually being cited to support the claim that "pre-existing land grants of Mexican-era landowners had been continued by the Treaty of Guadalupe Hidalgo". I don't see a reliable source for the key claims that (1) the Berreyesa family received large California land grants from Mexico - ie. this specifically named family received these grants; or (2) this specifically named family lost them to Americans after 1851. As to the rest of the article, the material cited in footnotes 3, 4 and 5 are simply not reliable sources. Some others (notes 7, the material quoted in source 8, and possible the citations used in note 11) appear to be primary sources that can be used in only limited contexts. Other sources, however, appear sound. The reason i raise this detail here is that, were one to strip out the material supported by notes 3 to 5, and 7 and 8, not a lot of detail remains. hamiltonstone (talk) 02:55, 26 August 2009 (UTC)
  • Yes, the tertiary source, The Mexican American Experience: an Encyclopedia, is being used to support the hook. The hook, and the article, and the sourcs, claim only that members of the family received grants, not the family as a unit. The sources and the article detail which members got which grants, and describe how in many instances the lands were lost, sold, or stripped of key elements.
  • As for the challenged sources, each of the ones in question, the Berryessafamily one hosted by Comcast, the Directory De Anza one hosted by SFGenealogy and the Descendants of ... Berreyesa one hosted by FamilyTreeMaker are just as reliable as a Misplaced Pages article in that they list extensive footnotes and sources. In essence, those three sources are serving as tertiary collections of primary and secondary material. Their sources include:
    • Salonites, Eftimeos. Berreyesa: The Rape of the Mexican Land Grant, Rancho Cañada de Capay, 1994
    • Eldredge, Zoeth Skinner. The Beginnings of San Francisco, 1912
    • California Colonization – Frontier Settlement up to 1846
    • Fremont and ’49, Dullenbaugh, Samuel
    • Vallejo, Son of California, McKittrick, Myrtle M. 1944
    • Pioneer Register Index
    • History of California, Bancroft, pg. 306 – vol. 21, Chiles Walker. Vol. 35, Padre Viadez (priest at Mission Santa Clara)
    • History of San Jose, Hall (Berryessa)
    • History of Santa Clara County, Sawyer, Eugene Taylor
    • Saint Mary’s College, microfilm – Brother Denis 1922 (researched by Barney Langan)
    • Los Californios – a society in Willows, California
    • The Pony Express, Stories of Pioneers and Old Trails vol. XXXVI no. 5 no. 425 Sonora, California, October 1969
    • San Jose Mercury News, Wednesday, April 4, 1990, 5B
    • Antepasados, Volume VIII: Captain Juan Bautista de Anza - Correspondence on Various Subjects, 1775, Archivo General de la Nación, Provincias Internas 237, Section 3. Transcribed, Translated and Indexed (with Commentary Notes) by Donald T. Garate. Los Californianos, San Leandro, California.
    • Antepasados II, Bicentennial Issue. Rudecinda Lo Buglio, Editor. Members of the Second Anza Expedition, section II: 3-7. Presidio de San Francisco, 31 December 1776 - Section III: 21 - 32. Los Californianos, San Leandro, California, 1977.
    • Anza's California Expedition, E. H. Bolton. Volume 4, Chapter XX. "Font's Complete Diary." 1930.
    • California History Magazine. "The Story of San Jose, 1777-1869, California's First Pueblo, Part I." Oscar Osburn Winther. Volume 14, page 3. California Historical Society, San Francisco, 1935.
    • The Census of 1790 - A Demographic History of California. William Marvin Mason. Ballena Press, Menlo Park, California, 1998. 75-105.
    • Some Alta California Pioneers and Descendants, 1776-1852. Dorothy Gittinger Mutnick. PastTime Publications, Lafayette, California, 1982; Copyright 1989, Contra Costa Historical Society.
    • Thomas W. Temple Mission Abstracts (on compact disk). Los Californianos, San Leandro, California, 1972.
    • Marie E. Northrop, Spanish-Mexican Families of Early California 1769-1850, Polyanthos, New Orleans, 1976, 1987
    • Santa Clara Mission Records/USC. Lib., F869.S47 S26 Box 1 Micro Film, Burials 10/19/1804 #3216.
    • Gallagher, "Gallagher, Berryessa Family 1776--1957", (Los Californianos - #57).
    • Franki Viviano, "The Lost Paradise of the Californios," San Jose Mercury News/West June 16, 1985.
    • ...and various birth, baptismal, marriage and death certificates.
  • I put the article together knowing that I was at the mercy of the interpreters of these sources, but they all agree on the general scheme of things, and only vary in regard to little things such as spelling and whether a couple had 12 or 13 children. I'm confident that the three listed web sources have correctly interpreted their references. Binksternet (talk) 18:36, 26 August 2009 (UTC)

What happens on tour, stays on tour

Created by Spy007au (talk). Self nom at 07:58, 18 August 2009 (UTC)

  • 1014 characters of prose. There's some odd formatting in the background section that's lowering your prose count. Also, you might want to make the "notable cases" section paragraphs instead of bullets. Shubinator (talk) 21:12, 18 August 2009 (UTC)

Article is currently festooned with cleanup templates, mostly questioning the sourcing. Reliable sources exist, at least for the variant "What goes on tour, stays on tour" (see The Times and The Daily Mail, to name two), so it ought to be possible to craft an article that does not rely on non-RS sources. --Orlady (talk) 01:23, 25 August 2009 (UTC)

I've brought some more respectable sources to the article, and taken out some blogs that were clearly not notable. Other blogs such as the advice column "Ask Sam" by Samantha Bret I'm not so certain about, so there is still improvement to be made. Again, the ALT1 hook is good to go, with a robust Times Online reference written by Matt Syed. Binksternet (talk) 04:19, 25 August 2009 (UTC)
The article is up for AfD, which will likely remove it from DYK consideration. o_O
Binksternet (talk) 18:10, 28 August 2009 (UTC)
Even if it survives the deletion discussion, the article has other major issues (see CzeckOut's comments on the article talk page, and the above-mentioned cleanup templates) that would need to be addressed. cmadler (talk) 18:24, 28 August 2009 (UTC)

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