| Revision as of 17:52, 30 January 2006 editJoshuacUK (talk | contribs)Autopatrolled, Pending changes reviewers, Rollbackers9,361 editsm another strike-through← Previous edit | Revision as of 03:36, 31 January 2006 edit undoFireswordfight (talk | contribs)1,337 edits Wasn't it always below 45k? But its not below 35kNext edit → | ||
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| *<s>Rework the images so they alternate sides; improve ].</s> | *<s>Rework the images so they alternate sides; improve ].</s> | ||
| *<s>More references.</s> | *<s>More references.</s> | ||
| *Keep length under approx. 45k. | *<s>Keep length under approx. 45k.</s> | ||
| *<s>Add actual context to the product section instead of a bunch of lists.</s> | *<s>Add actual context to the product section instead of a bunch of lists.</s> | ||
| *Add Business culture section | *Add Business culture section | ||
Revision as of 03:36, 31 January 2006
Create inline notes and references.- Extreme copyediting.
Rework the images so they alternate sides; improve captions.More references.Keep length under approx. 45k.Add actual context to the product section instead of a bunch of lists.- Add Business culture section
Add user culture sectionCleanup litigation section- Add proper names to each footnote.
Do something with the 'Apple CEOs, 1977-present' list and the Steve Jobs picture.Expand 'Logo' subsection - there is a lot more to say about Apples logo.Move 'Slogans' section into a stub sister article and add a link to that article to 'See also' section ?