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| :''The population is said to frequently discuss topics such as architecture and æsthetics regularly.'' | :''The population is said to frequently discuss topics such as architecture and æsthetics regularly.'' | ||
| Is this true? Who says this? In fact, as a citizen of Dresden, I have not witnessed any unusual amount of discussion ;-) --] 03:36, 5 Jul 2004 (UTC) | Is this true? Who says this? In fact, as a citizen of Dresden, I have not witnessed any unusual amount of discussion ;-) --] 03:36, 5 Jul 2004 (UTC) | ||
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A check though "What links here" will give many hints as to how this entry could be richer and deeper. Wetman 03:04, 14 Feb 2004 (UTC)
Article needs a little bit of re-wording--Comrade Nick 02:23, 29 Apr 2004 (UTC)
I wrote it in deep night within two minutes and I am not a native speaker. Sorry, I forgot that I wrote the text, I will do some re-wording, and others are welcome to join.
I'd be happy to. In fact, I intend to help with its editing, because I'm that in its present state it lacks the proper qualities of an encyclopædia.--Ingoolemo 01:34, 2004 Jun 9 (UTC)
- Okay, my rewrite is done. I'm afraid I couldn't put anything in the edit summary, because I forgot to. But hopefully it's much improved.
Concerning this sentence (that also has some grammatical problems...)
- The population is said to frequently discuss topics such as architecture and æsthetics regularly.
Is this true? Who says this? In fact, as a citizen of Dresden, I have not witnessed any unusual amount of discussion ;-) --Markus Krötzsch 03:36, 5 Jul 2004 (UTC)