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Revision as of 15:05, 22 July 2006 by TSO1D (talk | contribs) (now it's back)(diff) ← Previous revision | Latest revision (diff) | Newer revision → (diff)From Moscow's peer review:
- Remove image gallery (perhaps just replace it with a link to Wikimedia Commons)
Refactor Media section (as it is currently just a list of external links) to make it look more like Johannesburg's Communications and media section.- Remove See Also links (like History of Moscow) that are already linked in the body of the article.
Remove the list from the Moscow tourist attractions section- Expand the Education section
Explain the Crime Rates box better- Copyedit the article
Move Climate from under TourismPut Air pollution in Moscow in a sub-section (as it's too short as it is)- Sift through the External Links and get rid of any that are not very helpful.
- Add a significant number of references
Add something about water transport (Moscow has two passenger riverports and regular motorship routes used mostly for entertainment)
Other Items:
Add some image of Moscow sport facilities - Luzhniki and Krylatskoye sport complexes- Refactor Living Costs section, which is quite repetitive.
- Russian State Library (former Lenin library) should be mentioned.
- Perhaps a brief note about schools for students below college-age would be helpful in the Education section.
- Sport section should be improved, Moscow Hyppodrome mentioned.
- Modern city plan nedded to replace old ones.