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This makes no sense at the close of a paragraph narrating the 1053-1054 events. Such a sentence might belong further down, in connection with something much earlier; but its presence at the end of lead paragraph 3 is clearly accidental: I am therefore deleting the sentence. --] (]) 16:07, 2 September 2020 (UTC) | This makes no sense at the close of a paragraph narrating the 1053-1054 events. Such a sentence might belong further down, in connection with something much earlier; but its presence at the end of lead paragraph 3 is clearly accidental: I am therefore deleting the sentence. I have checked that Runciman 1955 does not thereby become orphaned, as it's also cited in References. --] (]) 16:07, 2 September 2020 (UTC) |
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Greetings, Per MOS, the lead section should be a maximum of 4 paragraphs, and this article has 6. I added the "lead too long" notice and am asking for help to condense the lead. Regards, — JoeHebda • (talk) 14:08, 31 October 2016 (UTC)
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Vanity press detected
While we appreciate this edit which cleaned up the citation style, it tripped the edit filter which claims "Content sourced to vanity press", which is highly undesirable. Therefore I have tagged the article as possibly having unreliable sources. Elizium23 (talk) 09:10, 2 March 2020 (UTC)
Mis-placed sentence?
In lead paragraph 1:
> ... culmination of theological and political differences > which had developed during the preceding centuries
That is absolutely fine. Also fine is the start of lead paragraph 3:
> In 1053, the first step in the process which led to a formal schism was taken
In contrast, however, lead paragraph 3 closes thus:
> ... only the first act in a centuries-long process > that eventually became a complete schism.
This makes no sense at the close of a paragraph narrating the 1053-1054 events. Such a sentence might belong further down, in connection with something much earlier; but its presence at the end of lead paragraph 3 is clearly accidental: I am therefore deleting the sentence. I have checked that Runciman 1955 does not thereby become orphaned, as it's also cited in References. --Peter010101 (talk) 16:07, 2 September 2020 (UTC)
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