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Edit Request: MLB London Series 2019
Could something be added to mention that the Yankees and the Red Sox played the inaugural 2019 MLB London Series in July 2019?
Edit Request: Grammar Mistake
The first sentence of this page refers to the New York Yankees as a plural entity using the verb “are”. However, in the same sentence it also refers to them as a singular “baseball team”.2600:1700:BBF1:290:C9A3:CC7F:3A0:1A3F (talk) 04:04, 23 December 2022 (UTC)
- Not a mistake. That is correct American English usage when dealing with sports teams. oknazevad (talk) 11:01, 23 December 2022 (UTC)
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Reviewer: The C of E (talk · contribs) 10:26, 18 January 2023 (UTC)
I will review this. For such a big article. This may take a few days and several rounds of comments. So please bear with me. The C of E God Save the King! (talk) 10:26, 18 January 2023 (UTC)
- The Global Enterprises sentence in the lead is a run-on sentence and should be broken up.
- I broke up that sentence with specifying that Steinbrenner bought the team from CBS (see ). -- LuK3 (Talk) 12:43, 19 January 2023 (UTC)
- "Arguably the most successful professional sports team in the United States and one of the most highly regarded," - WP:WEASEL
- I removed "highly regarded" to only include the team success based on championship wins and alike (see ). -- LuK3 (Talk) 12:47, 19 January 2023 (UTC)
- How could Johnson declare major league status if the NL had already said no?
- It seems as if Johnson just did not agree with the NL's demands regarding their agreement. I reworded that sentence to reflect that (see ). -- LuK3 (Talk) 13:07, 19 January 2023 (UTC)
- What relevance does Joseph Gordon have to the Gordon Highlanders (apart from the same name), was his father in it or something?
- According to multiple sources, that name was a nod to Gordon's Scottish heritage and nothing more than that. -- LuK3 (Talk) 13:38, 19 January 2023 (UTC)
- Why did the newspapers call them the "Invaders"?
- I cannot find a definite answer to the nickname origin. It might refer to the American Civil War according to The New York Times however no connection explicitly stated. -- LuK3 (Talk) 13:47, 19 January 2023 (UTC)
- Is there a source for the sentence stating the Highlanders name falling out of use?
- Sourced added (see ). -- LuK3 (Talk) 15:43, 19 January 2023 (UTC)
- The article mentions Hilltop Park's lease expired but theres no mention of there being one earlier. Was it built and then leased to the Highlanders or did they own it?, sell it and lease it back and from whom?
- I added that they leased the land from the New York Institute for Special Education for 10 years (see ). -- LuK3 (Talk) 11:38, 20 January 2023 (UTC)
- Why were the Yankees kicked out of the Polo Grounds?
- I found a source that stated the Giants manager was upset with the Yankees attendance and number of home runs so he decided to evict them (see ). -- LuK3 (Talk) 11:55, 20 January 2023 (UTC)
- Why were they called Murderers' Row?
- Added a sentence regarding the history of the nickname (see ). -- LuK3 (Talk) 11:57, 20 January 2023 (UTC)
- What other teams voted against the establishment of the amateur draft?
- The I added the Mets, Dodgers, and Cardinals as the 3 others teams (see ). -- LuK3 (Talk) 11:54, 21 January 2023 (UTC)
- In the 1981 section, Shea Stadium is WP:OLINKed as its already linked earlier when it talks about the Mets moving from the Polo Grounds.
- I removed the subsequent wikilinks (see ). -- LuK3 (Talk) 12:02, 21 January 2023 (UTC)
- "the Yankees were 14+1⁄2 games behind the Red Sox" - linking the Yankees and Red Sox like that is a little confusing
- I agree, I reworded the sentence (see ). -- LuK3 (Talk) 12:02, 21 January 2023 (UTC)
- More to come. The C of E God Save the King! (talk) 08:52, 19 January 2023 (UTC)
- I know you're linking to teams seasons, rather than the actual team, but it does get a little misleading when the links on team names go to the season page. It should be made clearer.
- I tried to standardize the team's wikilinks to just link to the team's main article (see ). -- LuK3 (Talk) 12:13, 21 January 2023 (UTC)
- Aaron Boone has been double linked in Baby Bombers when he was already linked earlier
- Removed wikilink (see ). -- LuK3 (Talk) 15:42, 22 January 2023 (UTC)
- DJ LeMaiheu needs linking at first mention
- Added (see ). -- LuK3 (Talk) 15:42, 22 January 2023 (UTC)
- Murderers Row has also been double linked in the nickname section
- Removed (see ). -- LuK3 (Talk) 15:42, 22 January 2023 (UTC)
- Logos and uniform section is just a hatnote
- In the process and writing a subsection for uniforms and logos. -- LuK3 (Talk) 16:37, 22 January 2023 (UTC)
- Polo Grounds double-linked in Fans and why the sudden inclusion of V at the end?
- I removed the link (see ). The reason for the "V" was because the Polo Grounds were actually different stadiums. -- LuK3 (Talk) 02:15, 24 January 2023 (UTC)
- It would help to clarify that Barcelona, Real Madrid and Man Utd are association football clubs. Likewise that the Cowboys are an American football club
- Specified the sports/league (see ). -- LuK3 (Talk) 02:15, 24 January 2023 (UTC)
- Old Yankee Stadium and Monument Park are double linked again in the Retired Numbers
- Removed links (see ). -- LuK3 (Talk) 02:15, 24 January 2023 (UTC)
- There are several multiple links in that section (Gehrig, Rivera, MLB etc)
- Removed overlinks (see ). -- LuK3 (Talk) 00:32, 25 January 2023 (UTC)
- Rivalries section, more double links on the teams mentioned earlier
- Removed links (see ). -- LuK3 (Talk) 02:17, 24 January 2023 (UTC)
- Subway Series, has it been mentioned why the games are called that, is there a direct subway link between the teams?
- Added the term origin with a reference (see ). -- LuK3 (Talk) 00:37, 25 January 2023 (UTC)
- More to come on the refs later. The C of E God Save the King! (talk) 08:45, 20 January 2023 (UTC)
- WP:OLINK on repeated references to MLB Advanced media, NY Times etc.
- I was under the impression each reference is considered standalone and therefore links for publications provide context. -- LuK3 (Talk) 01:45, 25 January 2023 (UTC)
- Source 36, no page number
- Reference states pages 9–14. -- LuK3 (Talk) 01:45, 25 January 2023 (UTC)
- Source 41, no page number
- I used the {{rp}} template, it is page 18. -- LuK3 (Talk) 01:45, 25 January 2023 (UTC)
- Society of American Baseball Research sources, OLINK
- See above. -- LuK3 (Talk) 01:45, 25 January 2023 (UTC)
- Source 151, no page number
- Added page (see ). -- LuK3 (Talk) 01:45, 25 January 2023 (UTC)
- Source 158 and 224, CBS shouldn't be italicised as it isn't a print source
- Removed italics (see ). -- LuK3 (Talk) 01:45, 25 January 2023 (UTC)
- Sources 191 and 192, MLB the same as above
- Done (see ). -- LuK3 (Talk) 23:28, 25 January 2023 (UTC)
- Source 205, no page number
- Changed source (see ). -- LuK3 (Talk) 23:28, 25 January 2023 (UTC)
- Sources 214 and 218, MLB italicised again
- Done (see ). -- LuK3 (Talk) 23:40, 25 January 2023 (UTC)
- Source 227, error in linking the Vindicator
- It looks like a Google News
- I changed the link, let's see if that works (see ). -- LuK3 (Talk) 23:40, 25 January 2023 (UTC)
- It looks like a Google News
- Source 237, MLB italicised
- Fixed (see ). -- LuK3 (Talk) 23:40, 25 January 2023 (UTC)
- Source 240, no page number
- I'm seeing page 356 in the reference. -- LuK3 (Talk) 01:47, 26 January 2023 (UTC)
- Source 245, no link to online source
- I could not find an online source unfortunately, I'll continue to look for an accessible source. -- LuK3 (Talk) 01:47, 26 January 2023 (UTC)
- Source 253, several souces in one footnote
- Separated the references (see ). -- LuK3 (Talk) 01:47, 26 January 2023 (UTC)
- Source 254, CBS italicised (It seems to be the same for all of CBS and MLB references so I'll mention all those in here to save repetition)
- Fixed the CBS references (see ) and the MLB references (see ). -- LuK3 (Talk) 00:15, 27 January 2023 (UTC)
- Source 285, same issue as 253
- Fixed (see ). -- LuK3 (Talk) 01:47, 26 January 2023 (UTC)
- ESPN (non magazine), also seems to have italicisation issues
- Fixed (see ). -- LuK3 (Talk) 00:15, 27 January 2023 (UTC)
- Source 414, no date
- (Date added (see ). -- LuK3 (Talk) 00:15, 27 January 2023 (UTC)
- Source 440, no accessdate
- Added (see ). -- LuK3 (Talk) 00:38, 27 January 2023 (UTC)
- Source 454, no page number
- Changed source (see ). -- LuK3 (Talk) 02:15, 27 January 2023 (UTC)
- Source 466, that source mentions the Bleacher Creatures doing homophobic chants, but that isn't included in the article when it should be mentioned they made a little more than a hostile environment towards opposition players.
- Added a mention of homophobic chants (see ). -- LuK3 (Talk) 02:15, 27 January 2023 (UTC)
- Source 485, isbn number isn't consistent with the rest of the article and no page number
- Changed source (see ). -- LuK3 (Talk) 02:15, 27 January 2023 (UTC)
- Source 492, no page number
- It looks like pages 193–197 are cited using the {{rp}} template. -- LuK3 (Talk) 02:15, 27 January 2023 (UTC)
- Source 607, 608, 612, 618 and 619 they're looking like footnotes rather than references there.
- I changed the references to {{sfn}} footnotes. -- LuK3 (Talk) 02:15, 27 January 2023 (UTC)
- @LuK3:, that concludes my review. A little exhaustive I know! Please ping me when you've had a chance to have a look at the points i've raised and I'll go over it again. I won't mark it as on hold and start the 7 day timer just because I know this could take a little while with such a big article. The C of E God Save the King! (talk) 11:19, 21 January 2023 (UTC)
- Thanks The C of E for the thorough review. I believe I addressed all of your points. Feel free to ping me back if I did miss anything. -- LuK3 (Talk) 02:15, 27 January 2023 (UTC)
- Looks like it now meets the criteria to me. Well done @Luk3:. This is now a GA, sorry you had to wait so long for it. The C of E God Save the King! (talk) 07:56, 28 January 2023 (UTC)
- Thanks The C of E for the thorough review. I believe I addressed all of your points. Feel free to ping me back if I did miss anything. -- LuK3 (Talk) 02:15, 27 January 2023 (UTC)
- @LuK3:, that concludes my review. A little exhaustive I know! Please ping me when you've had a chance to have a look at the points i've raised and I'll go over it again. I won't mark it as on hold and start the 7 day timer just because I know this could take a little while with such a big article. The C of E God Save the King! (talk) 11:19, 21 January 2023 (UTC)
Did you know nomination
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The result was: promoted by Bruxton (talk) 18:53, 3 March 2023 (UTC)
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- ... that the New York Yankees have the most championships in both Major League Baseball and major North American professional sports leagues? Source: USA Today and ESPN
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Improved to Good Article status by LuK3 (talk). Self-nominated at 15:56, 28 January 2023 (UTC). Note: As of October 2022, all changes made to promoted hooks will be logged by a bot. The log for this nomination can be found at Template talk:Did you know nominations/New York Yankees, so please watch a successfully closed nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.
- The hook is strong.
- The lead should be revised to carry the main ports needed for introduction and remove references per WP:Lead. Maybe the last paragraph could be merged or deleted.
- I'd recommend removing common wikilinks like treasurer and repeated links like Yankees. I know there are different years but the wikilink makes look like the same. How about specifying the link like how movie links often offer the year?
- Can there be a general reference for the section "Roster". No need for all.
That's all. It sure is a big article so making it GA should have been difficult. I'd recommend splitting big parts in the future to make it easier to navigate.Tintor2 (talk) 22:36, 28 January 2023 (UTC)
- Honestly, I do feel that it'd be a missed opportunity to make such a herculean improvement and then make our hook the one thing that everyone probably knows about the team. theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (she/her) 00:58, 9 February 2023 (UTC)
- No kidding. Gonna throw some options and ping LuK3 and Tintor. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 00:48, 11 February 2023 (UTC)
- ALT1: ... that the New York Yankees grounds crew began dancing to "Y.M.C.A." after a team executive spotted fans doing the same during a spring training game?
- ALT2: ... that Mike Royko described hating the New York Yankees as "as American as pizza pie, unwed mothers, and cheating on your income tax"?
- Oops, that's Tintor2. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 00:49, 11 February 2023 (UTC)
- @Sammi Brie: I kinda approve ALT 1.Tintor2 (talk) 01:50, 11 February 2023 (UTC)
- I would agree with Tintor2 above. I could not find the Royko article where he says that quote. -- LuK3 (Talk) 12:29, 11 February 2023 (UTC)
- @Sammi Brie: I kinda approve ALT 1.Tintor2 (talk) 01:50, 11 February 2023 (UTC)
- I agree that the first hook is weak. Here's a couple more ALTs for consideration:
- ALT3: ... that the New York Yankees were created from the remains of the Baltimore Orioles?
- ALT4: ... that the New York Yankees were first named after a Scottish regiment?
- And what about a picture? An article isn't really good without a good picture. Perhaps it could be a picture of Hilltop Park (right), with a hook about the Highlander name?
- Andrew🐉(talk) 22:35, 11 February 2023 (UTC)
- Full review needed. Thanks. BlueMoonset (talk) 04:11, 28 February 2023 (UTC)
- It had its readable prose expanded at least fivefold
- "Articles must contain at least 1,500 characters of readable prose." This article passes such guideline. Still the size is kinda ridiculous I suggest again splitting it into subarticles to make it easier to nagivate.
- It is also a good article.
- It posses citations everywhere properly.
- It's neutral and I can't see any copyright violation. If I missed something feel free to tell me. I'll say it again though. The article needs to be splitted into subarticles so that the weight it has doesn't make it hard to navigate.Tintor2 (talk) 20:57, 28 February 2023 (UTC)
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