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I'm surprised this article isn't fuller; Giuliano is an important figure in Sicilian history. I'm going to try to fill it out a bit. Incidentally I believe Pisciotta was Giuliano's cousin. --61.68.103.208 12:20, 1 August 2005 (UTC)

Pisciotta

Pisciotta was not Giuliano's cousin. Professor Chandler's book puts this to rest. I'll be doing some work on the article based on this book "King of the Mountain" soon. --Tapered 22:06, 19 June 2007 (UTC)

Thompson beretta?

There's no reference or documentation for the forensic evidence from the Portella della Ginestra massacre. The language, "9 mm Thompson beretta" is suspect. Thompson is a type of American submachine gun never manufactured outside the US to the best of my knowledge. Beretta is the family and brand name of an Italian arms manufacturer. If there is an English translation of any recently discovered forensic evidence, could someone please post a link? If untranslated, could someone please translate and post? Thanks! --Tapered 20:52, 20 June 2007 (UTC)

I agree the article is hopelessly short in references. The historian Giuseppe Casarrubea (see his blog in Italian ) talks about "il mitra corto Thompson" without mentioning "beretta". I am not a weapon expert, but it seems you are right. By the way, I would not only take Chandlers's book as a reference, but have a look at 'Storia segreta della Sicilia: Dallo sbarco alleato a Portella della Ginestra' (The secret history of Sicily: From the allies' landing to Portella della Ginestraof) by Casarrubea as well. Not translated (yet), I am afraid (from a flyer of the publisher: "Following scrupulous study of the papers declassified by Bill Clinton in 2000 at the National Archive and Records Administration (Maryland), together with other Italian secret service documents, never systematically analysed before, Giuseppe Casarrubea reconstructs the map of subversion in Italy in the period featuring the constitution of national unity governments and of paramilitary groups, after April 25th 1945 - the date of Italy’s liberation. In doing so he turns the spotlight on the 1947 massacre of a group of civilians in Portella della Ginestra in Sicily." ) He comes up with the theory that the Portella della Ginestra massacre was an attack by clandestine anti-communist networks (a kind of forerunners of the Gladio network), often composed of former fascist militia's. - Mafia Expert 21:25, 20 June 2007 (UTC)
I put the passage in invisible, before seeing your comment. If you do have the book, could you add the reference with chapter & page? Even better if you have some time: quoting some parts of it. Cheers! Tazmaniacs 14:31, 26 June 2007 (UTC)

Monument? A national hero?

Why do you write that there is a monument dedicated to Salvatore Giuliano in MonteLepre, where he was born? There is no monumenti, how could we build a monument dedicated to someone who was nothing more than a killer? And it is not true that Salvatore Giuliano was like Robin Hood, except for some poor and ignorant people. For the most italians he was nothing more than an assassin!!! But, I repeat, the most important thing is that there is not any monument!!! Regards!!!

It has been removed, unless someone can provide relevant sources to prove there is monument. Thanks for your message. - Mafia Expert 20:42, 28 August 2007 (UTC)


Some people view Giuliano as a hero, others don't. Note, the poster of this section seems to be from Lombardy, Northern Italy and uses the word "italians" when the topic of this article is a Sicilian seperatist. So they are perhaps bias. Anyway, there is a plaque dedicated to Giuliano for sure as can be clearly seen in this video, though I'm not sure if you could call that a real "monument"... you'd have to ask people in Montelepre if there is any further kind of "monument". - Animagentile (talk) 02:39, 19 February 2008 (UTC)

There is indeed a small monument to the MIS, and by obvious inference to its leader in the area Giuliano, in Montelepre. It was erected in 1980, dedicated by Giuliano's sister. There's a photo in Prof Jaynes Chandler's book. As best I can remember, this same book documents support for Giuliano throughout Italy. He was well-known throughout Europe and written up by a Greek/Swedish journalist, Maria Cyliakus--also well documented by Jaynes Chandler. Tapered (talk) 00:40, 27 March 2008 (UTC)

Writing as an Italian: - support "throughout Italy" for mass-massacring poor hardworking Italian farmworkers and their families gathered for a picnic to celebrate the 1st of May????? ... what an ASTONISHING idea: only possible "support" I can imagine is from the murderer's own direct relatives, relatives of the bloodsucking Vizzini mafia clan and/or hardline fascist worshippers of Junio Valerio Borghese, with whom that bastard had been growing increasingly cosy and whose Decima Mas killer_squads were probably complicit in the massacre! —Preceding unsigned comment added by 79.32.216.77 (talk) 16:12, 23 May 2010 (UTC)

The victims of Portella della Ginestra are still deeply mourned both in Sicily and in mainland Italy, unlike gun-for-hire killer Giuliano. Here are some links to recent Italian historical documentaries on the Portella della Ginestra killings, which many here view as the first of Italy's long series of "state-backed" Gladio-massacre monstrosities: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vrep_mJoc3s&feature=related http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XIcv599AMBk —Preceding unsigned comment added by 79.32.216.77 (talk) 16:36, 23 May 2010 (UTC)

Re Giuliano's so-called Robin Hoodery and "subjugated class status" causing him to become a bandit: he became a bandit because he was caught by the Carabinieri clandestinely transporting grain to mafia-protected blackmarketeers who then resold it to the populace at over ten times the legal price ("their" price for bread was 40 liras per kilo, legal price was 3.9 liras per kilo, av. household income at the time was around 1000 liras per month to feed a whole family - some "Robin Hood"! And what of the "popularity" of Sicilian separatism with the Sicilian populace itself?? Support-level was only 8.8%, whereas the People's Block (Socialists and Communists - whose victory was being celebrated by the poor hardworking rural Sicilian families he and his killer-mates massacred at Portella della Ginestra) were supported by 30% of the island's population, the highest figure of any party in Sicily. Second most popular were the Christian Democrats - full results here: http://it.wikipedia.org/Elezioni_regionali_in_Sicilia_del_1947 The people of Portella della Ginestra paid for that electoral victory with their blood - kinda "strange" how US writers and posters keep on singings his praises... or all too comprehensible??? —Preceding unsigned comment added by 79.43.215.75 (talk) 19:19, 23 May 2010 (UTC)

Thorough Edit

I'm planning to give the article a very thorough going over. I plan to use Professor Jaynes Chandler's book as my guidepost. I have read the book several times over the years, and was once exhaustively familiar with it. I regard the book as close to brilliant, and its gentle, balanced concluding chapters represent historical analysis close to its NPOV best.

Many past edits have been positive and NPOV. These will be respected and incorporated.

Without rancor, I intend to remove the POV additions of SugnuSicilianu. I'm sympathetic to the sentiments, but they're quite POV. I suspect that Francesco Rosi would approve of them. I'd like to suggest to Sugnu that a separate article on the socio-economic situation of Sicily incorporating Sugnu's interpretation and others, with reference to Giuliano, would be a more appropriate venue.

Comments, please!

Tapered (talk) 00:56, 27 March 2008 (UTC)

I hope you will consider more sources. I added some paragraphs from the book Separatism, the Allies and the Mafia: The Struggle for Sicilian Independence, 1943-1948 by Monte S. Finkelstein, published in 1998. Very thorough research about the Sicilian independence movement, not just about Giuliano. But it puts Giuliano in the proper context. Good luck with the edit. - Mafia Expert (talk) 20:53, 27 March 2008 (UTC)

I saw a program on the History Channel today (about the history of organized crime in the U.S.) where they said that Salvatore Giuliano was a supporter of Sicily becoming a part of the United States (and that it was, supposedly, a common position of the Sicilian Independence Movement after WWII). They also claimed that his murder was ordered by the Mafia. Does anyone know if any of these claims actually correct and supported by other sources? If yes, perhaps something along those lines should be mentioned in the article. Nsk92 (talk) 23:34, 9 October 2008 (UTC)

I'm Italian with a strong interest in post-war Italian history - came across this article by chance and must say I found its contents absolutely AMAZING, in strident contrast with the work of the most reputable Italian and Sicilian historians! For instance: "Giuliano led his remaining men on a raid to the mountain pass Portella della Ginestra on May 1, intending to capture Sicily's most prominent communist, Girolamo Li Causi. However, the event turned into a massacre. Fourteen civilians, including a woman and three children, were killed and more than 30 wounded. Giuliano himself (who fired no shots) stated he ordered his band to fire above the heads of the crowd hoping they would disperse. Some sources accuse the Mafia of infiltrating it and claim mafiosi instead shot at the crowd causing the massacre." Absolute total crap, even the number of victims is incorrect and there is NO indication ANYWHERE in Italian records and/or historical reconstructions that Li Causi was present or expected to be present let ALONE that he himself was the target of the massacre!! Object of the massacre was NOT to kill Li Causi, it was to terrorize the Sicilian peasantry into giving up their widespread demands for land redistribution: in addition to the Villalba attack, note that from 1944 to 1954, no less than 44 Sicilian trade unionists and land-reform activists were murdered by the mafia on behalf of agrarian-aristocratic interests.

More generally: since the Italian, British and US archives for the period have become available to historians some crucial aspects of this period of Sicilian history have been clarified, so my suggestion is: scrap this entire article - apparently based almost entirely on outdated and/or deliberately "romanticized" non-Italian sources - and replace it with a competent translation of the far more up-to-date, very well sourced Italian wiki entry: http://it.wikipedia.org/Portella_della_Ginestra#La_strage —Preceding unsigned comment added by 79.32.216.77 (talk) 15:59, 23 May 2010 (UTC)

"Centigrams"

One "centigram" (unit not usted) is equal to 1 kilogram. It would be hard to hide 20 kg ( or even 20 g)of strychnine in a cup. For people still using imperial measurments it would be around 44 pounds. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 99.245.147.30 (talk) 21:12, 1 May 2011 (UTC)

A centigram is 1/100 of a gram, not one kilogram. - DonCalo (talk) 18:50, 3 May 2011 (UTC)

Velouchiotis

Removed Aris Velouchiotis from the "See Also" section. The Greek was primarily political, with a lifelong history of leftist political activity. Giuliano became active in politics over a year after his banditry began, and remained a bandit after his political involvement ended. Tapered (talk) 22:02, 14 February 2013 (UTC)

Critique

This articles contains significant mistakes, some seemingly inserted to support the beliefs and whims of contributors. It also cites and lists dubious references.

1)”... was a Sicilian peasant, a separatist and, according to some sources a bandit who was mythologised during his life and after his death.”

Emphasizing "peasant" is (possibly class-ideological) is misemphasis. There were at least a million peasants in Sicily at the time. This isn't the reason SG warrants a Misplaced Pages article.

“..according to some sources a bandit” According to some sources the world is spherical.

“...mythologized” Nothing in the cited sources says this. Why is “mythologized” included? An ideological bias?

1a) “He has been compared to Robin Hood in popular culture, owing to the stories about him helping the poor villagers in his area by taking from the rich and redistributing the spoils.” Nothing in the cited reference backs this assertion. SG and Robin are mentioned, but not in a way to justify this statement. Further, the sentence seems to imply that Giuliano didn't redistribute wealth. He did.

2) “...limited by class strictures...” Family finances were an important reason for Giuliano's leaving school, but according to Chandler, SG attributed his leaving to youthful impulsiveness.

3)”...Giuliano and his band fought a brutal battle with authorities in which perhaps a thousand separatists took part. “ Giuliano never controlled more than 50-60 men.

4)”Giuliano also fostered a number of myths around himself...”

All of the “myths” are attested/documented.

There is no cited reference.

Is someone obsessed with myth making?

4a) Giuliano shot first at Quattro Molini

5) References fr/ Italian language sources w/ no reputable translator named

6) Possibly unreliable reference and bibiographic sources

John Dickie identifies Pisciotta as Giuliano's cousin, discredited long before 2004. Helists three mysteries on p. 215 that are explained quite matter of factly in Jaynes Chandler's book, including Giuliano's final letter to Verdiani giving away his trump card and their meeting in Castelvetrano in late 1949.

Servadio also identifies Pisciotta as Giuliano's cousin. She seriously questions whether Pisciotta killed Giuliano. She also accepts Perenze's assertion that he and his squad intended capture Giuliano instead of killing him on 5 July 1950 in Castelvetrano. Additionally, Gregorio de Maria is identified as a mafioso, when he was anything but a participant in the 'Honored Society.' (Chandler, p. 174)

The historian Giuseppe Casarrubea is, evidently, the prime mover behind the exhumation of Giuliano's body—based on the theory that someone else's body was substituted for the bandit's on 5 July 1950. Let's consider what would be necessary to pull off the hoax. Luca would have to find a fresh, unembalmed corpse and deliver it to Castelvetrano. Then he'd have to coach Maria Lombardo Giuliano to faint and emote over the body. What would Luca's motivation be? Giuliano's corpse guaranteed him the thing he wanted most in life—promotion to the rank of general. (Chandler, p 167) How much of a bribe would Giuliano have had to pay to get Luca to take the chance that Giuliano might just turn up somewhere after he, Luca had certified the death to Italy's entire power elite? Casarrubea's irrational pursuit of a missing Giuliano casts doubt on the reliability of his work, in the event that any of it is translated into English. Tapered (talk) 23:57, 4 May 2013 (UTC)

Comprehensive Rewrite

I've just done a complete overhaul of this article, based almost exclusively on “King of the Mountain” by Professor Billy Jaynes Chandler, a painstakingly researched, dispassionate (but not bloodless) volume by a specialist in banditry and brigandage. For those who object to such reliance, I can only challenge them—find another book half as well done and researched IN ENGLISH or a RELIABLE TRANSLATION of an Italian (or other language) book, and edit away. This edit, I believe, addresses all the issues raised in my recent complaint about the article. I'm including the next section to show how citations as of 16 May 2013 were included or excluded from the new edit. Regards. Tapered (talk) 20:24, 16 May 2013 (UTC)

Citation/Reference/Footnote explanation

  • 1) Doesn't substantiate subject in article. Included in bibliography.
  • 2) Doesn't substantiate subject in article. Used as reference elsewhere.
  • 3) Doesn't substantiate subject in article. Used as reference elsewhere.
  • 4) Doesn't substantiate subject in article. Included in bibliography.
  • 5) Included
  • 6) Passage and references included in article.
  • 7) Included
  • 8) Included
  • 9) Superseded by Chandler, included in bibliography
  • 10) Superseded by Chandler, included in bibliography
  • 11) Superseded by Chandler
  • 12) Pages cited do not correspond to article material
  • 13) Discarded—Italian language document, contents of article covered by Chandler
  • 14) Doesn't substantiate subject in article. Included in bibliography.
  • 15) Superseded by Chandler, included in bibliography
  • 16) Passage and references included in article, but is referenced as “Hobsbawm, Primitive Rebels, p. 27” in the “Historical Context and Interpretation” section. The “Cultural Resistance Reader” is included in the “Further Reading” section.
  • 17) Included, despite non-English: main content covered by #18
  • 18) Included
  • 19) Included
  • 20) Included

Tapered (talk) 20:24, 16 May 2013 (UTC)

Although the original article may not have been perfect, I have serious doubts about this rewrite. Among the many deficiencies, it relies too much on one single and dated source (Chandler) and fails to include more recent research, in particular from Italy. I don't see why Italian language sources should be discriminated against. Furthermore, it is poorly written, with too many spelling and grammar mistakes and fan-like weasel words. It includes too many unnecessary detail that prevent a good understanding of the subject. - DonCalo (talk) 07:03, 17 May 2013 (UTC)
One or two of the criticisms here and in the laundry list info box now at the beginning of the article have genuine validity. The article needs to be pared down, in particular. Probably not difficult. Chandler is hardly dated. Anything but minor sourcing from another language ought to be from a recognized, vetted translation. "Discrimination" is a weasel word. Tapered (talk) 11:59, 17 May 2013 (UTC)
Categorical analysis of 'Issues Box'
Grammar: a bot caught the worst punctuation issue--done. Spelling elicits no (English) Sandbox responses. If the writing isn't great, please improve it
Lead section: valid, already addressed, and hopefully there can be more productive edits. There has already been an edit that included productive elements, but also some very unproductive ones.
Single source: Chandler is by far the most comprehensive source in English. Finkelstein and Hobsbawm are excellent, but limited in scope. Dickie and Servadio are, pro forma, reliable sources, but there flaws have also been detailed in the "Critique" above. There's little to no information in their books not covered by other, better works. Translations needs be vetted.
Intricate detail: Addressed recently. Giuliano's story is complicated. Specific suggestions/pruning, please.
Too long: intertwined with intricate detail, which seems the most operational way to deal with this issue.
Weasel words: Some potential "peacock" words since removed. Please detail examples of bias. Dubious and not very productive to label anything in an article with 112 references as "unverfiable." Perhaps over-verified. Tapered (talk) 15:37, 17 May 2013 (UTC)
I've responded to what I consider the valid criticisms listed, and edited the article, including unnecessary, counterproductive edits. Please address this response to the issues box, or I'll remove it. Thank you. Tapered (talk) 05:31, 20 May 2013 (UTC)
Since no one has addressed the issues above, I intend to remove the box within a week. Tapered (talk) 20:16, 11 June 2013 (UTC)
Issue box removed--to repeat, no one has factually addressed the 'categorical analysis' above, so there is no factual basis for the box. Hence it can go. Tapered (talk) 06:44, 15 June 2013 (UTC)

Edit Discussion

Giuliano is in Misplaced Pages because he was a "well-publicized" bandit, not because he was a peasant or a Separatist. To suggest that "some say a bandit" has to be considered dubious editing--it would be interesting to find a source saying that he wasn't a bandit. The previous article mentioned myths, but none were documented; in fact the ostensible 'myths' are documented events, mentioned in the rewrite section concerning "Pattern of Operation." The minor doubts about responsibility for the deaths at Portella della Ginestra are documented in Chandler--mainly the possible presence of Mafia gunmen at the same time as Giuliano's well-documented participation, as well as the local Mafiosi's alibis and their warnings ahead of time to May Day enthusiasts. Tapered (talk) 13:31, 17 May 2013 (UTC)

Pfff, a lead is supposed to summarize the main facts of an article, which, in this case includes Giuliano being a sparatist. He is generally held responsible for the Portella della Ginestra massacre as established by the Courts, whether you like it or not. The doubts about are detail that belong further down in the article. - DonCalo (talk) 16:26, 17 May 2013 (UTC)
Separatism is included. The court's verdict was included, along with a statement about minor doubt. Tapered (talk) 16:34, 17 May 2013 (UTC)

"Giuliano became a figurine of political forces he did not understand" This is Hobsbawm's opinion/interpretation covered in the Interpretation section. It's presented here as though it were a fact like the rest of the Lead.Tapered (talk) 16:39, 17 May 2013 (UTC)

"He has been compared to Robin Hood in popular culture." This was supposedly referenced by Hobsbawm in a previous iteration of this article. In point of fact, Hobsbawm cites Robin Hood as the archetype of "noble robber" category of "popular bandit." He never compares him directly to Robin Hood. Giuliano's own photo of himself as "Robin Hood," and Hobsbawm's categorization of the bandit are both covered--neither is vital to a good Lead. Tapered (talk) 16:47, 17 May 2013 (UTC)

Dear Tapered, you had your go at the article and have made valuable contributions to it. However, there several issues with it as listed in the lead. Maybe it is time that you leave it for a while for others to clean it up. You are getting too emotionally involved, which is not a good recepy to improve the article. Thanks for your understanding. - DonCalo (talk) 17:17, 17 May 2013 (UTC)
That's covert label and dismiss. Label an editor "emotional" and dismiss the edit as a good 'go.' That's not civil and it's not Wikipedian. I'm staying away for a couple of days. A good faith response on your part would be an answer to my response to the complaints about the article. Also, I think the right place for this and your last response would be my Talk page or yours. Tapered (talk) 17:43, 17 May 2013 (UTC)

Removed the 'controversy' phrase from the Lead. I believe that it references Casarrubea's claim of a body-double. The DNA evidence is in, and the dubious logic of the body-double scenario has already been covered in the "Critique" section above. Tapered (talk) 22:36, 20 May 2013 (UTC)

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