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'':The aircraft can carry up to two pilots, and the high amount canopy and the tandem seating allow the pilots superior visibility, vital to successfuly locking onto enemy targets.'' :''The aircraft can carry up to two pilots, and the high amount canopy and the tandem seating allow the pilots superior visibility, vital to successfuly locking onto enemy targets.''
What exactly is "high amount canopy" supposed to mean? I want to clean this up, but as I am unsure of the origianl intent, I am waiting. --] 19:14, 1 October 2006 (UTC) What exactly is "high amount canopy" supposed to mean? I want to clean this up, but as I am unsure of the origianl intent, I am waiting. --] 19:14, 1 October 2006 (UTC)

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Cleanup

Grammar could be tightened just a bit. Expansion would be nice, too... - Aerobird 02:38, 7 March 2006 (UTC)

I've cleaned it up considerably. Expansion would still be nice. :-) - Aerobird 03:37, 7 March 2006 (UTC)
How should I further expand it? Thanks (Wikimachine 05:15, 18 May 2006 (UTC))

Grammar

The aircraft can carry up to two pilots, and the high amount canopy and the tandem seating allow the pilots superior visibility, vital to successfuly locking onto enemy targets.

What exactly is "high amount canopy" supposed to mean? I want to clean this up, but as I am unsure of the origianl intent, I am waiting. --BillCJ 19:14, 1 October 2006 (UTC)

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