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*<s>Add actual context to the product section instead of a bunch of lists.</s> | *<s>Add actual context to the product section instead of a bunch of lists.</s> | ||
*Add Business culture section | *Add Business culture section | ||
*Add user culture section | *<s>Add user culture section</s> | ||
*Cleanup litigation section | *<s>Cleanup litigation section</s> | ||
*Add proper names to each footnote. | *Add proper names to each footnote. | ||
*<s>Do something with the 'Apple CEOs, 1977-present' list and the Steve Jobs picture.</s> | *<s>Do something with the 'Apple CEOs, 1977-present' list and the Steve Jobs picture.</s> |
Revision as of 00:42, 30 January 2006
Create inline notes and references.- Extreme copyediting.
Rework the images so they alternate sides; improve captions.More references.- Keep length under approx. 45k.
Add actual context to the product section instead of a bunch of lists.- Add Business culture section
Add user culture sectionCleanup litigation section- Add proper names to each footnote.
Do something with the 'Apple CEOs, 1977-present' list and the Steve Jobs picture.Expand 'Logo' subsection - there is a lot more to say about Apples logo.- Move 'Slogans' section into a stub sister article and add to 'See also' section ? (maybe Apple Computer slogans).