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Revision as of 15:43, 25 February 2002 by Conversion script (talk | contribs) (Automated conversion)(diff) ← Previous revision | Latest revision (diff) | Newer revision → (diff)Right, SE. Watch and learn as I incorporate your opinions into the text. -- The Anome
The first edit: my first para goes, except for two sentences which drop down lower (and are phrased in non-dogmatic terms that can be backed up by cites if you wish). Your correction becomes the first para, except that 'may or may not' becomes 'often'. Here endeth the first edit. -- The Anome
The second edit: I incorporate your correction re non-loss medical reason into the para above. -- The Anome
The third edit: now your correction is incorporated into the para above, it is no longer needed. So it goes.
Now I have incorporated your corrections into the article. I have
- replaced my words (or someone else's?) with yours for correction 1
- incorporated the sense of correction 2 into my text, and deleted the redundant correction
You should now be happy - if not, please tell me why. -- The Anome