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1. Improve article to featured standards
2. Harmonize citation style (using {{cite}}) and making sure all relevant page numbers are included.
3. 33 citation needs page numbers
4. The first paragraph in the "Mid-twentieth century" doesn't bring together the de Beauvoir material and the second-wave material very well.
5. Section on "Mid-twentieth century" needs to mention "difference feminism" somehow - it needs to convey that the assumptions underlying second-wave feminism were different than those underlying first-wave feminism.
6. Introduce the concept of patriarchy earlier in the article. It is so central to understanding nearly every form of feminism.
7. The "Pornography" section is a bit unclear. Could you spell out in a few sentences what exactly the debate was/is? The "Prostitution" section does that very well.
8. In the "Relationship to political movements" section, the "Socialism" subsection does not do nearly as good of a job explaining the general impact as the other two sections. It is too fact-based - this person, that organization, etc. to help the casual reader.
9. Please Update first paragraph to include present times! Feminism is not past tense! eg Feminists still work to protect women and girls from domestic violence, sexual harassment, and sexual assault. They advocate for workplace rights, including maternity leave, and against forms of discrimination against women.