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1. POV sections can not be presented as "facts."
2. A blog post such as wordpress.com source is not a RS.
3. The language in Det. is "destroy" not "exterminate."
4. The wording of "rationalization & justification" in and of itself is POV. 'reasoning' is more accurate.
5. The phrase of word "victims" is a POV, How about the Israelites as victims OF Amalek.
6. "Gush Emunim" are 'radical Zionists' not a "Jewish movement."
7. Avoid countless repetition intended to inflate the page.
8. "Notable" ? Not true about most of them.
9. The Arab Nur Nashala is clearly a controversial POV "writer," it's bad enough that he's used as all, worse is quoting his text about so called "indigenous" Palestinians... (you can research about Arab immigration 1880-1940).
10. No need to add the title "scholar" to every controversial POV.184.48.93.218 (talk) 02:47, 9 December 2010 (UTC)

Can you propose the specific changes you'd like to make, so they can be be discussed one at a time? For instance, I have no objection to changing "rationalization & justification" to 'reasoning and justification', but not "reasoning" alone. The sources use "justification" and similar words, since the eradications are sometimes inexplicably violent. --Noleander (talk) 02:57, 9 December 2010 (UTC)

Don't worry, the IP has already begun canvassing. I like how Arab is used as a title when dismissing a scholar, very classy. 4 and 10 have some merit though. Sol (talk) 04:25, 9 December 2010 (UTC)

Comment. I'm a bothered by the canvassing. In general when I see a notice on my talk page I think that someone wants to talk to me. WP spam is no better than any other type. Regarding the list above, the IP does have a few points. I'd suggest we conceed that a blog is (usually) not RS, the point about destroy vs exterminate is correct, #7 is always a good point. regarding the others I'm less sure. Joe407 (talk) 05:23, 9 December 2010 (UTC)

Hey, let's assume good faith. Maybe the anon IP doesn't know about watchlists and thinks he needs to ask us to look here. Anyway, if you add Sol's comments and Joe407's comments, together, it looks like at least points 2,3,4,7 and 10 are considered valid. That suggests we should at least address those points and explain why we deem the rest invalid. --Richard S (talk) 05:55, 9 December 2010 (UTC)

The blog looks like it's directly (?) from Moment Magazine, whatever that is, and the content is hosted there. If MM is an RS then the blog may meet the standards for inclusion or just be a reprint of their content. Sol (talk) 06:12, 9 December 2010 (UTC)

Yes, let's consider the points one at a time:

(2) Agree: an informal blog should not be the only source, although it could be supplemental to other, better sources. Moment (magazine) is a decent source.

(3) Deut "destroy" vs "exterminate" .. the Torah is written in Hebrew/Aramaic, not English. There are about 5 different words that translates to. Regardless, the english-language sources use the word "exterminate" predominantly when discussing the wars.

(4) "Reasoning" vs "justification". We must follow the sources. They use terms like "justify" or "explain" or "rationalize" ... not "reason". The context is key here: the sources are trying to suggest explanations for why the wars were so utterly destructive.

(7) "Countless repetition". Not sure what that is referring to. Need more specificity.

(10) "Scholar": it is common to prefix a person's profession, to give context. Eliminating that word would remove valuable information (is the source a journalist? theologian? activist? professor?). To avoid boring repetition, we could vary it by using more variety: "professor", "historian" (as appropriate), "academic", etc.

--Noleander (talk) 06:40, 9 December 2010 (UTC)

Re - "scholar": that bothered me as well when I first came to this article a few weeks ago. If it is necessary to label the source, then I think we should provide a more specific description such as "religious scholar", "sociologist", "historian", "political scientist", whatever. A nuclear physicist is also a "scholar" as is a professor of art history. We should be providing information as to the source's credentials and qualifications to comment on the topic. --Richard S (talk) 06:56, 9 December 2010 (UTC)

Concur. --Noleander (talk) 07:06, 9 December 2010 (UTC)

Regrading the word choice in number 4. What sources are you referring to and could you please mention them here? Without sources, the IP is correct that justification is an inherently POV word in this case, adding little other than a bias. Joe407 (talk) 08:50, 9 December 2010 (UTC)

The sources are the ones listed in the footnotes of the Justification section. What sources are you relying on for preferring the word "reason"? --Noleander (talk) 14:12, 9 December 2010 (UTC)

Eye for an Eye section

Richard: I notice you created the "Lex talionis" section. A few comments:

1. You provided no sources. See WP:verifiability. Sources are needed for all material. I challenge (WP:CHALLENGE) all sentences without sources.
2. If you do insert material that is supported by sources, the consensus for this article (see Talk page archive) is that the sources must directly relate the violence to Judaism's texts, doctrines, or leaders. Material not supported by such sources will be removed. If you want to change that guideline, please make a proposal here on the Talk page first.
3. You copied nearly the entire Eye for an eye article into that section. Better is to briefly summarize the other article, and let readers use links to get more detail. If you would like to copy nearly the entire article here, could you please use the RfC process first to get input from other editors.
4. This is an English encyclopedia. Lex talionis redirects to Eye for an eye. We should use English here in this article also.

Thanks. --Noleander (talk) 07:16, 9 December 2010 (UTC)

Noleander, I did not copy the entire article Eye for an eye into this one. I copied the portion of the article that related to Judaism which represents about a third of the article. Still I recognize that the "Lex talionis" text is very long and so summary style is appropriate here. Feel free to trim it down to a size appropriate for this article. I just found it surprising that there was no mention of this key idea here.

Re the use of the Latin "Lex talionis", I guess I could go either way. "Lex talionis" is the term used to describe the legal principle. However, we are not focusing purely on human law here but religion so "eye for an eye" could make sense also. The point here is that "this is the English Wiki" is not a sufficient argument here since the use of Latin terms to designate legal principles is widely accepted in Anglophone countries. But, since we're discussing a wider context than just human law, perhaps "eye for an eye" is preferred.

Finally, regarding sources, you seem to forget that the objective of this project is to write an encyclopedia. I refer you again to Burden of evidence which says "Editors might object if you remove material without giving them time to provide references. It has always been good practice to make reasonable efforts to find sources yourself that support such material, and cite them." In other words, this is a collaborative effort. Everybody has different interests, skills, knowledge, access to sources and time available. If the material is likely correct, then one should not agitate to have it removed. Instead, one should seek to improve the sourcing. You have spent far more time on this article than I have. If this new text fills a deficiency in the article, then you should welcome the contribution as improving the article. You might even help further improve the article by finding sourcing for it or rewriting it to be the appropriate size for the article. Unless you just prefer Wikibullying to Wikicollaboration.

--Richard S (talk) 16:32, 9 December 2010 (UTC)

Tags need justification on Talk page

Joe: regarding POV tag: if you want to add a POV tag, be sure to include the specific shortcomings of the article here, so other editors can work to resolve it. The "old" POV tag from November was resolved above in the archive. If you want to add a new tag, please provide specifics. Thanks. --Noleander (talk) 14:31, 9 December 2010 (UTC)

Judaism as a violent religion that threatens all Christians

I'm going to park this info here because I don't have time this morning to do it justice. It's worth reading and I think we can use it as a source. The part I'm interested in is in the conclusion to the chapter that says "Grundmann and his fellow Institute members argued that Judaism was a violent religion threatening all Christians".

• Heschel, Susannah (2008). The Aryan Jesus: Christian theologians and the Bible in Nazi Germany. Princeton University Press. p. 63.

--Richard S (talk) 17:13, 9 December 2010 (UTC)

Wars of extermination in the Tanakh

I was under the impression that the Hebrews offered terms before engaging in battle? Chesdovi (talk) 18:14, 9 December 2010 (UTC)

Violence against the Egyptians

We need a section on the violence of the 10 plagues against the Egyptians. Moses was responsible. Chesdovi (talk) 18:18, 9 December 2010 (UTC)

Revenge against Shechem

We need to add the bit about Jacobs two sons massacring the inhabitants of Hamor nad the inhabitants of Shechem. Chesdovi (talk) 18:20, 9 December 2010 (UTC)

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