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::::::::I was trying to give heed to the calls for having both his ascent and descent in the lede. I think "early success" is just as self-serving as "earned"; perhaps "received recognition" would be more neutral as it does not imply he deserved or conquered it. But I can live with your changes, I think it is better now, so I will leave it up to you. <span style="font-size: smaller;" class="autosigned">— Preceding ] comment added by ] (]) 02:58, 14 August 2012 (UTC)</span><!-- Template:Unsigned IP --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot--> ::::::::I was trying to give heed to the calls for having both his ascent and descent in the lede. I think "early success" is just as self-serving as "earned"; perhaps "received recognition" would be more neutral as it does not imply he deserved or conquered it. But I can live with your changes, I think it is better now, so I will leave it up to you. <span style="font-size: smaller;" class="autosigned">— Preceding ] comment added by ] (]) 02:58, 14 August 2012 (UTC)</span><!-- Template:Unsigned IP --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-->
:::::::::I'll leave it as is, and let others give their opinion on this, since this well-watched page has traditionally worked with the consensus of more than one or two editors. ] (]) 14:26, 14 August 2012 (UTC) :::::::::I'll leave it as is, and let others give their opinion on this, since this well-watched page has traditionally worked with the consensus of more than one or two editors. ] (]) 14:26, 14 August 2012 (UTC)

== Excessive length of Journalistic Controversy section ==

The size of the "Journalistic Controversy" section seems out of proportion to the rest of the article. For a figure whose career can be summarised in two short paragraphs, having a section on the scandal that destroyed his career that is around ten times that in length seems excessive and slightly odd. The return of the Orwell prize could be adequately summarised in two sentences, without the need for an entire section. Likewise there is no need for five paragraphs on the apology and criticism of it - it would suffice to say he apologised, a brief outline of it and the fact that the individuals concerned claim to not have received a personal apology. There is no need for the minutiae of who said what and when, and it looks like fluff.

I suggest a section on the plagiarism, a section on the sockpuppetry and a section on the fallout from these. We could lose over half of what is there currently and not lose any important information - only be left with a clearer article. <span style="font-size: smaller;" class="autosigned">— Preceding ] comment added by ] (]) 14:44, 10 October 2012 (UTC)</span><!-- Template:Unsigned IP --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-->

: someone with the IP 109.144.254.183 added as extended passage last week about Hari's carrer. I allowed most of it to stand. You are quite right that the article is now unbalanced in its emphasis. I did not allow the following to stand, and the notice : "in 2010 he was named as one of the twenty most powerful gay men in the world. ] by the Dutch magazine '']''." Obviously, this a blog like this is not a ]. I checked the earlier IP at the time, and found that it appeared to be from an internet cafe in London. The more recent IP looks as though it is from the same block. ] (]) 15:08, 10 October 2012 (UTC)

::I am the same person who made the edit last week but I am not posting from an internet cafe in London - I am in a house in Bristol. The addition I made in the previous week was an attempt to rebalance the article by increasing the section on Hari's career - it was a short section that had been previously removed but was still relevant. However, I feel that since his career is fairly short and relatively insignificant, that the two short paragraphs are an appropriate length for a summary of his career, so the article is better rebalanced by shortening the criticism section to something more succinct - hence this addition to the discussion section. ] (]) 15:41, 10 October 2012 (UTC)

::I am going to go ahead and attempt to make the Journalistic controversy section shorter, while not losing an important information. Hopefully this will make the article more balanced, relative to the size of the section on his career. ] (]) 13:25, 19 October 2012 (UTC)

::Ok, I've cut it down quite a bit, making it more readable and to the point. The important information is still there, but the article is in proportion to the length of Hari's career section.] (]) 14:37, 19 October 2012 (UTC)
::: Hang on, let's get consensus before deleting massive amounts of cited content. The controversy is what gives most notability, other than that he's not really that notable a journalist. ]</font><sup> (],])</sup> 14:48, 19 October 2012 (UTC)
::: The only other editor (PhillCross) agreed it was unbalanced and nobody else has replied in over a week. The controversy section is ten times the career section, which is fairly absurd in itself, as well as the section having a huge amount of fluff in it and being fairly unreadable.] (]) 14:57, 19 October 2012 (UTC)
::::I thought on the whole the cuts were an improvement. I thought the Orwell Prize section was too short though, as that was a major part of the controversy. I'll make an edit now. I would suggest to Atshal though that according to ], having made a bold edit which was immediately reverted they should now be discussing here, not reverting to their version. --] (]) 15:00, 19 October 2012 (UTC)
:::::Thanks, I've taken a look at that article now. I waited about a week before making the change because there was no discussion here. Looks like there might be now though, so lets wait and see what people think.] (]) 15:03, 19 October 2012 (UTC)
::::::To clarify my point of view, I thought the cuts were largely good, as I don't see the need to discuss in-depth the investigations of every single accusation of plagiarism made against him. However I thought the cuts to the Orwell Prize section went too far, as that was a major part of the controversy (that he had received a major journalism prize based in part on an article which turned out to be largely plagiarised from a ''Der Spiegel'' article, his main original "contributions" being to make the story more sensationalist and less accurate). --] (]) 15:11, 19 October 2012 (UTC)
:::::::Agreed. Feel free to build on what I did before if you like and improve the Orwell prize discussion. Will be interested to see what come up with.] (]) 15:32, 19 October 2012 (UTC)

:::::::: "The only other editor (PhillCross) agreed it was unbalanced". I did not advocate cuts. In fact I think there should be more about Hari's earlier career, but without suggesting (to use Nick Cohen's reference to the sock-puppetry of 'David r') that "the effect of Misplaced Pages is to make seem one of the essential writers of our times." ] (]) 15:55, 19 October 2012 (UTC)
{{od}} I think the article does need trimming, not to bring it into any form of ''balance'', the plagiarism et. all is what he is most famous for, the other career stuff isn't really notable when you remove the prizes he had to give back. The plagiarism section does tail off into a bit trivia ish / listy style certainly the last 3 sentences could be removed ]</font><sup> (],])</sup> 16:26, 19 October 2012 (UTC)
:I think the section that discusses the plagiarism is fairly unreadable and filled with fairly irrelevant opinions of various parties. If people want to leave it like that then fine, but I doubt anyone will want to trawl through and read it ever. Also, I do not agree that Hari is only famous for plagiarism - the very fact that his indiscretions were a big story was because he was a regular columnist in a major UK broadsheet for the best part of a decade, along with a bunch of other publications, and he was extremely well known for this. I think there used to be a bunch more about him and his career, but it has been deleted over the years.] (]) 13:54, 21 October 2012 (UTC)
:: I disagree, he was a reporter for a the smallest mainstream national newspaper in the UK, aside from the controversy he'd deserve nothing more than a footnote. ]</font><sup> (],])</sup> 15:12, 21 October 2012 (UTC)
:::With all due respect, if he was not a reasonably prominent figure then the plagiarism/wiki scandals would have not had such an impact. He was a "darling of the left" and regularly published in a whole range of high profile publications - New Statesman, Guardian, Le Monde, New York Times - over the span of 10 years, was a common "talking head" on TV and interviewed a whole bunch of prominent people (e.g. Tony Blair, the Dalai Lama). Either he was a significant media figure, or the scandal was not significant - I don't believe it can be both ways.
:::What the case is, I am not really passionate enough about it to pursue it. I feel the article is fairly unreadable now and feel my shortened version is far better in that respect, but if people would prefer to leave it as is then there is nothing I can really do about it.] (]) 16:34, 21 October 2012 (UTC)
::::]. Also, creating another sockpuppet might help if you think your viewpoint doesn't have enough adherents. Just an idea. Of couse, it's against policy-schmolicy. --] (]) 19:11, 30 October 2012 (UTC)
::::: With all due respect, I do not understand why you are posting here, if you have nothing constructive to say about the article. Or indeed, anything to say about the article at all... ] (]) 19:59, 30 October 2012 (UTC)
::::::Whereas you probably have ] to say about the article. I've asked you . Answer it. --] (]) 21:45, 30 October 2012 (UTC)
:::::::Atshal has deleted said question without answering: . --] (]) 11:15, 31 October 2012 (UTC)
::::::::An anonymous user accusing me of being a sockpuppet without any justification or evidence, other than the fact I have taken an interest in this particular article, is not really worthy of a response. Especially since the anonymous user seems to have a decent idea of the workings of Misplaced Pages editing (given his link to ]), so is likely to have an account of his own that he is choosing not to post under. Ironic. ] (]) 11:52, 31 October 2012 (UTC)
:::::::::So are you Johann Hari or not? Further sidestepping the question defaults to "yes". I will not publicly disclose the reasons for my suspicion, for ]. Wouldn't want to educate sockpuppeteers on how to better avoid detection. --] (]) 12:49, 31 October 2012 (UTC)
::::::::::A 'yes' or 'no' answer is pointless, since the answer will obviously always be 'no' regardless of who I am. You do not have some kind of "secret" reason for being suspicious, other than the fact that I took an interest in this article and I feel the scandal section is too long in relation to the rest of the article. That is not a valid reason. If you actually suspect that I am a sockpuppet then I suggest you get in touch with an admin. They will look at the IP address I am making these posts from and find it is from an academic institution in the UK. Indeed, it will actually be possible to identify the department I am making these posts from in that institution. Unless Johann Hari has gone back to University to retrain as an applied mathematician and nobody knows about it, this means I am unlikely to be Johann Hari. ] (]) 13:06, 31 October 2012 (UTC)
:::::::::::A "no" would be particularly interesting in case it's disproven. I happen to have other, less obvious reasons for my suspicion. Anyway, I've asked the question and you have answered as openly as you would. --] (]) 13:29, 31 October 2012 (UTC)
:::::::::::: Well I know that you have no other reasons, since I am not Johann Hari, and have never met him or communicated with him in any way. I guess you are just trying to cause trouble. I also suggest you sign in to your real account before making this kind of post. ] (]) 13:42, 31 October 2012 (UTC)
:::::::::::::{{xt|I know that you have no other reasons}} -- Nonsense. I said I have ''reasons for my suspicion'' other than the obvious ones you mentioned. That is the truth. I never said, as you are wrongly implying, that I have ''definitive proof''. Otherwise I'd hardly be bringing this up on this talk page.
:::::::::::::Also, you can hardly be surprised that someone would ask you that question. You are a very new user showing a strong interest in this article. This is one of only four articles you have edited, and one of only two which you have edited more than once. (This is not the main reason for my suspicion btw.) So please don't act all surprised. --] (]) 16:51, 31 October 2012 (UTC)
::::::::::::::I am going to choose to stop engaging with you after this post. I have already stated that I am making these posts from an academic institution, which Johann Hari would have no access to. Any Misplaced Pages admin can check this and can also see I am posting from a computer based in a mathematical sciences department. The other article I have shown an interest in is ] - perhaps I am ] in disguise? I believe my conduct during my short time here has been good, and any errors I have made have been due to unfamiliarity with the Misplaced Pages way of doing things - I have followed any helpful advice given to me by other editors. I find it mildly ironic that you are posting anonymously when it is likely you gave a real account, while at the same time accusing me of being a sockpuppet. ] (]) 17:05, 31 October 2012 (UTC)
* I'm going to add to that; if you keep ] Atshal, 89.0.205.78, you may find yourself restricted. ]<small><sup>]</sup></small> 17:20, 31 October 2012 (UTC)
My feeling would be that, while the article isn't perfect, the balance is actually pretty good. He was a reasonably prominent journalist for his age with a promising career ahead, but beyond the media bubble he wasn't really known. He certainly didn't have the prominence of a John Simpson or Charles Wheeler, say. Had his career ended for other reasons - accidental death, perhaps - I doubt his article would have been more than a few lines long, if he had an article at all.

The 'journalistic controversies', however, attracted attention beyond his normal audience and is quite possibly the primary reason a lot of people (maybe the majority?) know his name, if they do at all. The controversies themselves were quite interesting in their own right. His use of WP and other sites to both promote himself and attack others is an issue which is becoming increasingly prominent and discussion-worthy (several well-known authors have recently been caught doing similar, for instance), and the very unusual nature of his 'plagiarism' created a lot of debate, and will perhaps set a precedent. I don't think anyone had ever been accused of plagiarism in quote those circumstances. In both cases, it is either the first or one of the first prominent cases of its kind. And in both cases, the issues of exactly what happened were very complicated and need careful explanation if they're to be explained at all. Along with the fact that the controversies are probably the prime reason he's known suggests to me the balance is about right.

Also, the recent major edit reduced the article to little more than is contained in the lead. One must assume that if someone's read beyond the lead they have an interest in the detail of the subject, not just a brief overview. While that shouldn't be taken as licence to write endless pages of minutiae, if the article doesn't contain enough information to add anything more than cursory knowledge, we may as well not have the article at all. <small><span class="autosigned">— Preceding ] comment added by ] (] • ]) 23:13, 21 October 2012 (UTC)</span></small><!-- Template:Unsigned --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-->
:To be honest, he is still little known outside the media bubble even after the scandal, he is simply better known within the Wiki bubble because this was a story involving Misplaced Pages - hence why that section of the article is so long. I might have a go at beefing up the career section at some point, and editing the controversy section to get rid of some of the fluff but leave more than I did last time. ] (]) 10:45, 23 October 2012 (UTC)
::I think a less drastic cut than your previous attempt is probably the way forward. I was considering having a go myself, but I don't currently have a vast amount of time for Misplaced Pages. --] (]) 10:49, 23 October 2012 (UTC)

It may be worth discussing your changes, or your rationale for what is fluff, first. If you flick through the archives you'll see it's been discussed at great length by a lot of people and I suspect anything too blunt will be reverted. ] (]) 21:17, 23 October 2012 (UTC)

== Political views section ==

Just tidied up a bit; I took out the 'classical liberal positions' bit, as it seems that enough people were upset by it. I wrote it originally to mean liberal in a popular english language way, rather than a political history way, and it doesn't need to stay, so I've chopped it out.
Also I've chopped out the gay rights bit with the accompanying citation, as the way I've restructured the para put the gay rights citation next to the gay man citation, making it seem redundant to my jaundiced eye. If anyone objects then the axed citation could go in as another cite in the gay man part (as if it needed another one...)<span style="font: small-caps 14px times;"><b>] <sup>]</sup></b></span> 08:16, 24 March 2012 (UTC)

Could Team Hari please stop revising this story in an attempt to hide Hari's professional misconduct and disgrace below boilerplate fluff about his "personal views", as if anyone cares any more. Hari is no longer a journalist - he is a former journalist who has published nothing since he was sacked by the Indie two years ago. Yrs, David Rose. <span style="font-size: smaller;" class="autosigned">— Preceding ] comment added by ] (]) 12:11, 1 January 2013 (UTC)</span><!-- Template:Unsigned IP --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-->

: I moved the above comment to this section, as it was floating around at the top of the page. As for the comment itself, Hari had a ten year career and was a commentator of note, with a regular column in a national newspaper, a published book and regular TV appearances - the very reasons that the later controversy was of note. A short section on his career and views is entirely appropriate. As for not being a journalist any more, he has published at least two journalistic articles in the second half of 2012 and, apparently, is writing a book on the war on drugs in America. Clearly a journalist still. ] (]) 12:25, 4 January 2013 (UTC)

Revision as of 00:24, 24 January 2015

This is an archive of past discussions about Johann Hari. Do not edit the contents of this page. If you wish to start a new discussion or revive an old one, please do so on the current talk page.
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Picture

I see there's been a bit of disagrement on which picture of Hari to use. For the record, I think that the pic that user:Stevehorowitz used is better, for the same reasons that I liked it when I argued for it going in against dave rose/Hari. Of course, we could have both pictures. What do we all think?FelixFelix 09:33, 15 November 2011 (UTC)

I don't mind sticking 2 pictures in but the current image is far better technically (no blown highlight etc), and shows his features better. You can barely tell that the other one actually is Hari. The argument that was had previously was different because rose/hari was arguing to use a non-free image instead of the free one.
I am also a little bit wary that it could come across as trying to spite Hari. He clearly didn't like the photo, but now he's been found out doesn't mean we should necessarily ignore his feelings. If this was anyone else with alternative free images we would normally pay some heed to the subject of the article's wishes. Polequant (talk) 10:21, 15 November 2011 (UTC)
I fully agree with Polequant regarding the terrible quality of the photo that User:Stevehorowitz was trying to substitute with. Extreme blown highlights all over the place, poorer resolution, profile view which is not very representative of Hari or typical of other bio images. I don't see any reason to have such a poor image in this article at all, even if it is a second image. The fact that Hari himself doesn't like it is irrelevant. It's just an awful image, and would be so for anyone, because of the poor quality and composition. Here are the two photos for comparison:
Current photo
Replacement?

First Light (talk) 15:44, 15 November 2011 (UTC)

It's not that bad, I think that calling it awful is a bit much-it is him, and it shows him working, which is quite nice-there are plenty of worse pics on WP. and have been much worse ones of Hari on this page (the unrecognisable one of him on a Greenpeace platform springs to mind).FelixFelix 16:43, 16 November 2011 (UTC)
Sure, but "it's not that bad" is certainly not a reason to choose a photo. Rather the reverse, if a better one exists. --Merlinme (talk) 17:12, 16 November 2011 (UTC)
Felix, that photo is awful. As a photographer with several (plant) photos on Misplaced Pages articles, I would be embarrassed to upload such a poor quality image, especially when there are better ones available. If there is going to be a second photo, let's put back the publicity shot that used to be in the infobox, as a second photo in the article. First Light (talk) 18:48, 16 November 2011 (UTC)
I think that given that it was the unscrupulous Hari himself who lied about and removed the photograph, it is all the more important we assert the independence of Misplaced Pages and use it to defy his attempts to silence it. I wouldn't be surprised if one or more of the latest objectors were not a new sockpuppet. Stevehorowitz (talk) 12:43, 22 November 2011 (UTC)
And there we seem to have the motivation for the picture change. Thanks for proving my point. And if you suspect sockpuppets please go to WP:SPI. Polequant (talk) 13:10, 22 November 2011 (UTC)
Steve, you're asserting we might be sock puppets because we don't like a bad photo? At least in my case, a two and a half second look at my contribution history would surely put paid to that idea. As far as "asserting the independence of Misplaced Pages", I really don't see how including a not very good photo to make a point does that. --Merlinme (talk) 13:49, 22 November 2011 (UTC)
Steve, a look at my edits would also show that I'm clearly not a supporter of Hari. I am a supporter of Misplaced Pages, and a ridiculously poor quality image makes Misplaced Pages look ridiculous. Other neutral and longtime editors here agree. First Light (talk) 16:22, 22 November 2011 (UTC)
For what it's worth, the photo on the left looks like Johann Hari, doing a job. The one on the right looks like Russell T Davies stealing yet more ideas for his Doctor Who reboot. There's no question that the left photo is better. doktorb words 16:48, 22 November 2011 (UTC)
Seconded.FelixFelix 08:50, 24 November 2011 (UTC)

Dubious intro

I see pro-Hari revisionism is creeping back into this entry. I have therefore revised the intro to better reflect the actual state of affairs. I leave it to other more proficient wiki editors to redress the balance of the rest of the article: why is so much top space given to discussions of Hari's school, birthplace and the topics he writes about, pushing the most important and notable features of his career - plagiarism and deception - well down to the bottom of the page? Compare the Jayson Blair page, another disgraced journalist.


The article currently states:

In 2011, Hari was accused of plagiarism;

The use of accused in this context is clearly an innuendo to suggest "pending". When in fact he is a plagiarist and that has been confirmed. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 86.148.205.178 (talk) 16:03, 8 December 2011 (UTC)

If you carry on reading you will see that there is no innuendo. It describes a sequence of events - First he was accused, then he was suspended from the Independent (whilst they did their investigation) etc, and then he apologised. I don't see how anyone could have any doubt about whether had plagiarised after reading the introduction. If you think it could be better worded please feel free to suggest something. Polequant (talk) 16:17, 8 December 2011 (UTC)
I changed it so that the lede cuts to the chase ("admitted to plagiarism"), rather than describing the sequence of events, since the sequential detail is provided in the body of the article, where it should be. First Light (talk) 16:33, 8 December 2011 (UTC)
Hmm, not too sure about that. The start of the following sentence is then a repetition of the same thing. To my mind it also confuses how it all happened. Will have a think about how it can be better phrased. Polequant (talk) 16:39, 8 December 2011 (UTC)
I think the IP was pointing out, rightfully so, that the prominence in the lede of "accused" made it sound like it was just an accusation. The lede does need to cut to the chase, since Hari is notable because he did plagiarize, not because he was accused of plagiarizing. Yes, the next sentence perhaps doesn't need to say that he also apologized for plagiarism. First Light (talk) 16:47, 8 December 2011 (UTC)
It didn't read like that to me at all. I don't agree with the lead 'cutting to the chase' - you only had to read the next sentence! A lead should be brief, but your changes didn't make it any briefer, but rather confuses the sequence of things. Now it sounds like he owned up to plagiarism, but actually part of the story is that he didn't own up to it at first. Polequant (talk) 17:11, 8 December 2011 (UTC)
Then it should say that he didn't own up to it at first - better to be too clear than too brief. And the most notable feature of it all is that he practiced and admitted plagiarism, just as an accused criminal who was eventually convicted would start out by saying the person was convicted of x crime, not that they were accused of x crime. I'm open to ideas, of course, but I understand the IP's confusion. I've given it another try, because the IP has a valid point, in my opinion. First Light (talk) 18:47, 8 December 2011 (UTC)

Talk:David Rose (disambiguation)

There's a discussion concerning Johann Hari over at Talk:David Rose (disambiguation), which people watching this page might be able to help with -- Boing! said Zebedee (talk) 21:13, 6 January 2012 (UTC)

Labelling

See WP:BLPCAT:

Categories regarding religious beliefs or sexual orientation should not be used unless the subject has publicly self-identified with the belief or orientation in question, and the subject's beliefs or sexual orientation are relevant to their public life or notability, according to reliable published sources.

At this point, I have not found a source for Hari specifically self-identifying as "LGBT" which means that "outside lists" so labelling him are not sufficient per Misplaced Pages policy. Cheers. Collect (talk) 22:30, 11 March 2012 (UTC)

Here is one of many, in this case from the opening of a piece by Hari for The Huffington Post now cited in the article:

This is a taboo topic for a gay left-wing man like me to touch, but there has always been a weird, disproportionate overlap between homosexuality and fascism.

Philip Cross (talk) 23:02, 11 March 2012 (UTC)
Glad to see one now being furnished - I trust you see why such a source is required. Collect (talk) 23:03, 11 March 2012 (UTC)

Introductory section

The intro to this article is ridiculous. The first line lauds Hari's "successful, award winning career" when his career is now in the toilet, and he's been obliged to hand many of his awards back. I have removed this claim, however I leave it to more experienced Wikipedians to fix the rest of this article, which seems to go to extraordinary lengths to hide the known details of Hari's dishonesty below a lot of fluff about which school he went to. Only when you read to the end of the page, well below the fold, does the scale of Hari's dishonesty become apparent. Contrast the Jayson Blair entry (another fabricating journalist.) Hari's offences also include the protracted gaming of Misplaced Pages using sockpuppets on his own page and elsewhere. Surely Misplaced Pages now has a responsibility to redress the partiality of this entire entry. 1.4.148.11 (talk) 06:53, 16 April 2012 (UTC)

Read WP:NPOV and WP:BLP. We have an obligation to obey both. Hari might be Satan incarnate, but we are bound by the very foundations of Misplaced Pages to follow the policies named. Cheers. Collect (talk) 13:02, 16 April 2012 (UTC)
Yes, I added the "successful, award-winning career" ref as, prior to the scandal breaking, Hari was probably the most decorated and successful young journalist in Britain. A sort of "wunderkind" in the trade. Which made his fall all the more sensational. These are the key ideas of his career which need to be reflected in the lead. Jprw (talk) 13:44, 16 April 2012 (UTC)
I'm opposed to the fluff in the first sentence - there are far more notable and real award-winning authors who aren't defined that way in the first sentence of their bio articles. See Thomas Friedman (three Pulitzers) and Fareed Zakaria (Padma Bhushan) for a couple of examples of journalist who have won truly notable awards. If anything, the first sentence should be the main way that they are perceived. Right now it's simply as a British journalist, similar to the two examples I mentioned. If you google news articles from the last year, you see "disgraced" more commonly used than "award-winning." I'm not going to edit-war over it, but a compromise might be that he "had a successful, award-winning career before admitting to plagiarism, etc." Or to add the positive stuff in the context of the following sentences. That's all I'll say, as this isn't as important to me as it seems to be to others. First Light (talk) 15:11, 16 April 2012 (UTC)
First Light's suggestion of "Successful ?award winning? career before admitting to plagiarism", with or without the words "award winning", looks a reasonable approach to me. Some editors have suggested that the lead should concentrate more on what he is notable for, i.e. plagiarism. However that seems harsh; he was notable well before the plagiarism accusations, and I certainly don't think the lead should focus on those accusations to the exclusion of everything else. --Merlinme (talk) 16:27, 16 April 2012 (UTC)
Have reworded so that the first sentence in the lead includes both the awards and the downfall. Straw Cat (talk) 22:49, 16 April 2012 (UTC)
I've trimmed out the fluff from the lede again-it's completely redundant, and somewhat subjective. His career before his fall is adequately detailed in the text; this article has chronically and fairly shamefully gathered fluff throughout its career, lets keep it crisp, concise and factual.FelixFelix 09:04, 17 April 2012 (UTC)
But is it redundant? Hari is primarily known for two things: 1) being the rising star (wunderkind / enfant terrible, take your pick) of UK journalism, various awards being showered on him by various organisations, etc. and 2) having his career cut short by scandal. The trouble with the revised wording is that 1) above is not reflected. Jprw (talk) 11:46, 17 April 2012 (UTC)
Added your "rising star" bit followed by his subsequent downfall (not to sound too dramatic). I also switched from the "akward voice" to the passive voice - there is no reason for him to "be suspended from" and "surrender his award" in the same clause when he can suffer both actions and "be stripped of" instead. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 187.113.199.3 (talk) 12:29, 13 August 2012 (UTC)
I prefer the earlier version. First of all, "praise and recognition at an early age" makes him sound like some 5-year old journalism savant. And "earned" is rather self-serving and not exactly neutral. He is most notable for the plagiarism and attacks - that should be mentioned first, front and center, rather than "He earned praise and recognition at an early age." First Light (talk) 00:30, 14 August 2012 (UTC)
I streamlined it to "Following early success..." and put the suspensions first after that, since they more clearly address that early success and the mention in the first sentence of being a columnist at The Independent. First Light (talk) 01:02, 14 August 2012 (UTC)
I was trying to give heed to the calls for having both his ascent and descent in the lede. I think "early success" is just as self-serving as "earned"; perhaps "received recognition" would be more neutral as it does not imply he deserved or conquered it. But I can live with your changes, I think it is better now, so I will leave it up to you. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 187.113.199.3 (talk) 02:58, 14 August 2012 (UTC)
I'll leave it as is, and let others give their opinion on this, since this well-watched page has traditionally worked with the consensus of more than one or two editors. First Light (talk) 14:26, 14 August 2012 (UTC)

Excessive length of Journalistic Controversy section

The size of the "Journalistic Controversy" section seems out of proportion to the rest of the article. For a figure whose career can be summarised in two short paragraphs, having a section on the scandal that destroyed his career that is around ten times that in length seems excessive and slightly odd. The return of the Orwell prize could be adequately summarised in two sentences, without the need for an entire section. Likewise there is no need for five paragraphs on the apology and criticism of it - it would suffice to say he apologised, a brief outline of it and the fact that the individuals concerned claim to not have received a personal apology. There is no need for the minutiae of who said what and when, and it looks like fluff.

I suggest a section on the plagiarism, a section on the sockpuppetry and a section on the fallout from these. We could lose over half of what is there currently and not lose any important information - only be left with a clearer article. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 109.144.188.201 (talk) 14:44, 10 October 2012 (UTC)

In this edit someone with the IP 109.144.254.183 added as extended passage last week about Hari's carrer. I allowed most of it to stand. You are quite right that the article is now unbalanced in its emphasis. I did not allow the following to stand, and the notice : "in 2010 he was named as one of the twenty most powerful gay men in the world. by the Dutch magazine Winq." Obviously, this a blog like this is not a reliable source. I checked the earlier IP at the time, and found that it appeared to be from an internet cafe in London. The more recent IP looks as though it is from the same block. Philip Cross (talk) 15:08, 10 October 2012 (UTC)
I am the same person who made the edit last week but I am not posting from an internet cafe in London - I am in a house in Bristol. The addition I made in the previous week was an attempt to rebalance the article by increasing the section on Hari's career - it was a short section that had been previously removed but was still relevant. However, I feel that since his career is fairly short and relatively insignificant, that the two short paragraphs are an appropriate length for a summary of his career, so the article is better rebalanced by shortening the criticism section to something more succinct - hence this addition to the discussion section. 109.144.188.201 (talk) 15:41, 10 October 2012 (UTC)
I am going to go ahead and attempt to make the Journalistic controversy section shorter, while not losing an important information. Hopefully this will make the article more balanced, relative to the size of the section on his career. Atshal (talk) 13:25, 19 October 2012 (UTC)
Ok, I've cut it down quite a bit, making it more readable and to the point. The important information is still there, but the article is in proportion to the length of Hari's career section.Atshal (talk) 14:37, 19 October 2012 (UTC)
Hang on, let's get consensus before deleting massive amounts of cited content. The controversy is what gives most notability, other than that he's not really that notable a journalist. GimliDotNet 14:48, 19 October 2012 (UTC)
The only other editor (PhillCross) agreed it was unbalanced and nobody else has replied in over a week. The controversy section is ten times the career section, which is fairly absurd in itself, as well as the section having a huge amount of fluff in it and being fairly unreadable.Atshal (talk) 14:57, 19 October 2012 (UTC)
I thought on the whole the cuts were an improvement. I thought the Orwell Prize section was too short though, as that was a major part of the controversy. I'll make an edit now. I would suggest to Atshal though that according to WP:Bold, Revert, Discuss, having made a bold edit which was immediately reverted they should now be discussing here, not reverting to their version. --Merlinme (talk) 15:00, 19 October 2012 (UTC)
Thanks, I've taken a look at that article now. I waited about a week before making the change because there was no discussion here. Looks like there might be now though, so lets wait and see what people think.Atshal (talk) 15:03, 19 October 2012 (UTC)
To clarify my point of view, I thought the cuts were largely good, as I don't see the need to discuss in-depth the investigations of every single accusation of plagiarism made against him. However I thought the cuts to the Orwell Prize section went too far, as that was a major part of the controversy (that he had received a major journalism prize based in part on an article which turned out to be largely plagiarised from a Der Spiegel article, his main original "contributions" being to make the story more sensationalist and less accurate). --Merlinme (talk) 15:11, 19 October 2012 (UTC)
Agreed. Feel free to build on what I did before if you like and improve the Orwell prize discussion. Will be interested to see what come up with.Atshal (talk) 15:32, 19 October 2012 (UTC)
"The only other editor (PhillCross) agreed it was unbalanced". I did not advocate cuts. In fact I think there should be more about Hari's earlier career, but without suggesting (to use Nick Cohen's reference to the sock-puppetry of 'David r') that "the effect of Misplaced Pages is to make seem one of the essential writers of our times." Philip Cross (talk) 15:55, 19 October 2012 (UTC)

I think the article does need trimming, not to bring it into any form of balance, the plagiarism et. all is what he is most famous for, the other career stuff isn't really notable when you remove the prizes he had to give back. The plagiarism section does tail off into a bit trivia ish / listy style certainly the last 3 sentences could be removed GimliDotNet 16:26, 19 October 2012 (UTC)

I think the section that discusses the plagiarism is fairly unreadable and filled with fairly irrelevant opinions of various parties. If people want to leave it like that then fine, but I doubt anyone will want to trawl through and read it ever. Also, I do not agree that Hari is only famous for plagiarism - the very fact that his indiscretions were a big story was because he was a regular columnist in a major UK broadsheet for the best part of a decade, along with a bunch of other publications, and he was extremely well known for this. I think there used to be a bunch more about him and his career, but it has been deleted over the years.Atshal (talk) 13:54, 21 October 2012 (UTC)
I disagree, he was a reporter for a the smallest mainstream national newspaper in the UK, aside from the controversy he'd deserve nothing more than a footnote. GimliDotNet 15:12, 21 October 2012 (UTC)
With all due respect, if he was not a reasonably prominent figure then the plagiarism/wiki scandals would have not had such an impact. He was a "darling of the left" and regularly published in a whole range of high profile publications - New Statesman, Guardian, Le Monde, New York Times - over the span of 10 years, was a common "talking head" on TV and interviewed a whole bunch of prominent people (e.g. Tony Blair, the Dalai Lama). Either he was a significant media figure, or the scandal was not significant - I don't believe it can be both ways.
What the case is, I am not really passionate enough about it to pursue it. I feel the article is fairly unreadable now and feel my shortened version is far better in that respect, but if people would prefer to leave it as is then there is nothing I can really do about it.Atshal (talk) 16:34, 21 October 2012 (UTC)
Do not say "With all due respect". Also, creating another sockpuppet might help if you think your viewpoint doesn't have enough adherents. Just an idea. Of couse, it's against policy-schmolicy. --78.35.245.142 (talk) 19:11, 30 October 2012 (UTC)
With all due respect, I do not understand why you are posting here, if you have nothing constructive to say about the article. Or indeed, anything to say about the article at all... Atshal (talk) 19:59, 30 October 2012 (UTC)
Whereas you probably have too much to say about the article. I've asked you a simple question. Answer it. --78.35.245.142 (talk) 21:45, 30 October 2012 (UTC)
Atshal has deleted said question without answering: . --Merlinme (talk) 11:15, 31 October 2012 (UTC)
An anonymous user accusing me of being a sockpuppet without any justification or evidence, other than the fact I have taken an interest in this particular article, is not really worthy of a response. Especially since the anonymous user seems to have a decent idea of the workings of Misplaced Pages editing (given his link to Do not say "With all due respect"), so is likely to have an account of his own that he is choosing not to post under. Ironic. Atshal (talk) 11:52, 31 October 2012 (UTC)
So are you Johann Hari or not? Further sidestepping the question defaults to "yes". I will not publicly disclose the reasons for my suspicion, for obvious reasons. Wouldn't want to educate sockpuppeteers on how to better avoid detection. --89.0.205.78 (talk) 12:49, 31 October 2012 (UTC)
A 'yes' or 'no' answer is pointless, since the answer will obviously always be 'no' regardless of who I am. You do not have some kind of "secret" reason for being suspicious, other than the fact that I took an interest in this article and I feel the scandal section is too long in relation to the rest of the article. That is not a valid reason. If you actually suspect that I am a sockpuppet then I suggest you get in touch with an admin. They will look at the IP address I am making these posts from and find it is from an academic institution in the UK. Indeed, it will actually be possible to identify the department I am making these posts from in that institution. Unless Johann Hari has gone back to University to retrain as an applied mathematician and nobody knows about it, this means I am unlikely to be Johann Hari. Atshal (talk) 13:06, 31 October 2012 (UTC)
A "no" would be particularly interesting in case it's disproven. I happen to have other, less obvious reasons for my suspicion. Anyway, I've asked the question and you have answered as openly as you would. --89.0.205.78 (talk) 13:29, 31 October 2012 (UTC)
Well I know that you have no other reasons, since I am not Johann Hari, and have never met him or communicated with him in any way. I guess you are just trying to cause trouble. I also suggest you sign in to your real account before making this kind of post. Atshal (talk) 13:42, 31 October 2012 (UTC)
I know that you have no other reasons -- Nonsense. I said I have reasons for my suspicion other than the obvious ones you mentioned. That is the truth. I never said, as you are wrongly implying, that I have definitive proof. Otherwise I'd hardly be bringing this up on this talk page.
Also, you can hardly be surprised that someone would ask you that question. You are a very new user showing a strong interest in this article. This is one of only four articles you have edited, and one of only two which you have edited more than once. (This is not the main reason for my suspicion btw.) So please don't act all surprised. --89.0.205.78 (talk) 16:51, 31 October 2012 (UTC)
I am going to choose to stop engaging with you after this post. I have already stated that I am making these posts from an academic institution, which Johann Hari would have no access to. Any Misplaced Pages admin can check this and can also see I am posting from a computer based in a mathematical sciences department. The other article I have shown an interest in is Gaia Hypothesis - perhaps I am James Lovelock in disguise? I believe my conduct during my short time here has been good, and any errors I have made have been due to unfamiliarity with the Misplaced Pages way of doing things - I have followed any helpful advice given to me by other editors. I find it mildly ironic that you are posting anonymously when it is likely you gave a real account, while at the same time accusing me of being a sockpuppet. Atshal (talk) 17:05, 31 October 2012 (UTC)

My feeling would be that, while the article isn't perfect, the balance is actually pretty good. He was a reasonably prominent journalist for his age with a promising career ahead, but beyond the media bubble he wasn't really known. He certainly didn't have the prominence of a John Simpson or Charles Wheeler, say. Had his career ended for other reasons - accidental death, perhaps - I doubt his article would have been more than a few lines long, if he had an article at all.

The 'journalistic controversies', however, attracted attention beyond his normal audience and is quite possibly the primary reason a lot of people (maybe the majority?) know his name, if they do at all. The controversies themselves were quite interesting in their own right. His use of WP and other sites to both promote himself and attack others is an issue which is becoming increasingly prominent and discussion-worthy (several well-known authors have recently been caught doing similar, for instance), and the very unusual nature of his 'plagiarism' created a lot of debate, and will perhaps set a precedent. I don't think anyone had ever been accused of plagiarism in quote those circumstances. In both cases, it is either the first or one of the first prominent cases of its kind. And in both cases, the issues of exactly what happened were very complicated and need careful explanation if they're to be explained at all. Along with the fact that the controversies are probably the prime reason he's known suggests to me the balance is about right.

Also, the recent major edit reduced the article to little more than is contained in the lead. One must assume that if someone's read beyond the lead they have an interest in the detail of the subject, not just a brief overview. While that shouldn't be taken as licence to write endless pages of minutiae, if the article doesn't contain enough information to add anything more than cursory knowledge, we may as well not have the article at all. — Preceding unsigned comment added by BearAllen (talkcontribs) 23:13, 21 October 2012 (UTC)

To be honest, he is still little known outside the media bubble even after the scandal, he is simply better known within the Wiki bubble because this was a story involving Misplaced Pages - hence why that section of the article is so long. I might have a go at beefing up the career section at some point, and editing the controversy section to get rid of some of the fluff but leave more than I did last time. Atshal (talk) 10:45, 23 October 2012 (UTC)
I think a less drastic cut than your previous attempt is probably the way forward. I was considering having a go myself, but I don't currently have a vast amount of time for Misplaced Pages. --Merlinme (talk) 10:49, 23 October 2012 (UTC)

It may be worth discussing your changes, or your rationale for what is fluff, first. If you flick through the archives you'll see it's been discussed at great length by a lot of people and I suspect anything too blunt will be reverted. BearAllen (talk) 21:17, 23 October 2012 (UTC)

Political views section

Just tidied up a bit; I took out the 'classical liberal positions' bit, as it seems that enough people were upset by it. I wrote it originally to mean liberal in a popular english language way, rather than a political history way, and it doesn't need to stay, so I've chopped it out. Also I've chopped out the gay rights bit with the accompanying citation, as the way I've restructured the para put the gay rights citation next to the gay man citation, making it seem redundant to my jaundiced eye. If anyone objects then the axed citation could go in as another cite in the gay man part (as if it needed another one...)FelixFelix 08:16, 24 March 2012 (UTC)

Could Team Hari please stop revising this story in an attempt to hide Hari's professional misconduct and disgrace below boilerplate fluff about his "personal views", as if anyone cares any more. Hari is no longer a journalist - he is a former journalist who has published nothing since he was sacked by the Indie two years ago. Yrs, David Rose. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 58.8.52.181 (talk) 12:11, 1 January 2013 (UTC)

I moved the above comment to this section, as it was floating around at the top of the page. As for the comment itself, Hari had a ten year career and was a commentator of note, with a regular column in a national newspaper, a published book and regular TV appearances - the very reasons that the later controversy was of note. A short section on his career and views is entirely appropriate. As for not being a journalist any more, he has published at least two journalistic articles in the second half of 2012 and, apparently, is writing a book on the war on drugs in America. Clearly a journalist still. Atshal (talk) 12:25, 4 January 2013 (UTC)