| Revision as of 23:14, 6 March 2018 editSdvlajb73 (talk | contribs)2 editsNo edit summary← Previous edit | Revision as of 23:30, 6 March 2018 edit undoMatthewVanitas (talk | contribs)Autopatrolled, Extended confirmed users, Pending changes reviewers, Rollbackers120,868 edits Declining submission: You're definitely on the right track, but you need to put some more meat on the bones. By the way, you are spot-on with how to footnote your sources, so keep that up. Looking at Google, this band should meet Notability by virtue of the coverage they've gotten, so what I suggest is that you look at the reviews by Spin, Vulture, Pitchfork, the other major players. I wouldn't just add the fact "reviewed by Spin", but I would suggest you make a "Critical reception" section and say something like (just making something up) "Pitchfork's Don Smith said the band shows influence of Dub is a Weapon and DJ Quik" or whatever. This isn't a "won't publish" Decline, this is a "beef it up and we'll almost definitely publish it" Decline. This is an iterative process, not a diss, so just take the feedback and apply it, then click Resubmit for next review. (AFCH 0.9)Next edit → | ||
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| ⚫ | SOB X RBE is a hip-hop collective from Vallejo, California, composed of artists Yhung T.O, Slimmy B, Da Boii, and Lul G.<ref>{{Cite news|url=http://www.thefader.com/2017/04/26/sob-x-rbe-interview-slimmy-b-daboii-lul-g-yhung-to|title=A Raw Conversation With SOB x RBE, The Vallejo Boys Setting The Bay On Fire|work=The FADER|access-date=2018-03-06|language=en}}</ref> The group's song ''Paramedic!'' was featured on the soundtrack to Marvel's 2018 film ''Black Panther'', and their self-declared debut album ''GANGIN'' was released on February 23rd, 2018.<ref>{{Cite news|url=https://www.npr.org/sections/allsongs/2018/01/31/582185850/kendrick-lamar-releases-black-panther-tracklist-and-it-doesn-t-disappoint|title=Kendrick Lamar Releases 'Black Panther' Tracklist, And It Doesn't Disappoint|work=NPR.org|access-date=2018-03-06|language=en}}</ref><ref>{{Cite web|url=http://www.xxlmag.com/rap-music/new-music/2018/02/sob-x-rbe-gangin-album/|title=Stream SOB x RBE's 'Gangin' Album - XXL|website=XXL Mag|language=en|access-date=2018-03-06}}</ref> | ||
| By the way, you are spot-on with how to footnote your sources, so keep that up. | |||
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| Looking at Google, this band should meet Notability by virtue of the coverage they've gotten, so what I suggest is that you look at the reviews by Spin, Vulture, Pitchfork, the other major players. | |||
| I wouldn't just add the fact "reviewed by Spin", but I would suggest you make a "Critical reception" section and say something like (just making something up) "Pitchfork's Don Smith said the band shows influence of ] and ]" or whatever. | |||
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| ⚫ | SOB X RBE is a hip-hop collective from Vallejo, California, composed of artists Yhung T.O, Slimmy B, Da Boii, and Lul G.<ref>{{Cite news|url=http://www.thefader.com/2017/04/26/sob-x-rbe-interview-slimmy-b-daboii-lul-g-yhung-to|title=A Raw Conversation With SOB x RBE, The Vallejo Boys Setting The Bay On Fire|work=The FADER|access-date=2018-03-06|language=en}}</ref> The group's song ''Paramedic!'' was featured on the soundtrack to Marvel's 2018 film ''Black Panther'', and their self-declared debut album ''GANGIN'' was released on February 23rd, 2018.<ref>{{Cite news|url=https://www.npr.org/sections/allsongs/2018/01/31/582185850/kendrick-lamar-releases-black-panther-tracklist-and-it-doesn-t-disappoint|title=Kendrick Lamar Releases 'Black Panther' Tracklist, And It Doesn't Disappoint|work=NPR.org|access-date=2018-03-06|language=en}}</ref><ref>{{Cite web|url=http://www.xxlmag.com/rap-music/new-music/2018/02/sob-x-rbe-gangin-album/|title=Stream SOB x RBE's 'Gangin' Album - XXL|website=XXL Mag|language=en|access-date=2018-03-06}}</ref> | ||
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SOB X RBE is a hip-hop collective from Vallejo, California, composed of artists Yhung T.O, Slimmy B, Da Boii, and Lul G. The group's song Paramedic! was featured on the soundtrack to Marvel's 2018 film Black Panther, and their self-declared debut album GANGIN was released on February 23rd, 2018.
References
- "A Raw Conversation With SOB x RBE, The Vallejo Boys Setting The Bay On Fire". The FADER. Retrieved 2018-03-06.
- "Kendrick Lamar Releases 'Black Panther' Tracklist, And It Doesn't Disappoint". NPR.org. Retrieved 2018-03-06.
- "Stream SOB x RBE's 'Gangin' Album - XXL". XXL Mag. Retrieved 2018-03-06.