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Revision as of 16:14, 5 July 2006 by Elk Salmon (talk | contribs)(diff) ← Previous revision | Latest revision (diff) | Newer revision → (diff)From Moscow's peer review:
- Remove image gallery (perhaps just replace it with a link to Wikimedia Commons)
- disagree. having small gallery some 4x4 photos, or 4x5 is very good. Elk Salmon 16:14, 5 July 2006 (UTC)
- Refactor Media section (as it is currently just a list of external links) to make it look more like Johannesburg's Communications and media section.
- Remove See Also links (like History of Moscow) that are already linked in the body of the article.
- Remove the list from the Moscow tourist attractions section
- Expand the Education section
- Explain the Crime Rates box better
- well, same table is in nyc article. it is understable. Elk Salmon 16:14, 5 July 2006 (UTC)
- Copyedit the article
Move Climate from under TourismPut Air pollution in Moscow in a sub-section (as it's too short as it is)- Sift through the External Links and get rid of any that are not very helpful.
- Add a significant number of references
- disagree Elk Salmon 16:14, 5 July 2006 (UTC)
Add something about water transport (Moscow has two passenger riverports and regular motorship routes used mostly for entertainment)- Add some image of Moscow sport facilities - Luzhniki and Krylatskoye sport complexes
- i just took krylatskoye this sunday. i'll add later when will process all photos. Elk Salmon 16:14, 5 July 2006 (UTC)
- Refactor Living Costs section, which is quite repetitive.