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This is an old revision of this page, as edited by 71.20.145.82 (talk) at 07:11, 6 October 2012 (I edited the "To Do" list, suggesting the article would be more correct if unbiased edits were included. I also suggested the sections on atrocities include Israeli atrocities, if mentioning negative actions by Israel is allowed on Misplaced Pages.). The present address (URL) is a permanent link to this revision, which may differ significantly from the current revision.

• (Try to find reliable sources that detail the war specifically on the Golan Heights from the Syrian and/or Iraqi retrospective) - This may be difficult to accomplish given the open nature of Israeli society which tolerates internal discussion as opposed to the regimes in Syria / Iraq which do not.
• Point to peace initiatives from Sadat in 1971 and in February 1973 - They both where rejected by Golda Meir government leaving no choice to the Egyptians to get in the war.
• There is a typo. ctrl-f the word "enaging". I would have fixed it but the article is not free for editing. I hope this is a good spot for this note.
• This article discusses atrocities committed by the Syrians, and the Egyptians, but does not discuss any of the atrocities committed by the Israelis. This Article should include a more information on atrocities committed on all sides, rather than only pointing out Syrian and Egyptian actions. By leaving out Israeli atrocities, the article appears to imply that Israel did not commit any atrocities. There is a pervasive tone of moral superiority attributed to Israel throughout the article, which needs to be remedied. This has nothing to do with Syrians, or Egyptians being prohibited from discussing such things by their government, as is suggested above. Stating that Israel is an "Open Society", while Syria and Iraq obviously must not be is horribly biased.