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Revision as of 11:50, 3 July 2006 editTariqabjotu (talk | contribs)Administrators36,354 edits + items from peer review  Revision as of 11:54, 3 July 2006 edit undoTariqabjotu (talk | contribs)Administrators36,354 edits rephrased items for presentationNext edit →
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From ]: From ]:
*Remove image gallery (perhaps just replace it with a link to Wikimedia Commons)
*You may wan to check other City FAs, regarding the image gallary, whilst its nice, It might be better off as a commons link.
*The media section is a potential target for criticism at the FAC, as its just a list of external links. See ] for ideas. *Refactor the media section (as it is currently just a list of external links) to make it look more like ].
*Don't double up links in the See Also, for example, ] is already linked at the top. *Remove ''See Also'' links (like ]) that are already linked in the body of the article.
*Remove the list from the Moscow tourist attractions section
*Moscow tourist attractions is also a worry, there really shouldnt be many lists in articles.
*Expand the Education section
*Education could be expanded
*Explain the Crime Rates box better
*The crime rates box is confusing, as the system/% rate is not explained
*Copyedit the article
*Needs a copyedit.
*Why is Climate under tourism? *Move Climate from under Tourism
*Air pollution in Moscow should be a sub-section of something, its too short as it is. *Put ''Air pollution in Moscow'' in a sub-section (as it's too short as it is)
*Sift through the External Links, get rid of any that are not very helpful. *Sift through the External Links and get rid of any that are not very helpful.
*And yes, it needs A LOT of references... *Add a significant number of references
*Something about water transport could be added. Moscow has two passenger riverports and regular motorship routes used mostly for entertainment. *Add something about water transport (Moscow has two passenger riverports and regular motorship routes used mostly for entertainment)

Revision as of 11:54, 3 July 2006

From Moscow's peer review:

  • Remove image gallery (perhaps just replace it with a link to Wikimedia Commons)
  • Refactor the media section (as it is currently just a list of external links) to make it look more like Johannesburg's Communications and media section.
  • Remove See Also links (like History of Moscow) that are already linked in the body of the article.
  • Remove the list from the Moscow tourist attractions section
  • Expand the Education section
  • Explain the Crime Rates box better
  • Copyedit the article
  • Move Climate from under Tourism
  • Put Air pollution in Moscow in a sub-section (as it's too short as it is)
  • Sift through the External Links and get rid of any that are not very helpful.
  • Add a significant number of references
  • Add something about water transport (Moscow has two passenger riverports and regular motorship routes used mostly for entertainment)