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Iowa explosion
Welcome to Misplaced Pages! I appreciate your contributions to the USS Iowa turret explosion article. Usually, a name is wikilinked only the first time it appears in the article. Anyway, what do you think of the article? Do you think it focuses too much on certain aspects of the subject and not enough on others? Cla68 (talk) 22:37, 26 July 2010 (UTC)
Ooops; beginners mistake. I think it is balanced give the sources available. I read over the comments page, and do not see much specificity in the criticism.--Coldplay3332 (talk) 14:20, 28 July 2010 (UTC)
- Thank you for the articles. I'll go through them and add additional information as appropriate. Feel free to do so yourself also. If you think information is important, but not important enough to go in the article text, it can be included in the footnote. Since the article texts are copyrighted, I'm going to need to delete them eventually, but thanks again. Cla68 (talk) 22:30, 27 August 2010 (UTC)