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Being Born Again Couture Fashion Show

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Unsalvageable spam about non-notable show. Orange Mike | Talk 02:34, 25 September 2011 (UTC)

Note: This debate has been included in the list of Fashion-related deletion discussions. — — alf.laylah.wa.laylah (talk) 05:09, 25 September 2011 (UTC)

I now have referenced thoroughly and cited all sources (deleted the references which had nothing to do with the show). The article looks very different. Thanks Jasper Deng and ConcernedVancouverite - you are right. It does read better. Please review it for non-deletion. Thank you. Domenico.y (talk) 07:35, 25 September 2011 (UTC) Domenico.y — Domenico.y (talk • contribs) has made few or no other edits outside this topic.

I just would like to say that this article is taking up most of my time and I can't edit other articles without this matter being solved and corrected. Thank you. Domenico.y (talk) 18:24, 25 September 2011 (UTC) Domenico.y

  • Keep: Now, after deleting the article and re-starting it again on 07:31, 25 September 2011, I have referenced thoroughly and cited all sources. It is a notable article.

Domenico.y (talk) 18:36, 25 September 2011 (UTC) Domenico.y

  • Comment and required action: I used that in addition: the organizatiion's website itself refers back to the other refrences in 'Press' because there are articles on the 'press' page which they have put up, Mark of the Beast. Should I take the organizatiion's website itself then? What is the consensus? Thanks Domenico.y (talk) 20:19, 25 September 2011 (UTC) Domenico.y

I have taken out the majority of the the organizatiion's website itself links now. Thank you. Domenico.y (talk) 00:27, 26 September 2011 (UTC) Domenico.y

Hi Admin,

Being Born Again Couture Fashion Show is a notable article, the show started in Australia (citing the references I have put, not many other fashion shows get this amount of press and post-press). And the show has changed the course of history for 2 famous Australian fashion designers' designs: Finetti and Lo Sordo.

ConcernedVancouverite said that he has researched and said I have not found "coverage that was not only promotional material from the lead-up to the event". That is why I put in references post show on ABC TV and The Fashion Consultancy after it happened. ABC TV is big in Australia. The fact that famous Australian fashion designers Finetti and Lo Sordo held a fashion show one month after the BBAC show at Australia Fashion Week with exactly the same prints that they collaborated with artists in the BBAC show, it is obvious that they took inspiration from the show, makes it noteworthy and reliable source. So there is the post-press in the form of art and fashion design collaborated for these 2 fashion designers. If Finetti and Lo Sordo want to neglect the BBAC show and give all credit to themselves, then ok but it is apparent through the course of this article, what happened. It is a bit less obvious in the text of this article, so how do I made that more obvious?

I have put in references in nearly each sentence, not just from the organisation's website, proving that the research is reliable and true. Explain to me why an article like this http://en.wikipedia.org/Vikki_Ziegler is not nominated for deletion in 2008 and I only came across this article in September 2011 and tagged it Template:Noteable because it makes claims that are not referenced and in my opinion, not true?

Assist me to improve the article please and save it from deletion. Thank you. Domenico.y (talk) 18:52, 26 September 2011 (UTC) Domenico.y

  • Delete. It's spam. Changing a sentence from "The Sydney Morning Herald said" to "The Sydney Morning Herald interviewed Reichman and she said" changed the sentence from a lie into truth, but didn't make it any more appropriate for an encyclopaedic article, or to establish notability. There is nothing relevant to say about the Sydney Morning Herald's coverage, and ditto most of the other reliable references. --ColinFine (talk) 22:58, 26 September 2011 (UTC)
  • ColinFine said that you were too biased of this article to edit it written up in your previous comments, then you are commenting on it's deletion?
  • Keep the article but assist and help me with it please.

Are you an Australian? Can you cite a show which changed the course of history for 2 famous Australian fashion designers' designs: Finetti and Lo Sordo?

The SMH is a very tiny part of the article. The fact that the SMH mentioned it is a feat for the organiser. I was trying to establish notably with the article I created...

Are you an Admin? If so, how do you think I should change the article to make it salvageable? Thank you. Domenico.y (talk) 01:48, 27 September 2011 (UTC) Domenico.y

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