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Question of POV
It has been rather belabored by several people that this topic has not gotten much recent attention. In general, when that happens, one of the most common reasons for such a situation is that there is, basically, not much new to say about it. So far as I can tell, the reference source with the longest entry on the subject is the Anchor Bible Dictionary, which also happens to be one of the most highly, if not perhaps the most highly, regarded relatively recent reference book on the subject out there. That article is roughly a full page long, much longer than any others I have seen. The differences between that reference entry and this article are, honestly, nothing less than amazing to me. I believe that the source is also among the most easily accessible, and I am frankly astonished at the remarkably different content of the two pages, including the comparative disregard in this article to several of the major points in the article in that source, which I believe would be all but impossible if that highly reputable reference source had been consulted much, if at all. I also believe that there is more than sufficient cause to believe that the major editor of this article, Ovadyah/Ignocrates, who has both indicated in the first very first surving edit to his user page here indicates a clear interest to "modern Ebionite movements." It is worth noting that none of them, despite several later edits to his talk page about the topic, have ever been demonstrated to have any independent notability, although he apparently took part in an “agreement” in a mediation to create such an article despite lack of notability anyway, as is indicated below. I also believe that Ovadyah/Ignocrates' insistence on the reliability of James Tabor's book The Jesus Dynasty, which the author has admitted was not even submitted for academic review, and his refusal to remove or adjust content based on legitimate concerns about the use of that source was one of the primary reasons that article lost FA status. On the basis of all of this, particularly the remarkable variance from the content of the substantial "Anchor Bible Dictionary", particularly without any apparent reason given that I can see for such differences, I believe that there is sufficient reason to believe that POV concerns may be exhibited here. I very much request that independent editors review the related reference sources, including the Anchor Bible Dictionary, which should be rather easily available to most people, and review the matter for the unexplained and apparently undiscussed differences between them.
I also believe that it might well be extremely useful to have independent editors review all the conduct of all those involved with this topic to see if they believe that there is sufficient basis for a second arbitration hearing, or perhaps a request for administrative action, be started. I am at least temporarily withholding tagging the article for POV, which I believe it clearly deserves, and from nominating it for FAR, which I believe is probably justified, pending some sort of review from other individuals in the near future. Some statements here, for instance, which indicate that Ignocrates/Ovadyah displays an extraordinary degree of knowledge of a subject which had at the time, and still has, little if any independent sourced material, and even seems to indicate that he knows that what independent reliable sources say is wrong, is a particularly troubling matter. I believe that there are sufficient grounds for serious consideration of administrative or arbitrator review of this matter, and would be extremely grateful if any independent individual would review the discussion of the topic, particularly that of Ovadyah/Ignocrates. Regarding my own conduct, I have said from the beginning if an independent admin requested me to withdraw my adminship, and demonstrated to me good reason, I would do so myself voluntarily. I will stand by that principle here as well. John Carter (talk) 18:16, 23 June 2013 (UTC)
Fyi, for any interested editors/reviewers:
- Petersen, William L. (1992). "Ebionites, Gospel of the". In Freedman, David Noel (ed.). The Anchor Bible Dictionary. Vol. 2 (1 ed.). Doubleday. pp. 261–2. ISBN 978-0-385-42583-4.
Here is the complete citation for the Gospel of the Ebionites article in the Anchor Bible Dictionary (1992), which I thoroughly reviewed while preparing for FAC. Ignocrates (talk) 19:10, 23 June 2013 (UTC)
- No reference is made, apparently, to the Justin Martyr statement, That article stresses the fact that this source is seen as a gospel harmony, in even the first few sentences, which is delegated to a truly subordinate position here. The extent of the controversy regarding the Jewish-Christian gospels, which is called near the beginning of that article not on the Jewish-Christian gospels, but the Gospel of the Ebionites, is relegated to a minor position here. I could go on. I also have researched the minimal amount of journal content since that source was published, including JSTOR, ProQuest, EBSCOHost, NewsBank, and others, and have found nothing in them which indicates that the statements in that source have been in any way changed. I have also checked the latest edition of the Zondervan Bible dictionary and other later highly regarded academic reference sources. While they do not go to the same degree of length, given their shorter nature, there is nothing in them which is contradictory. Also, I also urge everyone involved to review the contribution history of Ovadyah/Ignocrates. His truly devout support of Tabor's book in the article on the Ebionites, despite any evidence that it has ever been given any particular academic attention, let alone support, and the fact that, despite the name change, he has over his time as an editor ever edited anything which is not clearly related to the Ebionites, along with his regular support of the non-notable Ebionite Jewish Community, which has since been renamed the Ebionite Community, still with no indication of any reliable sources, or sources at all, other than the group itself, I believe cannot help but raise very serious questions regarding this individual's motivations and whether he is capable of contributing to this topic in a neutral fashion. Other of his comments over the years also raise serious questions. Again, I believe it is in the best interests of the project itself if someone who does not have this editor's rather remarkable almost overriding interest in groups which have never earned any notability in their own right, and barely any mention at all, were to review the material and see if it is neutral and balanced. This recent rather snarly, juvenile, and frankly irrational comment here from Ignocrates is an indication as to why I believe it should be someone who Ignocrates does not regularly demonize who should be doing the review. By the way, the unfounded accusation that I am a "stalker" is unfounded. I do try to check up on all religion based content, and, clearly, someone with as poor a judgment as this editor is someone whose work clearly needs being checked up on. John Carter (talk) 20:06, 23 June 2013 (UTC)
- The Justin Martyr material is too speculative to add to the body of the article, except perhaps as a brief footnote. First of all, it is far from obvious that Justin was in possession of an actual gospel harmony, as clearly stated in the article on Justin Martyr. Second, even if Justin did possess a harmony of the Synoptic Gospels, and the Ebionites also had a harmony of the Synoptic Gospels, it doesn't mean they were related - correlation is not causality. Vielhauer & Strecker (1991) and Klijn (1992), which set the standard for scholarly work on this topic, don't even touch on this subject because it is considered a tiny minority speculation. Btw, as to the "diff" where I alluded to you, I commented that out almost immediately and archived it as a test. The only way you could possibly even be aware of it was by trolling all my edit logs, and "stalking" me. Ignocrates (talk) 20:42, 23 June 2013 (UTC)
- It is included in an encyclopedia. Please inform me how it is that you have decided, apparently completely on your own, that not only do you as an individual have more authority than leading reference books, but that you as an individual are someone in a unique capacity to know when the most reliable reference source in the field, with an article probably shorter than this, is somehow "too speculative" for you personally? Are you, in effect, saying that you know more than the experts who have published in the field? Really? And I note that you only addressed a single point of those raised. Can you provide any real reasons for your own apparently unilateral decision that someone like you, by virtue of, apparently, some greater knowledge, know more than the published experts? Also, your defense of the term "stalking" is rather weak. Going over my watchlist during a time when I was editing and seeing you post such a rather silly comment while I was editing is something I think only the most prejudiced would describe as stalking. And, again, you seem to be ignoring the question of the language itself, although, admittedly, I guess that there is a bit of a history of ignoring things you don't like about these subjects? Again, requesting a full review of all the above editors recent history, including as I recall derogation of non-notable neo-Ebionite groups other than the Ebionite Jewish Community/Ebionite Community, for the purposes of determining whether there are sufficient conduct issues for arbitration or administrative review. John Carter (talk) 21:02, 23 June 2013 (UTC)
- As you are well aware, the same encyclopedic article also reports on Boismard's speculation about a primitive Hebrew Gospel of Matthew underlying the text - a speculation that is universally rejected by modern scholars as fringe scholarship. The point is that some of the material in that article is outdated crap; no modern scholars take it seriously. Featured articles are supposed to comprehensively represent the consensus thinking of modern scholars, where that is possible, and majority vs. minority views in a balanced manner; however, they are not required to be exhaustive in their coverage of fringe views. Ignocrates (talk) 21:16, 23 June 2013 (UTC)
- Really? Universally? Do you have a source for that, as per WP:BURDEN? So far as I can tell, there has been, as you have said repeatedly, very little recent scholarship on the subject. I myself have seen nothing which really indicates that it is "rejected" as fringe. Also, again, this reference work is only 20 or 30 years old, and in the interim there has been only rare attention given to this document at all. That being the case, the size of this "universal rejection" would seem to be only a few papers which have discussed the subject at all, and few if any dealt with that topic directly. And, please, cease from attempting to recast the statements of others in a perjorative matter. My point is, to what degree is someone who is to all practical purposes more or less a SPA account dealing with a subject which he also seems to have, based on his previous history, a possible POV concern, in a position to on his own, possibly in violation of WP:POV, determine what material is appropriate for an article regarding which he has a rather I believe clear history of POV pushing? And how is it that you are today in a position to apparently declare by personal fiat such statements of fact? I believe ] might apply here, particularly given the extremely small size of this "universe" to which you refer. Also, by the way, have you ever read WP:POV? One editor's personal opinions, regardless of however self-aggrandizing that editor might be, is still, basically, one editor's opinion. If you have evidence that one of the most highly regarded reference sources of recent years is as universally rejected as you say, then you can presumably provide evidence of that rejection? Also, again, please address some of the other issues as well, including the juvenile commentary, if, of course, you deign to respond to the comments of individuals whom you see fit to address with such snarling incivility. John Carter (talk) 21:30, 23 June 2013 (UTC)
- As recent reviews of the field by Broadhead (2010) and Paget (2010) make clear, there has been a considerable amount of research done in this field since Klijn published the definitive work on the subject in 1992. Try reading some of it and come back when you know something about the subject. Ignocrates (talk) 21:48, 23 June 2013 (UTC)
- Really? Universally? Do you have a source for that, as per WP:BURDEN? So far as I can tell, there has been, as you have said repeatedly, very little recent scholarship on the subject. I myself have seen nothing which really indicates that it is "rejected" as fringe. Also, again, this reference work is only 20 or 30 years old, and in the interim there has been only rare attention given to this document at all. That being the case, the size of this "universal rejection" would seem to be only a few papers which have discussed the subject at all, and few if any dealt with that topic directly. And, please, cease from attempting to recast the statements of others in a perjorative matter. My point is, to what degree is someone who is to all practical purposes more or less a SPA account dealing with a subject which he also seems to have, based on his previous history, a possible POV concern, in a position to on his own, possibly in violation of WP:POV, determine what material is appropriate for an article regarding which he has a rather I believe clear history of POV pushing? And how is it that you are today in a position to apparently declare by personal fiat such statements of fact? I believe ] might apply here, particularly given the extremely small size of this "universe" to which you refer. Also, by the way, have you ever read WP:POV? One editor's personal opinions, regardless of however self-aggrandizing that editor might be, is still, basically, one editor's opinion. If you have evidence that one of the most highly regarded reference sources of recent years is as universally rejected as you say, then you can presumably provide evidence of that rejection? Also, again, please address some of the other issues as well, including the juvenile commentary, if, of course, you deign to respond to the comments of individuals whom you see fit to address with such snarling incivility. John Carter (talk) 21:30, 23 June 2013 (UTC)
- As you are well aware, the same encyclopedic article also reports on Boismard's speculation about a primitive Hebrew Gospel of Matthew underlying the text - a speculation that is universally rejected by modern scholars as fringe scholarship. The point is that some of the material in that article is outdated crap; no modern scholars take it seriously. Featured articles are supposed to comprehensively represent the consensus thinking of modern scholars, where that is possible, and majority vs. minority views in a balanced manner; however, they are not required to be exhaustive in their coverage of fringe views. Ignocrates (talk) 21:16, 23 June 2013 (UTC)
- It is included in an encyclopedia. Please inform me how it is that you have decided, apparently completely on your own, that not only do you as an individual have more authority than leading reference books, but that you as an individual are someone in a unique capacity to know when the most reliable reference source in the field, with an article probably shorter than this, is somehow "too speculative" for you personally? Are you, in effect, saying that you know more than the experts who have published in the field? Really? And I note that you only addressed a single point of those raised. Can you provide any real reasons for your own apparently unilateral decision that someone like you, by virtue of, apparently, some greater knowledge, know more than the published experts? Also, your defense of the term "stalking" is rather weak. Going over my watchlist during a time when I was editing and seeing you post such a rather silly comment while I was editing is something I think only the most prejudiced would describe as stalking. And, again, you seem to be ignoring the question of the language itself, although, admittedly, I guess that there is a bit of a history of ignoring things you don't like about these subjects? Again, requesting a full review of all the above editors recent history, including as I recall derogation of non-notable neo-Ebionite groups other than the Ebionite Jewish Community/Ebionite Community, for the purposes of determining whether there are sufficient conduct issues for arbitration or administrative review. John Carter (talk) 21:02, 23 June 2013 (UTC)
- The Justin Martyr material is too speculative to add to the body of the article, except perhaps as a brief footnote. First of all, it is far from obvious that Justin was in possession of an actual gospel harmony, as clearly stated in the article on Justin Martyr. Second, even if Justin did possess a harmony of the Synoptic Gospels, and the Ebionites also had a harmony of the Synoptic Gospels, it doesn't mean they were related - correlation is not causality. Vielhauer & Strecker (1991) and Klijn (1992), which set the standard for scholarly work on this topic, don't even touch on this subject because it is considered a tiny minority speculation. Btw, as to the "diff" where I alluded to you, I commented that out almost immediately and archived it as a test. The only way you could possibly even be aware of it was by trolling all my edit logs, and "stalking" me. Ignocrates (talk) 20:42, 23 June 2013 (UTC)
- Btw, in addition to WP:BURDEN there is also WP:PRESERVE. I don't have to prove the crap you want to add is fringe. You have to prove it isn't by demonstrating these subjects represent a consensus or a significant enough minority view among modern scholars to merit inclusion. Ignocrates (talk) 22:01, 23 June 2013 (UTC)
- First, Ignocrates, I have to say that this is the first time I have ever seen anyone display the really amazing degree of absolute gall to call one of the best, most highly regarded sources of recent years "crap." Maybe, if you can, stop indulging in your gratuitous incivility and maybe, if you can, actually read the material. Let me put it bluntly. 'I believe I have met BURDEN requirements by producing an article which is possibly/probably shorter than this one, from one of the most highly regarded short articles in recent years, about a topic which you have repeatedly said has received little attention of any kind. What part of that comparatively simple statment is so clearly beyond your capacity to understand? Also, I have checked not only JSTOR, which produces little if any matches for the Gospel of the Ebionites at all, as well as the more recent reference sources since the Anchor Bible Dictionary. Honestly, I feel that I have to ask this question. Are you so blinding convinced of your own personal opinions regarding this topic that you so clearly place them before the comments in the recent reference sources on the material? And, in addition to the gratuitous use of profanity above, I once again ask anyone who sees this discussion to review the entire history of this editor Ovadyah/Ignocrates, do determine if there does exist, as I believe there does, sufficient basis to request either arbitration review of his conduct or perhaps some other form of more direct administrative action. John Carter (talk) 22:22, 23 June 2013 (UTC)
- My conduct is an open book; if you think there is a sufficient basis for review then do something about it. Ignocrates (talk) 22:34, 23 June 2013 (UTC)
- Noting once again failure to respond to any other points, and addressing only one which has been raised more than once now. Honestly, Ignocrates, are you so blinded by your obvious emotionalism about this topic that you can not only read through comparatively short beginning posts, but can also only apparently respond to any of multiple points on an item by item basis? Is there any chance of your addressing other matters, as well, or is pretty much as close to really addressing points raised as can be expected of you? And, just out of curiosity, do you think that there is any chance you can refrain from further basically pointless posts, like the one above, so that others who might take part don't have to read through such wastes of energy? John Carter (talk) 22:44, 23 June 2013 (UTC)
- I can't waste anymore of my time arguing. If you have something you believe merits inclusion, make a detailed proposal on the talk page about what it is and how you propose to include it. Ignocrates (talk) 22:52, 23 June 2013 (UTC)
- First, I urge you to maybe familiarize yourself with policies and guidelines, in this case including WP:OWN and WP:CONSENSUS. Like I basically said earlier, this article looks to me to be, basically, far far short of the standard of even a good article. Much like, unfortunately, the rather dreadful and sub-par Ebionites article was before other more experienced editors with perhaps a bit better grasp of policies and guidelines became involved. It is not so much a matter of what needs to be included. At this point, the problems seem to me to be very possibly dealing with WP:POV, and I believe that what may well be required is the involvement of other editors who may not be quite as devoted to their opinions as some other editors are. Like I also said earlier, I am willing to wait a week or so for other input before filing the FAR myself. However, I do have to say that I am more than amused by what seem to me to be a display of a rather poor, if not very poor, grasp of the existing level of academic opinion on this subject displayed by, well, you. In general, a GA or FA class article should probably at least say most if not all of the things that are said in similar articles in other reference sources, particularly if, as is true with this article, those sources are almost all much shorter. The Oxford Dictionary of the Christian Church, third edition revised, edited by F. L. Cross and E. A Livingstone, 2005, Oxford University Press, 0-19-280290-9, p. 526 has an article published in 2205 on this topic, which runs more or less as follows:
- I can't waste anymore of my time arguing. If you have something you believe merits inclusion, make a detailed proposal on the talk page about what it is and how you propose to include it. Ignocrates (talk) 22:52, 23 June 2013 (UTC)
- Noting once again failure to respond to any other points, and addressing only one which has been raised more than once now. Honestly, Ignocrates, are you so blinded by your obvious emotionalism about this topic that you can not only read through comparatively short beginning posts, but can also only apparently respond to any of multiple points on an item by item basis? Is there any chance of your addressing other matters, as well, or is pretty much as close to really addressing points raised as can be expected of you? And, just out of curiosity, do you think that there is any chance you can refrain from further basically pointless posts, like the one above, so that others who might take part don't have to read through such wastes of energy? John Carter (talk) 22:44, 23 June 2013 (UTC)
- My conduct is an open book; if you think there is a sufficient basis for review then do something about it. Ignocrates (talk) 22:34, 23 June 2013 (UTC)
- First, Ignocrates, I have to say that this is the first time I have ever seen anyone display the really amazing degree of absolute gall to call one of the best, most highly regarded sources of recent years "crap." Maybe, if you can, stop indulging in your gratuitous incivility and maybe, if you can, actually read the material. Let me put it bluntly. 'I believe I have met BURDEN requirements by producing an article which is possibly/probably shorter than this one, from one of the most highly regarded short articles in recent years, about a topic which you have repeatedly said has received little attention of any kind. What part of that comparatively simple statment is so clearly beyond your capacity to understand? Also, I have checked not only JSTOR, which produces little if any matches for the Gospel of the Ebionites at all, as well as the more recent reference sources since the Anchor Bible Dictionary. Honestly, I feel that I have to ask this question. Are you so blinding convinced of your own personal opinions regarding this topic that you so clearly place them before the comments in the recent reference sources on the material? And, in addition to the gratuitous use of profanity above, I once again ask anyone who sees this discussion to review the entire history of this editor Ovadyah/Ignocrates, do determine if there does exist, as I believe there does, sufficient basis to request either arbitration review of his conduct or perhaps some other form of more direct administrative action. John Carter (talk) 22:22, 23 June 2013 (UTC)
- Btw, in addition to WP:BURDEN there is also WP:PRESERVE. I don't have to prove the crap you want to add is fringe. You have to prove it isn't by demonstrating these subjects represent a consensus or a significant enough minority view among modern scholars to merit inclusion. Ignocrates (talk) 22:01, 23 June 2013 (UTC)
- “Ebionites, Gospel of the. The name given by modern scholars to the Jewish-Christian apocryphal Gospel supposed to have been used by the Ebionites (q.v). Irenaeus says that the Ebionites use the 'Gospel according to Matthew' … though from the beliefs he ascribes to them … it seems that this cannot be identified with the canonical Mt. Eusebius … on the other hand, says that they use the 'Gospel according to the Hebrews'. The principal authority is Epiphanius... He not only states that the Ebionites 'receive the Gospel according to Matthew' and 'call it the Hebrew Gospel,' but he quotes passages from the Gospel used by the Ebionites. These show that it was written in Greek. The relationship between this Gospel and the 'Gospel of the Nazarenes' and the 'Gospel according to the Hebrews' is unclear; they are perhaps quite distinct.”
- The bibliography includes 6 works, including a few early translations, Neuetestamentliche Apocryphen, Waitz' 1937 article, and, the last 2, Boismard's 1966 article and Petersen's article in the Anchor Bible Dictionary.
On the basis of that recent reference source, I would have to say that not only are the stated objections to Boismard apparently unfounded, but that individuals expressing such objections might be seen as having little, if any, real familiarity with the existing reliable sources on this topic, and that the article might benefit if they were to perhaps allow others who do not have the potential POV problems they have to edit it without threats to be taken to ANI or other harrassing conduct which has been displayed when others have questioned the work of, well, some editors here. Basically, I think like with the Ebionites article, what might be most required here is basically another total rewrite, preferably without interference by biased editors. I have already pointed out specific concerns regarding the minor emphasis this article gives to the pretty much absolute agreement of academia that this work is a gospel harmony. That should probably be stated in the very first sentence. The questions about its origins and influences as expressed in reference books probably deserve similar attention here as well.
If certain editors could stop wasting their own time, and that of others, basically whining to some surrogate mother whenever someone questions their apparently biased and sometimes poorly founded opinions, as has happened repeatedly regarding this topic and others, and maybe drop a bit of the all-too-evident ego that is displayed, that would help a lot. Unfortunately, I am far from sure that there is any reasonable chance of that happening given the current situation. I will, however, give the matter a week, like I said, before taking action myself. John Carter (talk) 22:18, 24 June 2013 (UTC)
The featured article is locked until July 15th.However, you can leave a detailed list of your suggestions/concerns here on the talk page in the interim. Meanwhile, I am working on restarting the Ebionites 2 arbitration case. That will be the quickest way to get these conduct issues resolved permanently. Ignocrates (talk) 22:35, 24 June 2013 (UTC)- I will check out the article in the Oxford Dictionary (2005) for myself tomorrow. Thanks for the reference. Ignocrates (talk) 23:41, 24 June 2013 (UTC)
Okay, I'm offering an opinion about this article as a hopefully disinterested party, although I admit I did offer criticism on this article as it was being worked on for Featured Article. First, the subject of the "Gospel of the Ebionites" is full of speculation, inference, & not in the least controversial. When I offered criticism of this article, that was a major concern of mine & I feel that Ignocrates/Ovadyah responded to that concern responsibly. What is stated here reflects my understanding of recent scholarly findings (based on such sources as Bart Ehrman, Lost Christianities & Fred Lapham, An Introduction to the New Testament Apocrypha). Where this article differs from hat the article in the Anchor Bible Dictionary states, I don't know; I just saw this discussion & haven't had the chance to consult a copy of that book, & it may take me some time to consult a copy due to my schedule. It would be helpful if John Carter were to lay out the specific points where this article varies from what is written in the Anchor Bible article.
I will guess to a few points John Carter objects, & offer some responses. One is that this gospel -- as stated by Irenaeus & Eusebius -- was a version of Matthew written in Hebrew (or Aramaic). However, after reading both Ehrman & Lapham's books, it's clear that scholar consensus believes the work cited by Epiphanius is a harmony of at least the synoptic gospels; the brief arguments they present are understandable by the layman. Why a close reading contradicts the testimony of Irenaeus & Eusebius, I can't say: I'm not knowledgeable enough to say, & WP:NPOV keeps me from doing so.
As for Justin Martyr's connection to this work, I'm unclear what it is. I looked through the writings of Justin at www.ccel.org, & the only thing I could find was an oblique reference to Jewish Christians in his "Dialogue with Trypho", ch. 47. I could find no reference to Justin Martyr alluding to either the Ebionites or their gospel specifically in the secondary sources.
As for using questionable sources, I believe all of the sources in this article meet Misplaced Pages's guidelines for reliable sources. The two authorities cited most often in this article--Luomanen & Skarsaune--are published by respectable publishers & their publications are cited by other authorities. One can read much of Paget 2010's article online at the link in the article for oneself, & see what the current ideas about this lost writing are. There are no novel or unusual ideas in this article that can't be found in the current expert literature.
Now for two other, non-content, issues here. One is that all articles about Early Christianity will be controversial for the indefinite future. For one thing, it is a subject where, as I noted above, speculation & inference greatly outweighs the existing evidence. For another, much of the scholarly &/or expert research is to some degree at variance with widely-held religious beliefs. Specifically, for at least 100 years experts have studied the Bible not as an inerrant text, but as one demonstrating human bias with subtexts of meaning. This is an approach that is guaranteed to make some people unhappy, who will not listen to reason or to pleas for harmony or tolerance. I don't think that's the problem here, but I know it will be at some future time.
The other non-content issue is this. The two individuals in this discussion--John Carter & Ignocrates--have a long history with each other, which is regrettable because both are knowledgeable about this topic, & sincere about getting the facts right. I suspect this is why John Carter mentions James Tabor above, a writer whose name appears nowhere in this article & has no place in it. I don't know what to do about this conflict, beyond suggesting that each should try to avoid the other.
I hope I have made it clear that there is no pressing need for this article to undergo a Featured Article Review, nor anyone to give up his or her Adminship, or for any other drastic actions concerning this article. I do think everyone involved should take a step back, partake of their favorite beverage (if desired), & move on to other matters. If this article does find its place on Misplaced Pages's Front page, that may attract new attention from knowledgeable parties who may, indeed, find problems in the article. But waiting until then is not going to harm anything.--llywrch (talk) 19:46, 26 June 2013 (UTC)
- The name of Tabor was mentioned above given Ovadyah/Ignocrates' insistence on his work The Jesus Dynasty being appropriate to the article Ebionites, even though the author has admitted here on his own talk page that his book was never submitted for academic review. That can and does I believe very reasonably raise questions regarding the basic competence of the editor who supported it to adhere to, or even understand, policies and guidelines. I also have very serious questions, given Ovadyah/Ignocrates's long history of considering the non-notable Shemayah Phillips worthy of even discussion in this content as per here a very serious reason for questioning his possible, or likely, POV regarding that subject, which is so clearly linked to this one.
- While I acknowledge that speculation and inference are subjects about which, in general, early Christianity is prone to more than most, because of the regular production of sensationalistic, fringe literature, I do not believe that there is necessarily any reason for our articles to give them more weight than we would in other topics, simply because of the amount of such speculation. We are supposed to be, as per the third pillar of wikipedia, an encyclopedia. Encyclopedias in general do not give more weight to modern fringe or speculative theories simply because of their prominence in popular or sensationalist literature, more or less as per our own WP:RECENT. Material on the marginal speculation can, and probably should, reasonably be included in articles on those works which source such speculation, but not necessarily in the main article on the broad topic. It is, in general regarding biblical literature-related topics, the case that articles in journals will only discuss about which the scholarly community is basically in consensus when the article's or work's author disagrees with that consensus. So, there is some reason to believe that at least a few modern scholars dispute Boismard's theories does include that there may now be serious question about it, but I cannot see that the possibility that some modern scholars question that material is sufficient grounds to remove it completely, instead of, perhaps, indicating that Boismard's theory has been "accepted" as reasonable by the academic community for some time, although there are some serious questions about it. That is however nowhere near the same as saying that it does not deserve mention in the article.
- Regarding other points, like I said, I personally very much think that anything discussed at lenght in the Anchor Bible Dictionary should be included, in roughly the same order, until and unless independent reviews of that article or other works by its authors indicate that the content of that article is open to question. I have seen reviews of other reference works which criticize some specific articles in them, and would assume the same here as well, although I haven't seen any such evidence that the content of that article does not reflect standard academic consensus presented yet. Also, I cannot see any rational reason to include the speculation about the ties to the Clementine literature. That idea was I believe first proposed in Baigent and Leigh's The Dead Sea Scrolls Deception, which basically used Robert Eisenman as it source. Despite Eisenman's recent reissue of the theory under his own name, those later books of his seem to have received only the "polite" response which is given to a lot of wildly speculative works of today that have little if any reasonable bases for their speculation. Having gone through a previous arbitration dealing primarily with the conduct of an editor who was a supporter of Eisenman, I have to say I have seen little if any evidence in academic sources or reference sources which give those ideas any particular regard at all.
- Also, I have another serious question here. Yes, there does seem to be some basis for saying that modern opinions do not accept Boismard. I think that there would be some indication in the scholarly literature exactly why those academics question Boismard. He isn't like some of the other more recent speculative works, like Eisenman and Tabor, which have, basically, little if anything remotely resembling objective evidence to support them. To date, I have seen nothing in the academic sources which raise questions about Boismard's idea. Having said that, I also haven't read Boismard himself, so I'm personally not sure exactly what he said, but if the idea is considered significant enough for inclusion in a reference source, I find it hard, if not impossible, to believe that someone would have indicated why they now disregard it. To date, I haven't seen that. I agree that I'm not sure exactly why Justin is mentioned in that regard at all, but any statements to that effect from me would constitute OR, and I would prefer seeing some indication as to why certain rather single-purpose account editors here now believe that this idea, which has (apparently?) had some currency for some time, should now be considered too insigifnicant for inclusion based simply on that one individual's opinions. John Carter (talk) 15:11, 30 June 2013 (UTC)
WP:FAR
With regard to having this work reviewed, I welcome any and all reviews, as long as they are based on reliably-sourced facts rather than hearsay comments and innuendo. Bring your evidence to the talk page in the form of reliable sources, with page numbers and quotations from them, to back up your claims. That was the point of having two peer reviews, GAN and FAC. Ignocrates (talk) 21:07, 23 June 2013 (UTC)
So far, the following subjects have been mentioned from the Gospel of the Ebionites article in the Anchor Bible Dictionary (1992):
1. A possible gospel harmony written by Justin Martyr and its putative relationship to the Gospel of the Ebionites
2. A speculation by Boismard that a primitive Hebrew Gospel of Matthew underlies the Gospel of the Ebionites
I don't see any sources published in the last 20 years that support these speculations. Would any editors/reviewers care to comment on these subjects, and back up your comments with evidence to support inclusion? Ignocrates (talk) 21:42, 23 June 2013 (UTC)
- List of sources
- Bellinzoni, Arthur J. (1967). The Sayings of Jesus in the Writings of Justin Martyr. Brill. ASIN B0007ISJW6.
- Bertrand, Daniel A. (1980). "L'Evangile Des Ebionites: Une Harmonie Evangelique Anterieure Au Diatessaron". New Testament Studies (in French). 26 (04). Cambridge University Press: 548–63. doi:10.1017/S0028688500005816.
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ignored (help) - Boismard, Marie-Émile (1966). "Évangile des Ébionites et problème synoptique". Revue biblique (in French). 73 (1–4). Lecoffre: 321–52. ISSN 0035-0907.
- Cross, Frank Leslie; Livingstone, Elizabeth Anne, eds. (2005) . "Ebionites, Gospel according to the". The Oxford Dictionary of the Christian Church (3 ed.). Oxford University Press. p. 526. ISBN 978-0-19-280290-3. (no contributing author cited)
- Howard, George (1988). "The Gospel of the Ebionites". Aufstieg und Niedergang der römischen Welt. 2 (25.5). Walter De Gruyter: 4034–53. ISBN 978-3-11-001885-1.
- Petersen, William L. (1992). "Ebionites, Gospel of the". In Freedman, David Noel (ed.). The Anchor Bible Dictionary. Vol. 2 (1 ed.). Doubleday. pp. 261–2. ISBN 978-0-385-42583-4.
- Findings so far;
I read the Gospel of the Ebionites article in the Oxford Dictionary, cited above. There is nothing in here that is problematic in terms of content. However, it can't be used as an encyclopedic source because the contributing author is not named (similar to the Encyclopedia Britannica). Another problem is its brevity - the article is really more like a summary digest than a full encyclopedic article. However, the article lists Boismard's journal article and the Anchor Bible Dictionary encyclopedic article as sources (citations shown above). It's not clear what specific content is being supported by these sources. Nevertheless, their presence as endnote citations indicates that both should be considered to be reliable sources. This point of argument goes to John Carter, as far as possible inclusion as sources in this article. Ignocrates (talk) 23:42, 26 June 2013 (UTC)
- In all honesty, the above statement might include the lamest excuse I have ever seen. First, I am in no way certain that unsigned articles cannot be used. Also, Ignocrates, if you had bothered to look, you would see that the author, W. L. Petersen, is directly named. Is this is the level of thinking that has been used throughout the development of this artiole, it would reasonably prompt review of everything from punctuation on, given the miserably poor level of research or mis-stated attempts at disqualifying information which might not be consistent with neo-Ebionite sources which seem to be favored by the above editor. John Carter (talk) 19:53, 30 June 2013 (UTC)
- Then I must need new glasses. All I see is W.L. Petersen listed as source #6 - the last source listed for the ABD (1992) article. Where do you see that he is the author of this encyclopedic article? And you are wrong about unsigned articles. They cannot be used as sources for feature articles. Ignocrates (talk) 20:45, 30 June 2013 (UTC)
The content of the Anchor Bible Dictionary article on the Gospel of the Ebionites is unproblematic and a typical summary of the subject from the beginning of the article to the material on Boismard's conjecture. There is an intervening section about the Ebionites – who they were as a group – which is also unproblematic. All of this material is already covered in the article and backed up by reliable secondary sources. Ignocrates (talk) 21:34, 27 June 2013 (UTC)
- I will check the print edition, which, as I remember, listed his name as well. Also, I believe WP:COMMONSENSE applies here, although, admittedly, that might be a bit of a problem for, well, some editors. However, your assertion above is still, basically, nonsensica;. I have provided a source which meets WP:BURDEN. Your rather amusing response is that without a signature, that source cannot be used. Then use another one. Please make an effort to understand the basics of wikipedia, Ignocrates. It is our primary interest to provide the content, not to obsess about any degree of recognition. I have met the requirements, I believe, as per BURDEN. If you choose to ignore them, fine, I will formally requiest FAR of the article on the basis of what seems to me to be an attempt to dodge the issue. If an article fails to meet encyclopedic quality, on the basis of the rather ridiculous statement above, then it can't meet FA standards either. Are you capable of understanding that, Ignocrates? The source is considered among the most reliable, unless you meet BURDEN requirements and can demonstrate that it isn't. If no effort to meet that standard is made, then formal FAR is called for. I do not myself necessarily believe that the source itself must be used itself, but you have provided nothing yet which deals in a substantive way with the matter under discussion. Please address it, or, alternately, ask for input from a noticeboard or through some other means. However, dear Ignocrates, I do not think anyone would consider your comment above to be in any way useful in the developing this article, and I urge all individuals to read WP:TPG to prevent recurrence of same.
- P.S. Is there any particular reason you have still refused to address the fact that the article in its current form downplays the scholarly consensus that it is a gospel harmonty, by not including that information in the lead, which something I stated I think at the beginning? Or could it be that some neo-Ebionites consider it an original work, and POV issues on certain editors parts might be functioning as an impediment in this case? John Carter (talk) 21:49, 30 June 2013 (UTC)
- I suggest you take Llywrch's advice and walk away from this article before you humiliate yourself any further. Ignocrates (talk) 23:44, 30 June 2013 (UTC)
- I very, very strongly suggest that you read WP:IDIDNTHEARTHAT and cease both embarrasing yourself and also comply with policies and guidelines.. First, if you could be bothered to actually check the print version of the Anchor Bible Dictionary, which is among the most readily available sources out there, you would see that the article is in fact signed in the print version, on page 262 of the 2nd volume. The sources have been provided, and you have apparently done nothing to address them. Please desist from arrogant refusal to deal with reality and actually make at least some nominal effort to comply with policies and guidelines, please. John Carter (talk) 20:55, 7 July 2013 (UTC)
- P. S. I also very strongly suggest to you, Ignocrates, that you cease in the rather laughable attempt at prejudicially rephrasing the comments of others. The apparent inability to read which it indicates probably humiliates you much more than your own misreadings of the comments of others would ever humiliate anyone else. John Carter (talk) 21:01, 7 July 2013 (UTC)
- John. I'll have to step in here. I find what you are repeating at great length very hard to follow. I've been reviewed Ignocrates work and find it reflective of the best scholarship and responsive to comments by other parties. Your edit summary was unfortunate (Iggy is a Christian nickname, from St Ignatius), and your tone exudes a taunting hostility that Ignocrates, whose answers have been precise, and to the point, does not merit. You and I have had a good, long-standing relationship in wiki, so I say this with a certain feeling reluctance.By the way Boisnard's views are not as depicted, highly marginal. A version of the view that behind Matthew there was an original Hebrew text was also argued by Philippe Rolland, though not if I recall regarding the Ebionites. If I have time I will look into that. Nishidani (talk) 22:08, 7 July 2013 (UTC)
- I believe it would be very useful if you reviewed several of his comments as well. These include his comments regarding the Ebionites FAR where he seems to have explicitly indicated that he believes he should be able to add his own opinions to the article. I would also very strongly recommend that you review his repeated calls that (pardon me if I get the spelling wrong) Shemaiah Phillips and his non-notable Ebionite Jewish Community/Ebionite Community are reliable sources for this topic, and that their website is a reasonable external link to that article, and even his apparent collusion to produce an article on that group, even though it clearly does not meet notability requirements. All that, taken together, raise extremely serious questions regarding his capacity for anything remotely resembling neutrality and NPOV on this topic. John Carter (talk) 16:48, 11 July 2013 (UTC)
- Please provide specific diffs or exact quotations here on the talk page to support your claims: "he seems to have explicitly indicated that he believes he should be able to add his own opinions to the article" and "his repeated calls that (pardon me if I get the spelling wrong) Shemaiah Phillips and his non-notable Ebionite Jewish Community/Ebionite Community are reliable sources for this topic, and that their website is a reasonable external link to that article" or else retract your knowingly false statements, made with the intent to deceive other editors and defame my reputation. Ignocrates (talk) 18:02, 11 July 2013 (UTC)
- Still waiting for an explanation of your knowingly false statements above. Another day, another lie it seems. Ignocrates (talk) 23:55, 11 July 2013 (UTC)
- Please provide specific diffs or exact quotations here on the talk page to support your claims: "he seems to have explicitly indicated that he believes he should be able to add his own opinions to the article" and "his repeated calls that (pardon me if I get the spelling wrong) Shemaiah Phillips and his non-notable Ebionite Jewish Community/Ebionite Community are reliable sources for this topic, and that their website is a reasonable external link to that article" or else retract your knowingly false statements, made with the intent to deceive other editors and defame my reputation. Ignocrates (talk) 18:02, 11 July 2013 (UTC)
- Nishidani, welcome to the discussion. You raise a very good point about Philippe Rolland in general. Neither the Hebrew Gospel hypothesis, Gospel of Matthew, nor Gospel of Mark include the work of either Boismard or Rolland. It was left to Delbert Burkett (2004) Rethinking the Gospel Sources: From Proto-Mark to Mark, pp. 138–40, to bring their contributions to the notice of the English-speaking general public. I suspect one of the issues is language; both scholars published almost exclusively in French. The French "school", which also includes Simon Claude Mimouni, indeed takes a putative Hebrew Matthew much more seriously than American, English, and German scholars. To the best of my knowledge, Philippe Rolland did not comment on the Ebionites, but there may be a journal article published in French out there somewhere that will prove me wrong. Ignocrates (talk) 23:02, 7 July 2013 (UTC)
- I believe it would be very useful if you reviewed several of his comments as well. These include his comments regarding the Ebionites FAR where he seems to have explicitly indicated that he believes he should be able to add his own opinions to the article. I would also very strongly recommend that you review his repeated calls that (pardon me if I get the spelling wrong) Shemaiah Phillips and his non-notable Ebionite Jewish Community/Ebionite Community are reliable sources for this topic, and that their website is a reasonable external link to that article, and even his apparent collusion to produce an article on that group, even though it clearly does not meet notability requirements. All that, taken together, raise extremely serious questions regarding his capacity for anything remotely resembling neutrality and NPOV on this topic. John Carter (talk) 16:48, 11 July 2013 (UTC)
- John. I'll have to step in here. I find what you are repeating at great length very hard to follow. I've been reviewed Ignocrates work and find it reflective of the best scholarship and responsive to comments by other parties. Your edit summary was unfortunate (Iggy is a Christian nickname, from St Ignatius), and your tone exudes a taunting hostility that Ignocrates, whose answers have been precise, and to the point, does not merit. You and I have had a good, long-standing relationship in wiki, so I say this with a certain feeling reluctance.By the way Boisnard's views are not as depicted, highly marginal. A version of the view that behind Matthew there was an original Hebrew text was also argued by Philippe Rolland, though not if I recall regarding the Ebionites. If I have time I will look into that. Nishidani (talk) 22:08, 7 July 2013 (UTC)
- P. S. I also very strongly suggest to you, Ignocrates, that you cease in the rather laughable attempt at prejudicially rephrasing the comments of others. The apparent inability to read which it indicates probably humiliates you much more than your own misreadings of the comments of others would ever humiliate anyone else. John Carter (talk) 21:01, 7 July 2013 (UTC)
- I very, very strongly suggest that you read WP:IDIDNTHEARTHAT and cease both embarrasing yourself and also comply with policies and guidelines.. First, if you could be bothered to actually check the print version of the Anchor Bible Dictionary, which is among the most readily available sources out there, you would see that the article is in fact signed in the print version, on page 262 of the 2nd volume. The sources have been provided, and you have apparently done nothing to address them. Please desist from arrogant refusal to deal with reality and actually make at least some nominal effort to comply with policies and guidelines, please. John Carter (talk) 20:55, 7 July 2013 (UTC)
- Well. You appear to have the ability to access such sources. If you can get copies of key articles in the original by either, email them to me, and I'll read them for you, and, though I haven't that much time, try to pass you a summary of them.Nishidani (talk) 07:13, 8 July 2013 (UTC)
- Is this reply directed to me? If so, I will take a look at Rolland's list of publications and see what I can find. Ignocrates (talk) 13:15, 8 July 2013 (UTC)
- First, it is useful to have some outside input. The following points are the points of contention. One. The third edition of the Oxford source cites both the article in the ABD and Boisnard as sources, and the ABC explicitly refers to it. I am the first to acknowledge that any reference work will have weak articles, and this could be one. However, given the inclusion in the most highly regarded reference book of recent times, there is a very hard case to say that it does not merit inclusion as per WEIGHT, if only, perhaps, to indicate that the source is not held as particularly reliable now. Honestly, I have to say that it is almost obligatory, based on the ABD, to be included as per WEIGHT. It may be discounted - that happens. It might have been nice if certain editors had made the edits in wikipedia space, which they did not; had they done so, the problems could have been resolved earlier. I stand by the fact that a 2005 reference work, one of, I think, the last two or three published with recent updates on the subject, includes it in its short bibliography, if not text. It only had a short paragraph of text. And I'm not sure exactly what the meaning of your last sentence is. It could mean that the views are highly marginal (they might be) or that they aren't (they might be that, too - I dunno). But I believe that saying the ABD is inaccurate on this topic is rather an extraordinary claim, and such extraordinary claims require extraodinary sourcing to oppose them, and I am far from convinced that standard has been met here. Now, if there is a good review of the ABD in some sort of remotely academic source which explicitly says this content is wrongly emphasized, hopefully indicating why, that's fine - that would meet those criteria. But I haven't seen that evidence produced yet. Regarding conduct, I can't say calling me JC, apparently indicating that perhaps I think I'm Jesus Christ, is necessarily something that would be called respectful either, but I have let that slide. However, honestly, Ignocrates is a word which doesn't appear on my spell check, and Iggy, referring I guess Iggy Pop does. Go figure. John Carter (talk) 22:30, 7 July 2013 (UTC)
- Other editors should pay attention to claims you make about yourself on this talk page, such as "I think I'm Jesus Christ", as an important clue to what may be going on here. Ignocrates (talk) 18:55, 11 July 2013 (UTC)
- And you should certainly make sopme effort to actually read the comments of others. If you had bothered to do so, you would have noticed that I was speaking about others who refer to me as that, like, well, you. To make it clear for the apparently hard-of-thinking, at no point have I ever indicated anything remotely like believing myself to be Jesus. Unlike some others, I am not driven by ego in my work on wiki. This seems to be perhaps yet another of a fairly regular series of completely irrelevant and off-topic snarky comments by one editor here, and I believe it would be extremely useful if Ignocrates might actually both read and make some effort to understand talk page guidelines as per ]. John Carter (talk) 20:51, 11 July 2013 (UTC)
- As far as I'm concerned, "JC" is nothing but an abbreviation for John Carter; shorthand so that I don't have to spell it out in full. All the rest of this tripe is coming from you alone. Ignocrates (talk) 23:51, 11 July 2013 (UTC)
- And you should certainly make sopme effort to actually read the comments of others. If you had bothered to do so, you would have noticed that I was speaking about others who refer to me as that, like, well, you. To make it clear for the apparently hard-of-thinking, at no point have I ever indicated anything remotely like believing myself to be Jesus. Unlike some others, I am not driven by ego in my work on wiki. This seems to be perhaps yet another of a fairly regular series of completely irrelevant and off-topic snarky comments by one editor here, and I believe it would be extremely useful if Ignocrates might actually both read and make some effort to understand talk page guidelines as per ]. John Carter (talk) 20:51, 11 July 2013 (UTC)
- Other editors should pay attention to claims you make about yourself on this talk page, such as "I think I'm Jesus Christ", as an important clue to what may be going on here. Ignocrates (talk) 18:55, 11 July 2013 (UTC)
- That's great to know John, except that we were discussing the The Oxford Dictionary of the Christian Church. That is the encyclopedic article which is unsigned. So, who is embarrassed now? Hot tip: learn to use spell-check. Ignocrates (talk) 21:07, 7 July 2013 (UTC)
- Ignocrates, honestly, you seem to once again be indulging in some irrational attempt to avoid dealing with the reality of the subject and in behavior which rather clearly violates the guideline I linked to above. However, it may well be that your cognitive faculties aren't all that I may have to date perhaps unfoundedly assumed them to have been. Let me restate my comments, then. The Anchor is cited as one of the six sources in that recent reference work. There have been, FWIW, two more since then which deal with this topic, the very conservative Zondervan encyclopedia, which gives the article only a short paragraph and, given its bias, not the best anyway, and the Coogan Oxford Encyclopedia of the Books of the Bible, which only mentions the Gospel of the Ebionites twice in two articles on other subjects. I, however, was saying that the Anchor Bible Dictionary is among the most reliable sources out there, and that its content be used. I produced a source which includes it in its short bibliography;. Apparently, you are perhaps engaging in a completely off-topic and rather, well, irrational, argument that because that second source is not signed, then the first one cannot be used. There is I believe a rather transparent flaw in what might be called, charitably, the reasoning in that argument. At no point did I say that the Oxford was to be used as a source, and I cannot see how any rational person would have made that mistake. It is hard not to see the above comment as a continuation of the behavior which might be considered dubious as per WP:IDIDNTHEARTHAT. Honestly, I am at this point very, very close to placing what I believe to be reasonably placed quality tags on this article if the above editor continues in making comments which in no way relate to the comments to which he is responding. Most any rational adult would be able to do so. If you aren't able to do so, Ignocrates, that would be very interesting evidence not only for the featured article review people, but also for any arbitrators or administrators who might be called in regarding problematic behavior. John Carter (talk) 21:40, 7 July 2013 (UTC)
- I suggest you take Llywrch's advice and walk away from this article before you humiliate yourself any further. Ignocrates (talk) 23:44, 30 June 2013 (UTC)
- Hebrew Gospel of Matthew
Next, I'm going to cover Boismard's speculation about a Hebrew Gospel of Matthew as an underlying source of the Gospel of the Ebionites. I was the one that raised this issue above as fringe scholarship. The Anchor Bible article compares Boismard's conjecture as a dissenting opinion to the modern consensus view of Vielhaur in Schneemelcher's New Testament Apocrypha first edition (1963). I quote the text as follows (with text separated to avoid of copyright violations):
A dissenting position, however, is that of Boismard, who detects two traditions in Epiphanius' quotations from the gospel used by the Ebionites. One is a later, more developed tradition, which is probably a Greek language original;
the second is a much more primitive tradition and has a strong imprint of a Semitic language. It is this latter tradition which Boismard equates with the Hebrew (i.e. pre-Greek) recension of Matthew - the document described by Epiphanius.
— Petersen, W.L., The Anchor Bible Dictionary Vol.2, p.262
I'm going to stipulate that this is an accurate summary of Boismard's original article in French. Ignocrates (talk) 00:00, 27 June 2013 (UTC)
Having reread the Anchor Bible article, I am retracting my statement that this conjecture is universally regarded as fringe scholarship. It is a minority view surely, probably a tiny minority view, but it is not fringe. The Misplaced Pages article on the Gospel of the Ebionites already mentions a putative linkage between the GEbi and a hypothetical Hebrew Gospel in the lead and the body, so this information should be easy to incorporate. I propose to cite the Anchor Bible Dictionary reference in the lead and add a citation of Boismard's journal article to the body along with a note containing a paraphrase of the above second quotation. Ignocrates (talk) 00:18, 27 June 2013 (UTC)
To provide a counter-point to this perspective, I'm going to cite Gregory (2008), which is already a source, with a quotation in a note as follows:
The reasons for believing that Matthew was composed in Greek are so compelling that the quest for a Hebrew original is best regarded as a dead end, no matter how romantic its pursuit might seem.
— Gregory, The Non-canonical Gospels, p.55
I think these additions will adequately support the content on the Hebrew Gospel of Matthew in the article. Ignocrates (talk) 13:20, 27 June 2013 (UTC)
- I have implemented the suggested changes to the article. Ignocrates (talk) 18:31, 28 June 2013 (UTC)
- Justin Martyr's gospel harmony
The content about Justin Martyr follows the discussion about Boismard's conjecture. Rather than comment on it at this point, I'm going to show it as a series of quotations:
1. Investigations into the gospel text of Justin shows that he used a harmony which incorporated the Synoptics but not John (Bellinzoni, 1967, p.140)
2. The date of Justin's gospel text, its harmonized form, and its failure to incorporate John are all reminiscent of the Ebionite gospel. The relationship between Justin's gospel and the Ebionite gospel, if any, is unclear at present.
3. It is plain, however, that the genre was known, and Bertrand has argued that the harmonized Gospel of the Ebionites antedates the Diatessaron of Tatian, which was composed about 170 CE.
— Petersen, The Anchor Bible Dictionary, p.262
The rest of the Anchor Bible Dictionary article to the end is unproblematic and already covered in this Misplaced Pages article, supported by reliable secondary sources. Ignocrates (talk) 21:56, 27 June 2013 (UTC)
The content of the third quotation above is unproblematic and covered in the article. I could, and probably should, add Bertrand as a source to back up the content that is already there. Frankly, I missed this reference because Bertrand published in French. Bringing this article up to FA quality has made me keenly aware of my deficiencies in reading publications in French and German; deficiencies I plan to remedy, but it will take time. Ignocrates (talk) 22:04, 27 June 2013 (UTC)
The meaning of the first two quotations probably seems straightforward to a reader who is unfamiliar with the peer-reviewed literature. Bellinzoni is cited as a source for the statement in quotation 1 "Investigations into the gospel text of Justin shows that he used a harmony which incorporated the Synoptics but not John (Bellinzoni, 1967, p.140) (underlines are mine). The plain meaning of this statement is that Justin used a gospel harmony somehow associated with him (whether, written by him or merely used by him is not made clear). The problem is that Bellinzoni is not discussing a gospel harmony here (p.140); he is summarizing conclusions about a primitive Christian catechism. Bellinzoni concludes that Justin's principle sources for his harmonistic materials were a Christian catechism and a reference manual (vade mecum) against heresies. With respect to Justin's composition of a gospel harmony, Bellinzoni further states on p.141, and I quote here:
It must, however, be emphasized that there is absolutely no evidence that Justin ever composed a complete harmony of the Synoptic Gospels; his harmonies were of linited scope and were apparently composed for didactic purposes.
— Bellinzoni, The Sayings of Jesus in the Writings of Justin Martyr, p.141
Therefore, one has to interpret the meaning of quotation1 narrowly as "harmonistic materials containing gospel sayings used by Justin" for this statement to be factually accurate. I'm not sure a non-expert reader would do that. I flagged this discrepancy immediately, which is one reason I elected to not use the ABD as a source. Ignocrates (talk) 17:00, 28 June 2013 (UTC)
Bellinzoni continues by comparing the harmonistic materials used by Justin to the harmonistic materials used in the homily known as 2 Clement. He points out that 2 Clement was probably written before Justin composed his first Apology and his Dialogue, pointing out that:
2 Clement merely indicates that there were in use before Justin's period written gospel harmonies, which served as models for the harmonies used and perhaps composed by Justin. Justin's similarities to 2 Clement are no more than would be expected when two different harmonies of the Synoptic Gospels are composed.
— Bellinzoni, The Sayings of Jesus in the Writings of Justin Martyr, p.142
Bellinzoni does not make a comparison between the harmonistic materials Justin used and the Gospel of the Ebionites. Ignocrates (talk) 17:36, 28 June 2013 (UTC)
All of the above analysis with respect to Justin leads me to believe that the statements in quotation2 – the assumption that Justin used a gospel harmony and the comparison of that harmony to the Gospel of the Ebionites – are the result of Petersen's own original research rather than based on any reliable secondary sources. I don't think a tertiary source like an encyclopedic dictionary should be creating original research. Therefore, it is my opinion that if this ABD article is going to be used, it should be supported by reliable secondary sources as backup. That is the subject I will address in the next segment. Ignocrates (talk) 17:48, 28 June 2013 (UTC)
- Secondary sources
Scholar Richard Bauckham, who is already listed as a source (Bauckham, 2003) in this article, notes the following about the Gospel of the Ebionites:
George Howard has also shown that in many specific respects its text is typical of the harmonizing tendencies of the second century, both in transmission of the gospel texts themselves and in the use of the texts by writers such as Justin.
— Bauckham, The Image of the Judeo-Christians in Ancient Jewish and Christian Literature, p.172
It may take me a few more days to track down Howard's scholarly publication to get a more complete description from the original source; however, even Bauckham's brief note in passing about Justin's use of harmonized materials, based on a reliable secondary source, should have priority over Petersen's unsourced statement in the 1992 ABD, which appears to be a summary of Howard's 1988 work without attribution. Ignocrates (talk) 23:46, 29 June 2013 (UTC)
- I was able to locate Howard's (1988) article at the university. It is a substantial piece of work; it's going to take me at least a day to go through it. I will copy the citation to Further Reading for now while I figure out how to incorporate it into the reference sources. Ignocrates (talk) 18:48, 30 June 2013 (UTC)
- Howard simply states that Justin also used harmonized gospel materials and refers to Bellinzoni (1967) as a reference. He makes no attempt to compare between the GEbi and Justin, other than Justin's mention of fire on the water during Jesus' baptism in Dial. 88 in contrast to a great light on the water in Gebi and the Diatessaron. Howard makes the important point that the creation of harmonies based on the gospels was a typical method of composition in the 2nd century. I may add a sentence in "Relationship to other texts" about the nature of GEbi as a harmony and a comparison to other pre-Diatesseronic harmonies (2 Clement, GThom) as well as Justin. Ignocrates (talk) 12:40, 1 July 2013 (UTC)
- Ok, I believe that addresses the content issues with Justin Martyr. Ignocrates (talk) 23:48, 1 July 2013 (UTC)
- Howard simply states that Justin also used harmonized gospel materials and refers to Bellinzoni (1967) as a reference. He makes no attempt to compare between the GEbi and Justin, other than Justin's mention of fire on the water during Jesus' baptism in Dial. 88 in contrast to a great light on the water in Gebi and the Diatessaron. Howard makes the important point that the creation of harmonies based on the gospels was a typical method of composition in the 2nd century. I may add a sentence in "Relationship to other texts" about the nature of GEbi as a harmony and a comparison to other pre-Diatesseronic harmonies (2 Clement, GThom) as well as Justin. Ignocrates (talk) 12:40, 1 July 2013 (UTC)
Fwiw, this is a nice bio by SBL of William L. Petersen (harmonist) who tragically passed away in 2006, the same year as his mentor Gilles Quispel. Maybe someone reading this can find the time to acknowledge his contributions in a biographic article on his life and works. He was an expert in the Diatessaron and gospel harmonies in general, which explains his interest in the Ebionite gospel. Ignocrates (talk) 01:20, 9 July 2013 (UTC)
Thoughts from Keilana
Hi, so here is my unbiased 3rd opinion about the sourcing in this article. I'm sorry it took me so long - I hope this helps. If anything I've said is unclear, please don't hesitate to ask for clarification. I've listed the sources that I have some issue with in order. If I haven't listed a source, it means I took a look and think it's reliable and worth including.
- I'm not sure how great of a source Finley 2009 is, I try not to cite Ph. D theses myself, especially when the author is not now an academic. I could only find Finley's thesis, he doesn't seem to have published since, nor does he seem to have a faculty position. However, I'm not a theologian so I can't really comment on the veracity of his claims. (On the topic of PhD theses, I think Koch is acceptable because he is now a publishing academic authority.)
- I would prefer to see a more updated version of the Jewish Encyclopedia (Kohler) cited - scholarly opinion on these sorts of matters can change a lot in a century. If you want to include Kohler's scholarship, it could be appropriate in the context of historical opinions about the Ebionites. I don't take the same issue with Meyer and Meyer as the information sourced is also found in other, more contemporary sources.
- I would look critically at the reliability of Lapham, he's not a professor anywhere or in any position of academic authority that I can find.
- I don't speak German so was not really able to see about Pape beyond a shoddy automated translation - my general concern about having current sources applies, I assume. As it does with Pick.
- I can't find Frank Williams' credentials anywhere.
- I think you need to treat Skarsaune very carefully given his involvement with the Messianic Jews - that's not to say he can't be included, just...carefully. They are not mainstream and WP:UNDUE does apply here.
That's about all I have re: veracity of sources. Good luck with this article. Best, Keilana| 21:30, 11 July 2013 (UTC)
- Thank you for the independent review! Ignocrates (talk) 23:43, 11 July 2013 (UTC)
Oskar Skarsaune
FWIW, I would be very, very interested in some sort of elaboration of the linkage between Skarsaune and the MJs, for two reasons. One, I don't remember having encountered such evidence before, and (2) the main article on the MJ's itself has been for some time problematic. If you could provide some information about where you see the evidence of such a linkage, which I don't think I've ever seen in any of the databank articles on the MJs, that would be very, very welcome. John Carter (talk) 21:53, 11 July 2013 (UTC)
- Oskar Skarsaune. There is no merit to the query however, unless one can show that his peers in historical biblical criticism consider his views as minoritarian. I don't see evidence of this.If Skarsaune’s links with Messianic Judaism make his work problematical, then all Christian scholars on this affiliated with any Church are equally problematical. Peer-review trumps partisanship.Nishidani (talk) 21:59, 11 July 2013 (UTC)
- I was actually thinking more of trying to find some sources on the MJ, rather than this article. All the books I've seen to date are basically self-published or written by clearly and expressedly sympathetic sources, and there aren't even that many of them. The Messianic Judaism article has been lacking for independent sources for some time, and even if he isn't really independent, he might be one of the better sources anyway. John Carter (talk) 22:11, 11 July 2013 (UTC)
- Correct. He is notable as a major scholar in this field of study. Frankly, this was a pejorative thing to bring up. Ignocrates (talk) 22:13, 11 July 2013 (UTC)
- And the comment above, with its vague accusation against some unspecified party, is probably even more perjorative. I once again, for the second time today, urge the above editor to make some sort of effort to read and perhaps adhere to WP:TPG. I think they have been here for about as long as that editor has, and there is no good reason for that editor to not be familiar with them by now. Regarding Skarsaune himself, it would be worth checking the sources in Northern European languages, I suppose, to see if they have any criticism of him, but I am not myself familiar with most of them, and cannot do so on my own. John Carter (talk) 22:30, 11 July 2013 (UTC)
- I think you know what I meant. It was wrong to bring this up without some kind of evidence from the published literature that his group affiliations (I didn't even know about this MJ connection) bias his work. Ignocrates (talk) 22:38, 11 July 2013 (UTC)
- Yes, I do. It seems that you were insulting Keilana, who mentioned it in the first place, who only came to this page at your request. You know, it truly is the worst of manners to accuse someone who you asked to take part in this discussion of acting improperly. But, then, there always has been a bit of a delusional self-aggrandizing monomania on the part of one editor around here. John Carter (talk) 01:17, 12 July 2013 (UTC)
- Ongoing issues with you aside, I didn't mean to insult
himher, and I apologize tohimher if it was taken that way. Ignocrates (talk) 01:28, 12 July 2013 (UTC)
- Ongoing issues with you aside, I didn't mean to insult
- Yes, I do. It seems that you were insulting Keilana, who mentioned it in the first place, who only came to this page at your request. You know, it truly is the worst of manners to accuse someone who you asked to take part in this discussion of acting improperly. But, then, there always has been a bit of a delusional self-aggrandizing monomania on the part of one editor around here. John Carter (talk) 01:17, 12 July 2013 (UTC)
- I think you know what I meant. It was wrong to bring this up without some kind of evidence from the published literature that his group affiliations (I didn't even know about this MJ connection) bias his work. Ignocrates (talk) 22:38, 11 July 2013 (UTC)
- And the comment above, with its vague accusation against some unspecified party, is probably even more perjorative. I once again, for the second time today, urge the above editor to make some sort of effort to read and perhaps adhere to WP:TPG. I think they have been here for about as long as that editor has, and there is no good reason for that editor to not be familiar with them by now. Regarding Skarsaune himself, it would be worth checking the sources in Northern European languages, I suppose, to see if they have any criticism of him, but I am not myself familiar with most of them, and cannot do so on my own. John Carter (talk) 22:30, 11 July 2013 (UTC)
- Correct. He is notable as a major scholar in this field of study. Frankly, this was a pejorative thing to bring up. Ignocrates (talk) 22:13, 11 July 2013 (UTC)
Reviews of Jewish Believers in Jesus (2007): link to PDF, link to PDF
Here are links to two very comprehensive academic reviews. Ignocrates (talk) 18:07, 12 July 2013 (UTC)
- Apparently, you make very weak efforts to know anything about the other editors with whom you deal. Otherwise, you would probably know that Keilana is rather obviously a female name, and that Keilana's picture on her user page is obviously that of a female. Such really weak efforts to verify statements about people you have personally sought out for comment does not in any way speak well for you. John Carter (talk) 19:08, 16 July 2013 (UTC)
- I am completely gender-neutral as far as it matters to my editing here. However, I apologize for that mistake and I will correct it. Feel better now? Ignocrates (talk) 19:19, 16 July 2013 (UTC)
- Apparently, you make very weak efforts to know anything about the other editors with whom you deal. Otherwise, you would probably know that Keilana is rather obviously a female name, and that Keilana's picture on her user page is obviously that of a female. Such really weak efforts to verify statements about people you have personally sought out for comment does not in any way speak well for you. John Carter (talk) 19:08, 16 July 2013 (UTC)
Gregory C. Finley
I agree that Greg Finley's C.V. is thin as a newly-minted scholar; however, there's nothing shabby about publishing his dissertation at the Catholic University either. The claim this reference supports is not controversial (that Epiphanius' polemic against the Ebionites is possibly targeted, indirectly, at the Arians of his time), so I don't think it's a big deal to keep it. Second opinions? Ignocrates (talk) 23:40, 11 July 2013 (UTC)
Here is Susan Wessel's bio. She was Greg Finley's major professor for his dissertation. I'm going to contact her and ask for a more complete bio on Finley. Ignocrates (talk) 00:17, 12 July 2013 (UTC)
Kaufmann Kohler
This is a non-issue as far as supporting article content. F. Stanley Jones, in Eerdmann's Dictionary (2000), says much the same thing, and that is the next encyclopedic reference in the article. I don't have a problem dropping Kohler; however, there is no reason to do it either. Ignocrates (talk) 22:32, 11 July 2013 (UTC)
I replaced Kohler (1906) with Goranson (1992). Problem solved. Ignocrates (talk) 02:30, 13 July 2013 (UTC)
Fred Lapham
Also published by Fred Lapham: Peter: The Myth, the Man and the Writings and brief bio. Ignocrates (talk) 23:07, 11 July 2013 (UTC)
He is listed as an Honorary Fellow at the University of Wales here. I assume that is a British term for an Adjunct Lecturer. I asked Llywrch if he can take a deeper look into Lapham's bio, since he recommended Lapham for inclusion as a source during FAC. Ignocrates (talk) 23:18, 11 July 2013 (UTC)
Is there sufficient concern here to request an independent review of Lapham's notability? Second opinions please. Ignocrates (talk) 01:24, 12 July 2013 (UTC)
Some reviews of Lapham's An Introduction to the New Testament Apocrypha are as follows:
Excerpt of a review by Daniel M. Gurtner:
- “…demonstrates careful awareness of patristic sources regarding sources of these texts and provides a helpful categorization of types of documents with respect to familiar New Testament documents. He also provides a helpful discussion of the origin and particular emphases of Gnosticism.” –Daniel M. Gurtner, Society of Biblical Literature, September 2004 link
The full review by Daniel M. Gurtner: link to PDF
A brief review in Early Christian Apocrypha: A Bibliographic Essay by William H. Shepherd:
- "Slightly less authoritative (than Ehrman), but still a useful orientation for beginners, is Fred Lapham, An Introduction to the New Testament Apocrypha (New York: T&T Clark International, 2003), which reflects recent scholarly trends by taking a geographical approach." link
Here is Shepard's full review: link.
My take-away from these reviews is that the book is a good introductory text for beginners, better than most with respect to taking a geographical approach, but not complete enough to be a useful tool for scholars for reasons Gurtner describes in detail. Ignocrates (talk) 16:44, 12 July 2013 (UTC)
Here are links to numerous scholarly publications that establish Lapham's notability: link; link; link; link; including the Blackwell Companion to Jesus link and the Zondervan Encyclopedia link Ignocrates (talk) 17:35, 26 July 2013 (UTC)
Wilhelm Pape
Wilhelm Pape was added intentionally as a historical source by In ictu oculi to show one of the first scholars to make this connection. Ignocrates (talk) 22:55, 11 July 2013 (UTC)
I have replaced Pape (1880) with Klauck (2003). Ignocrates (talk) 00:33, 26 July 2013 (UTC)
Bernhard Pick
Bernhard Pick's translation was republished in 2009. He is noteworthy as the scholar who initially came up with the list of seven sayings that is the consensus among modern scholars. So, why not acknowledge that? Ignocrates (talk) 22:44, 11 July 2013 (UTC)
Frank Williams
Biographical info can be found here and a wiki link to his work as a translator is here Panarion#Translations. Ignocrates (talk) 22:08, 11 July 2013 (UTC)
About the author (1994):
Frank Williams, Ph.D. (1961) Oxford University; Religious Studies Faculty, the University of Texas at El Paso; recent publications: "The Apocryphon of James" and "The Concept of Our Great Power" in "Reader's Guide to the Nag Hammadi Library," (Polebridge Press); "The Panarion of Epiphanius of Salamis, Book I," (Brill, 1987). link
More biography about Frank Williams Ph.D. as translator of the Panarion. Ignocrates (talk) 22:20, 11 July 2013 (UTC)
Review by Nishidani
I apologize to Ignocrates for this tardy appearance, despite the fact that the problem was a breakdown in my telephone system, serious enough to require, after 5 days of no internet connection, a thorough rewiriting of the house. Don't know if these notes I'll be making are useful at this point (memory told me I had to get this done by the 17th of July. I see I am wrong)
Lead
- conventional name (note needed: ‘The original title of this gospel is unknown’. Cameron 1982 p.103)
- believed to have been used =that may have been used (there is no scholarly consensus (‘belief) constituting a belief that (a) there was such a Gospel and (b) it was used by Ebionites.
- All that is known of the gospel consists of = all that remains of the gospel are
- The quotations were used as part of = The quotations were embedded in a . .
- Epiphanius of Salamis;=Epiphanius of Salamis, our only witness for this gospel.(Finley p.89)
- The text is =The surviving fragments derive from a gospel harmony
- It is believed to have been composed some time during the middle of the 2nd century in or around the region east of the Jordan River. (note 2 Cameron 1982 p.104 does not say this. ‘Its provenance is probably Syria-Palestine, where the Ebionites were at home’ p.104). You may like to use another source if you are attached to the ‘east of the Jordan River’ phrasing’ i.e. ‘Epiphanius maintained that the Jewish-Christian group that used this Gospel was located in the region east of the Jordan River' (Bart Ehrman, Zlatko Pleše, Apocryphal Gospels:Texts and Translations Oxford University Press, 2011 p.295-6). But note that neither source identifies this as the area of its composition.
- Distinctive features include. A list requires (;) ‘the absence of the virgin birth and of a genealogy of Jesus; an Adoptionist Christology; the abolition of Jewish sacrifices by Jesus; and an advocacy of vegetarianism.’
- subject of scholarly investigation = intense scholarly investigation’ (intense is required because most things have attracted scholarly scrutiny).
(But I must have some dinner) Nishidani (talk) 17:59, 16 July 2013 (UTC)
- I have incorporated your suggested changes. Cheers. Ignocrates (talk) 22:33, 17 July 2013 (UTC)
- Thank you for vewy much for the beginning of the review, and I am asuming that this is just the beginning, as you seem to be implying that what you have suggested so far are just changes to the lead. We look forward to your further comments regarding the rest of the article as well. John Carter (talk) 18:10, 16 July 2013 (UTC)
- Thank you for taking the time, Nishidani. I hope there are more comments to follow on improving the body. As far as I'm concerned, I have advanced the quality of the article to the point where those editors among us who love books and learning (e.g. User:Brianboulton, User:In ictu oculi, User:Llywrch, User:Nishidani, User:Tim riley) should be encouraged to collectively assume the editing responsibilities to further improve this article to a truly professional level. I view the promotion of the article to FA as the starting-point of that process. Ignocrates (talk) 21:43, 16 July 2013 (UTC)
- I'll be getting round to the rest. Just have a backlog of things to fix. I think an informal team approach is what really required, as you say, for a field of articles that, for one reason or another, don't manage to get off their feet and stand up to scrutiny. What I particularly admire about the precedent you've set is that, now, at least in one of these fields, you've provided a benchmark. I've often been disappointed by my inability to touch this area of antiquity, down to the Khazars, without the guns of August beginning to fire off at every other edit. This teamwork, by people who agree only on format, RS, page structure, and don't have any other bone to chew but work for the morsel thrown their way when others dine at the neat repast prepared for them, worked splendidly at the SAQ article. I don't see why this can't happen in this area, of the religions of antiquity. John's worries about the content are, I think, too influenced by the past. John, look at it with fresh eyes. The content per se is not problematical in articles brought to this level of sophistication: for the simple reason that the highwater mark for sourcing means any editor can then jump in and challenge, revise and edit, altering emphases, challenging statements, as soon as she notes something wanting, or unbalanced. And the original drfting editor(s), having subscribed to very high, strict standards of evidence, will not oppose such proposals if the new evidence is strong, and academically grounded. This has been the fundamental crux in the past, and Ignocrates has striven intelligently and resolutely to rise to the occasion. We should be encouraging him. Cheers.Nishidani (talk) 08:23, 17 July 2013 (UTC)
- I find it nothing less than astounding that Ignocrates can say getting an article up to FA is only the "starting point in a process". In fact, if that editor had ever paid much, if any, attention to the FA process, that designation is only supposed to be given to articles that are already at a status where they are among the best we have. The problem here, ultimately, is the rather obvious incompetence to edit of one editor who has, so far as I can tell, declared by fiat that his views, rather than policies and guidelines, take priority. If I do not see twhat seems to me to be a reasonable attempt to actively address the legitimate concerns expressed on this talk page addressed within the next week, I shall submit the article for both FA and GA reconsideration. John Carter (talk) 14:46, 21 July 2013 (UTC)
- Actually, I decided not to wait, and have now nominated the article for FAR. I hope that this encourages editors to actually address concerns, and if it doesn't then, really, I can't see any reason for the article to continue to be regarded as FA quality. John Carter (talk) 15:38, 21 July 2013 (UTC)
- I find it nothing less than astounding that Ignocrates can say getting an article up to FA is only the "starting point in a process". In fact, if that editor had ever paid much, if any, attention to the FA process, that designation is only supposed to be given to articles that are already at a status where they are among the best we have. The problem here, ultimately, is the rather obvious incompetence to edit of one editor who has, so far as I can tell, declared by fiat that his views, rather than policies and guidelines, take priority. If I do not see twhat seems to me to be a reasonable attempt to actively address the legitimate concerns expressed on this talk page addressed within the next week, I shall submit the article for both FA and GA reconsideration. John Carter (talk) 14:46, 21 July 2013 (UTC)
- I'll be getting round to the rest. Just have a backlog of things to fix. I think an informal team approach is what really required, as you say, for a field of articles that, for one reason or another, don't manage to get off their feet and stand up to scrutiny. What I particularly admire about the precedent you've set is that, now, at least in one of these fields, you've provided a benchmark. I've often been disappointed by my inability to touch this area of antiquity, down to the Khazars, without the guns of August beginning to fire off at every other edit. This teamwork, by people who agree only on format, RS, page structure, and don't have any other bone to chew but work for the morsel thrown their way when others dine at the neat repast prepared for them, worked splendidly at the SAQ article. I don't see why this can't happen in this area, of the religions of antiquity. John's worries about the content are, I think, too influenced by the past. John, look at it with fresh eyes. The content per se is not problematical in articles brought to this level of sophistication: for the simple reason that the highwater mark for sourcing means any editor can then jump in and challenge, revise and edit, altering emphases, challenging statements, as soon as she notes something wanting, or unbalanced. And the original drfting editor(s), having subscribed to very high, strict standards of evidence, will not oppose such proposals if the new evidence is strong, and academically grounded. This has been the fundamental crux in the past, and Ignocrates has striven intelligently and resolutely to rise to the occasion. We should be encouraging him. Cheers.Nishidani (talk) 08:23, 17 July 2013 (UTC)
Neutrality tag
I have added an NPOV tag to the article on the basis of what seems to me to be an overt attempt at minimalization of the point of view of one academic, Boismard, whose material is both discussed at comparative length in at least one reference source, and cited as a source in two. Also, I honestly have to say that the attempted downplaying of the topic in the content, calling it "only speculation," seems to me to be utterly laughable. Can anyone point out to me much anything, other than a verbatim recitation of Epiphanius, which isn't "only speculation" about this topic. I beleive there is no reasonable cause for the removal of this tag until and unless material from academic sources of at least the same level of reliability and reputability as the two reference works I indicated above suggest/support this hypothesis be produced. Otherwise, removing the tag, or not giving it the same regard as the other "speculation" regarding this topic which is not individually pointed out to be "speculation" in the same way, would itself be rather clearly a violation of OR/SYNTH. John Carter (talk) 17:50, 28 July 2013 (UTC)
- Boismard's published work is already cited in the article, both indirectly through the Anchor Bible Dictionary and directly using Boismard as a source. His conclusions are summarized in a note with a citation. If you are saying you have documented manuscript evidence for the existence of a Hebrew Gospel of Matthew please share it. Meanwhile, its putative existence remains a scholarly speculation. I have updated the content to clarify that it remains a subject of scholarly debate. Ignocrates (talk) 18:04, 28 July 2013 (UTC)
- Ignocrates, I am once again amazed that you can make such statements without apparently ever even reading the comments of others. I provided a direct quote from the article, in which it stated that Boismard's statements were "only speculation." That was a clearly prejudicial statement, and had no place in the article. At no point was I implying that I had any sort of evidence as you imply above, and I don't think any neutral, rational editor would assume I did. I very much question what seem to me to be ongoing efforts to throw in straw man arguments which only serve to distract from the points made, and very sincerely request them to stop. In any event, I believe at this point the tag is still reasonably placed, because I believe that, based on the reference sources, which are the closest approximation to our own goals for our own materials, the matter is not given the weight as per ] it deserves. Also, I believe it to be not unreasonable that if individuals believe that this particulr point demands explicit statement that it is of "scholarly debate," then, honestly, each and every other point in the article which may also be the subject of scholarly debate be individually indicated as such as well. John Carter (talk) 19:00, 28 July 2013 (UTC)
- What specific wording do you propose for the inclusion of the Boismard material? Ignocrates (talk) 19:41, 28 July 2013 (UTC)
- I do not believe that it is necessarily required of me to propose specific phrasing for a proposal to be considered actionable, nor do I believe that the above comment directly or even indirectly acknowledges the question that, if such material is considered appropriate for one academic view included in the article, that it is not similarly appropriate for inclusion in the discussion of any or every other academic view included in the article which may at some point be questioned for lack of concrete evidence. Personally, I believe in this case that the best thing one editor might do is to perhaps allow others who do not have what some might consider prejudiced opinions on the topic to have some input. Please allow some other editors to comment as well. Although you have done a significant degree of contribution to the article, the tag at the top of each edit box I have ever added to says clearly "Work submitted to Misplaced Pages can be edited, used, and redistributed—by anyone—subject to certain terms and conditions," and I believe that there may well be enough "everyone" else who have shown some interest in the article, other than yourself, who might be interested in offering their input as well. John Carter (talk) 19:56, 28 July 2013 (UTC)
- What specific wording do you propose for the inclusion of the Boismard material? Ignocrates (talk) 19:41, 28 July 2013 (UTC)
- Ignocrates, I am once again amazed that you can make such statements without apparently ever even reading the comments of others. I provided a direct quote from the article, in which it stated that Boismard's statements were "only speculation." That was a clearly prejudicial statement, and had no place in the article. At no point was I implying that I had any sort of evidence as you imply above, and I don't think any neutral, rational editor would assume I did. I very much question what seem to me to be ongoing efforts to throw in straw man arguments which only serve to distract from the points made, and very sincerely request them to stop. In any event, I believe at this point the tag is still reasonably placed, because I believe that, based on the reference sources, which are the closest approximation to our own goals for our own materials, the matter is not given the weight as per ] it deserves. Also, I believe it to be not unreasonable that if individuals believe that this particulr point demands explicit statement that it is of "scholarly debate," then, honestly, each and every other point in the article which may also be the subject of scholarly debate be individually indicated as such as well. John Carter (talk) 19:00, 28 July 2013 (UTC)
I have filed a case with the DRN WP:Dispute resolution noticeboard/Gospel of the Ebionites in an attempt to facilitate the resolution of this content dispute. Ignocrates (talk) 20:08, 28 July 2013 (UTC)
- I have made comments there regarding why I believe this may be more of a behavior dispute. However, I still believe it not irrational for other editors who have already marked this page for their watchlist to comment on the current and proposed changes to the article. John Carter (talk) 20:55, 28 July 2013 (UTC)
While we are awaiting a response from WP:DRN, I have asked User talk:In ictu oculi#Boismard for a WP:3O on the question of the proper WP:WEIGHT for the Boismard content. In ictu oculi is as close as we have to a resident expert on the Hebrew Gospel hypothesis and he is fluent in French. Ignocrates (talk) 16:31, 29 July 2013 (UTC)
- Comment - Sorry, nothing to hand. To be honest my main problem is with having editorial content in notes: Note "Boismard postulates that two different traditions underlie the Gospel of the Ebionites, a later, more developed, tradition in Greek, and a primitive Semitic tradition which he equates with the Hebrew Gospel of Matthew mentioned by Epiphanius" rather than citations. There's no actual link to Évangile des Ébionites et problème synoptique 1966, no citation, cannot locate it in Google Books, so who knows whether it is the case or not. I wouldn't put much scholarly weight on anything Boismard said in 1966. In ictu oculi (talk) 00:08, 30 July 2013 (UTC)
- Thanks, this is a great help. The note is a paraphrase of the summary of Boismard's work on the Gospel of the Ebionites in the ABD encyclopedic article, which is in turn a (hopefully accurate) translation of Boismard's paper in French. His paper on the GEbi is cited in the Oxford Bible Dictionary (2005) and also cited by Klijn (1992), so it can't be written-off as fringe. However, I agree this has not received much scholarly weight at all (other than in the ABD article). That is why I subordinated Boismard's conjecture to a note. It's disturbing that you can't pull up the paper in Google Books. I will look into that. Ignocrates (talk) 00:44, 30 July 2013 (UTC)
- I found 6 citations with Google Scholar here, one of them being Klijn's 1992 book. The article in French is cited correctly, but I could not pull it up either. Ignocrates (talk) 00:51, 30 July 2013 (UTC)
- Thanks, this is a great help. The note is a paraphrase of the summary of Boismard's work on the Gospel of the Ebionites in the ABD encyclopedic article, which is in turn a (hopefully accurate) translation of Boismard's paper in French. His paper on the GEbi is cited in the Oxford Bible Dictionary (2005) and also cited by Klijn (1992), so it can't be written-off as fringe. However, I agree this has not received much scholarly weight at all (other than in the ABD article). That is why I subordinated Boismard's conjecture to a note. It's disturbing that you can't pull up the paper in Google Books. I will look into that. Ignocrates (talk) 00:44, 30 July 2013 (UTC)
- I expanded the ABD citation into a note and added Petersen's direct quotation, instead of summarizing it. I included Boismard's paper as a secondary citation, in case someone wants to track down the original paper in French. If someone else has a different idea, please discuss it here. Ignocrates (talk) 12:58, 31 July 2013 (UTC)
- In reply to Ignocrates's request on my page (I'm sorry I haven'ìt had the time to work on these several pages given the heavy workload at Khazars), I was inclined to accept in ictu oculi's point - we should accept only the most recent work where possible, which Ignocrates generally has done - however the problem for me is that contemporary scholarship over the last few decades still keeps citing Boismard's work frequently (Wolf-Dietrich Köhler (1987);Rudolf Pesch (1989); Édouard Massaux, Arthur J. Bellinzoni (1990); Albertus Frederik Johannes Klijn (1992); Andreas Ennulat (1994);Simon Claude Mimouni (1998);David Neville (2002); Simon-Claude Mimouni (2004); Michael J. Kruger (2005);James Keith Elliott (2005); James A. Kelhoffer (2005);Oskar Skarsaune, Reidar Hvalvik (2007); J. V. M. Sturdy, Jonathan Knight(2007); Guido Baltes (2011) etc., to cite just book length technical studies which cite Boismard's work. This means that he is still regarded as relevant, and therefore, in some form or another, may be included, preferably through a specific secondary source that reliably excerpts his position. I think this has been done.Nishidani (talk) 19:28, 31 July 2013 (UTC)
- I think we have a talk page consensus among three editors - myself, In ictu oculi, and Nishidani - to include Boismard as a source, but cautiously as a tiny minority view. That being the case, is it time to remove the npov tag and move forward? Ignocrates (talk) 21:44, 31 July 2013 (UTC)
- I don't think one challenged minor source on a page is sufficient to raise NPOV issues warranting a tag. It is a small technical issue, easily resolved, and is being addressed. So, if that is the objection, then I think the NPOV tag can be removed, though, as always I would leave it there for a discretionary day or two (if it hasn't already been removed: no time to check!) Nishidani (talk) 15:04, 1 August 2013 (UTC)
- I believe the numerous references to Boismard in the academic literature produced by Nishidani above very seriously calls into question the apparently unfounded assertion "I agree this has not received much scholarly weight at all" and think perhaps it might make sense if certain parties were to make an effort to actually consult the academic literature, as he has, before making such apparently unfounded assertions. I also very much agree that there is a very real problem with editorializing in the notes, and other potentially dubious behavior, and think that, in general, most if not all of them really could/should be incorporated into the text or perhaps be changed into citation-type notes which can and in this circumstance easily could incorporate quotations from the sources into the note itself. Unfortunately, on Thursday, my off day, an electrical fire pretty much screwed up connectivity, among other things, for a while, and I wasn't able to do as much as I would like. However, under the circumstances, I can't see any reservations about editors who do not have previously expressed positions which could very easily be taken as substantive cause for POV complaints, editors like Nishidani and In ictu oculi, for instance, to remove such tags, or even add more if they deem it appropriate. I regret to say that I have seen a bit of an effort to not deal with some concerns in the past, but that in general tagging seems to be an effective way to get them addressed, when other matters fail. John Carter (talk) 15:07, 4 August 2013 (UTC)
- And I think your refusal to offer specific suggestions for improvement of the article while ignoring the input of two WP:3Os and refusing to participate in WP:DRN are all evidence that you are nothing more than a tendentious tag-spammer. Your actions on this article are completely inappropriate and intended to provoke an edit war. Ignocrates (talk) 15:42, 4 August 2013 (UTC)
- Comment - "ignoring the input of two WP:3Os" - just lukewarmly on that specific issue, overall I share some of the unease of John Carter about this, I have a twitch that something is off, and, sorry, Ignocrates, what John Carter says about your editing/commenting practices is more than fair. My main problem however is that this summer I don't have access to my own personal library, nor a decent university library, and I haven't studied this area in detail for more than 20 years. Sorry everybody. In ictu oculi (talk) 23:14, 4 August 2013 (UTC)
- It is very frustrating to be expected to respond to "I have a twitch that something is off" because that is neither specific nor actionable. Since you don't have access to your library resources, and I do have access to a university library, tell me what you think is wrong and I will track down the sources for you. Ignocrates (talk) 23:42, 4 August 2013 (UTC)
- I realise that is indeed a frustrating comment, but honestly given that my name was invoked I couldn't not say anything, but also cannot just go on memory and impressions of study of 20 years ago and intermittent interest since. What can I say. I'm commenting now on overall impression of the friction above, not on the sources, overall I would like to see you get these articles to featured status and think it's a good work. You've also, mainly, been less supportive than before of the "fountainhead" and Papias related synthesis at Gospel of Matthew which seems to come up in the pasture annually like heracleum sphondylium (persistent common hogweed to British/Irish farmers). For this, mainly, thanks. The real problem with this is we really lack a decent pool of SBL-familiar scholarship in New Testament articles, I include myself in the lack. In ictu oculi (talk) 02:03, 5 August 2013 (UTC)
- Thanks for your support. Frankly, this article was a test case to see if any article in this sub-category could make it to FA-class and stay there. If not, I'm not going to waste my time and energy on improving any of the others. With respect to the Papias related content, I have not been opposed to your ends, only the means you have sometimes used to achieve them. Process matters to me. Ignocrates (talk) 02:34, 5 August 2013 (UTC)
- I realise that is indeed a frustrating comment, but honestly given that my name was invoked I couldn't not say anything, but also cannot just go on memory and impressions of study of 20 years ago and intermittent interest since. What can I say. I'm commenting now on overall impression of the friction above, not on the sources, overall I would like to see you get these articles to featured status and think it's a good work. You've also, mainly, been less supportive than before of the "fountainhead" and Papias related synthesis at Gospel of Matthew which seems to come up in the pasture annually like heracleum sphondylium (persistent common hogweed to British/Irish farmers). For this, mainly, thanks. The real problem with this is we really lack a decent pool of SBL-familiar scholarship in New Testament articles, I include myself in the lack. In ictu oculi (talk) 02:03, 5 August 2013 (UTC)
- It is very frustrating to be expected to respond to "I have a twitch that something is off" because that is neither specific nor actionable. Since you don't have access to your library resources, and I do have access to a university library, tell me what you think is wrong and I will track down the sources for you. Ignocrates (talk) 23:42, 4 August 2013 (UTC)
- Comment - "ignoring the input of two WP:3Os" - just lukewarmly on that specific issue, overall I share some of the unease of John Carter about this, I have a twitch that something is off, and, sorry, Ignocrates, what John Carter says about your editing/commenting practices is more than fair. My main problem however is that this summer I don't have access to my own personal library, nor a decent university library, and I haven't studied this area in detail for more than 20 years. Sorry everybody. In ictu oculi (talk) 23:14, 4 August 2013 (UTC)
- And I think your refusal to offer specific suggestions for improvement of the article while ignoring the input of two WP:3Os and refusing to participate in WP:DRN are all evidence that you are nothing more than a tendentious tag-spammer. Your actions on this article are completely inappropriate and intended to provoke an edit war. Ignocrates (talk) 15:42, 4 August 2013 (UTC)
- I believe the numerous references to Boismard in the academic literature produced by Nishidani above very seriously calls into question the apparently unfounded assertion "I agree this has not received much scholarly weight at all" and think perhaps it might make sense if certain parties were to make an effort to actually consult the academic literature, as he has, before making such apparently unfounded assertions. I also very much agree that there is a very real problem with editorializing in the notes, and other potentially dubious behavior, and think that, in general, most if not all of them really could/should be incorporated into the text or perhaps be changed into citation-type notes which can and in this circumstance easily could incorporate quotations from the sources into the note itself. Unfortunately, on Thursday, my off day, an electrical fire pretty much screwed up connectivity, among other things, for a while, and I wasn't able to do as much as I would like. However, under the circumstances, I can't see any reservations about editors who do not have previously expressed positions which could very easily be taken as substantive cause for POV complaints, editors like Nishidani and In ictu oculi, for instance, to remove such tags, or even add more if they deem it appropriate. I regret to say that I have seen a bit of an effort to not deal with some concerns in the past, but that in general tagging seems to be an effective way to get them addressed, when other matters fail. John Carter (talk) 15:07, 4 August 2013 (UTC)
- I don't think one challenged minor source on a page is sufficient to raise NPOV issues warranting a tag. It is a small technical issue, easily resolved, and is being addressed. So, if that is the objection, then I think the NPOV tag can be removed, though, as always I would leave it there for a discretionary day or two (if it hasn't already been removed: no time to check!) Nishidani (talk) 15:04, 1 August 2013 (UTC)
- I think we have a talk page consensus among three editors - myself, In ictu oculi, and Nishidani - to include Boismard as a source, but cautiously as a tiny minority view. That being the case, is it time to remove the npov tag and move forward? Ignocrates (talk) 21:44, 31 July 2013 (UTC)
- In reply to Ignocrates's request on my page (I'm sorry I haven'ìt had the time to work on these several pages given the heavy workload at Khazars), I was inclined to accept in ictu oculi's point - we should accept only the most recent work where possible, which Ignocrates generally has done - however the problem for me is that contemporary scholarship over the last few decades still keeps citing Boismard's work frequently (Wolf-Dietrich Köhler (1987);Rudolf Pesch (1989); Édouard Massaux, Arthur J. Bellinzoni (1990); Albertus Frederik Johannes Klijn (1992); Andreas Ennulat (1994);Simon Claude Mimouni (1998);David Neville (2002); Simon-Claude Mimouni (2004); Michael J. Kruger (2005);James Keith Elliott (2005); James A. Kelhoffer (2005);Oskar Skarsaune, Reidar Hvalvik (2007); J. V. M. Sturdy, Jonathan Knight(2007); Guido Baltes (2011) etc., to cite just book length technical studies which cite Boismard's work. This means that he is still regarded as relevant, and therefore, in some form or another, may be included, preferably through a specific secondary source that reliably excerpts his position. I think this has been done.Nishidani (talk) 19:28, 31 July 2013 (UTC)
- I expanded the ABD citation into a note and added Petersen's direct quotation, instead of summarizing it. I included Boismard's paper as a secondary citation, in case someone wants to track down the original paper in French. If someone else has a different idea, please discuss it here. Ignocrates (talk) 12:58, 31 July 2013 (UTC)
Proof-reading the lead
Just some comments on the lead:
The Gospel of the Ebionites is the conventional name given by scholars to an apocryphal gospel that may have been used by a Jewish Christian sect known as the Ebionites. All that remains of the gospel are seven brief quotations found in a heresiology known as the Panarion, written by Epiphanius of Salamis, the only witness for this gospel; he misidentified it as the "Hebrew" gospel, believing it to be a truncated and modified version of the Gospel of Matthew. The quotations were embedded in a polemic to point out inconsistencies in the beliefs and practices of the Ebionites relative to Nicene orthodoxy.
The surviving fragments derive from a gospel harmony of the Synoptic Gospels, composed in Greek with various expansions and abridgments reflecting the theology of the writer. It is believed to have been composed some time during the middle of the 2nd century in or around the region east of the Jordan River. Distinctive features include the absence of the virgin birth and of the genealogy of Jesus; an Adoptionist Christology, in which Jesus is chosen to be God's Son at the time of his Baptism; the abolition of the Jewish sacrifices by Jesus; and an advocacy of vegetarianism. Although the gospel was said to be used by "Ebionites" during the time of the early church, the identity of the group or groups that used it remains a matter of conjecture.
The Gospel of the Ebionites is one of several Jewish–Christian Gospels, along with the Gospel of the Hebrews and the Gospel of the Nazoraeans; all survive only as fragments in quotations of the early Church Fathers. Due to their fragmentary state, the relationships, if any, between the Jewish–Christian Gospels and a hypothetical original Hebrew Gospel are uncertain and have been a subject of intensive scholarly investigation. The Ebionite gospel has been recognized as distinct from the others, and it has been identified more closely with the lost Gospel of the Twelve. It shows no dependence on the Gospel of John and is similar in nature to the harmonized gospel sayings based on the Synoptic Gospels used by Justin Martyr, although a relationship between them, if any, is uncertain. A similarity between the gospel and a source document contained within the Clementine Recognitions (1.27–71), conventionally referred to by scholars as the Ascents of James, has also been noted with respect to the command to abolish the Jewish sacrifices.
- In line 1 of para 1 we have "...may have been used by a Jewish Christian sect known as the Ebionites." Then at the end of para 2 we have: "Although the gospel was said to be used by "Ebionites"..." In other words, two mentions of the community separated by a wide gap. It would be better if they were brought together. I suggest deleting the mention from para 1, like this: "The Gospel of the Ebionites is the conventional name given by scholars to a fragmentary apocryphal gospel extant only as seven brief quotations in a heresiology known as the Panarion, by Epiphanius of Salamis." (Note that I'm taking out the phrase "the only witness for this gospel" - that's already implied in the sentence as I've redrafted it).
- Para 2: "the relationships, if any, between the Jewish–Christian Gospels and a hypothetical original Hebrew Gospel are uncertain and have been a subject of intensive scholarly investigation." I have strong doubts about including this at all - the Hebrew Gospel is probably not real, but there's a Gospel of the Hebrews that is, and I think this risks confusing the reader. Cover it in the main article by all means, but not in the lead.
- Para 2 deals with the contents and composition of the GEb, para 3 with Jewish Christian communities and gospels in general. The info about the community of the GEb belongs here, not in the 2nd para. Move "Although the gospel was said to be used by "Ebionites" during the time of the early church, the identity of the group or groups that used it remains a matter of conjecture" from the end of the 2nd para to somewhere in the 3rd. Probably the first sentence: "Although the gospel was said to be used by "Ebionites" during the time of the early church, the identity of the group or groups that used it remains a matter of conjecture. It is one of several Jewish–Christian Gospels, along with the Gospel of the Hebrews and the Gospel of the Nazoraeans, surviving only as fragments in quotations of the early Church Fathers." Etc.
- "A similarity between the gospel and a source document contained within the Clementine Recognitions (1.27–71), conventionally referred to by scholars as the Ascents of James, has also been noted with respect to the command to abolish the Jewish sacrifices." Passive voice - this similarity has been noted by whom? Try to avoid this sort of thing, I find it irritating. (Well, I'm old and cranky, I find Korean boy-bands irritating too, but they have their fans).
PiCo (talk) 02:36, 31 July 2013 (UTC)
- PiCo, thanks for all these suggestions and welcome back. I will try to incorporate them in the next few days. The immediate priority is to shepherd the article thru FAR successfully. Ignocrates (talk) 04:47, 31 July 2013 (UTC)
- Ignocrates, the above comment seems to me to demonstrate a very strong inability to understand what the purpose and nature of FAR is, and could very easily be taken as perhaps yet another in what might be seen as a longstanding habit of refusing to address legitimate concerns on the basis of some other cause. If legitimate concerns are expressed here, they will almost certainly be considered in the FAR. Basic logic would indicate that if there are problems which could conceivably cause it to fail FAR, that those problems should be addressed in the attempt to get this article through FAR. Putting them off for later, in this context, is completely nonsensical, and might easily be taken as an attempt at misdirection, which, in these circumstances, would not be considered sufficient grounds, as refusing to deal with problems such as those expressed above is often one of the leading reasons for an article to fail FAR. I very strongly suggest that the above editor perhaps more thoroughly familiarize himself with the process of FAR before making such almost completely incomprehensible and inaccurate jumps to conclusions as are implicit in the above statement. John Carter (talk) 14:58, 4 August 2013 (UTC)
- The point is that addressing specific concerns and questions in FAR takes priority because FAR is typically open for a two week period. However, I didn't mean to imply that PiCo's suggestions for improvement of the lead can't be addressed. That being the case: Why don't you
get off your ass andaddress them? Ignocrates (talk) 15:48, 4 August 2013 (UTC)- I am really at a loss to respond to the obnoxious, arrogant, somewhat incendiary, and I believe deliberately nonproductive nature of this comment. Let me be honest with you, Ignocrates. Not all editors in wikipedia have displayed the sort of obsessive devotion to a single topic as you have. Some of us are trying to develop other pages as well, such as lists which indicate what topics receive substantial attention in other sources. Also, there are the details of getting together all the instances of misconduct of one other editor for ArbCom, which I believe just got another example of dubious conduct added to it. And, if you can remember back that far, unlike you, I some time ago recused myself from editing the article pages because of the numerous allegations of bias some editors made against me. There are other editors here as well, and they might be willing to weigh in and choose to agree or disagree as per WP:CONSENSUS, which really in general does involve more than just one SPA with possibly very serious issues of POV pushing or religious conflict of interests. Maybe if you could learn to conduct yourself in the manner of a rational adult, and not waste time with such counterproductive, incivil comments as the above, you might be able to do more to improve the article yourself, if actually improving it as per wikipedia guidelines and policies is more important than improving it to support the beliefs of certain non-notable groups. There is I believe a reasonable, well-founded question about the motivations of one editor around here, and some cause to believe that individual might be perhaps willfully behaving in a counterproductive manner, and that is the reason for the request for ArbCom to review the behavior of that editor seems indicated. Once that issue is resolved, however it is resolved, I believe that will make it much easier for others to actively improve the article. John Carter (talk) 16:37, 4 August 2013 (UTC)
- I remember reading this same excuse years ago: "I some time ago recused myself from editing the article pages because of the numerous allegations of bias some editors made against me". When I asked you to produce evidence in the form of diffs for these alleged "allegations of bias", you were unable to do so. I'll give you one more chance to do it now, PROVE IT. Ignocrates (talk) 19:23, 4 August 2013 (UTC)
- Ignocrates. I( do not believe that this irrational insistence on your part that people are somehow absolutely required to meet your aritrary and irrational demands to provide links to statements they make even remotely rational, and certainly I believe virtually any editor coming to this discussion would very likely find such arrogant, presumptive demands such as the above to almost certainly be a misuse of the article talk page. Despite the all-too-obvious presumptuous arrogance of the above comment, I am aware of no policy or guideline which demands such proof. If you can prove to me that somehow policies and guidelines support such irrational and blatantly arrogant comments such as your own above, I believe that would be more appropriate. Otherwise, please consider this possibly the final warning regarding misuse of the article talk page, completely off-topic comments, and other violations of WP:TPG. Thank you. John Carter (talk) 19:42, 4 August 2013 (UTC)
- Yeah, that's what I thought, there were no allegations of bias. Add another knowingly false statement to the long list. However, I'm willing to stipulate that you are too biased to be contributing to article content in the category of religious articles broadly construed, and therefore, too biased to be participating in talk page discussions in the category as well. Ignocrates (talk) 20:02, 4 August 2013 (UTC)
- I am in the process of reviewing the history of this matter in preparing the request for arbitration. Although I have not yet gotten to reviewing the previous attempts at mediation, it was I believe during the second of them that I first recused myself from editing. I am reviewing user talk pages first, but I think most reasonable editors would understand that someone with over 100,000 edits might have a bit of difficulty finding exactly which edit points is prove. I also believe that it is not unreasonable, given your own previous allegiance with the Ebionite Jewish Community as per the IP comments of its leader, as per User:John Carter/Ebionites 2 evidence that there is more than sufficient basis to question your own bias as per WP:POV as well. Yet, somehow, your history indicates that you do little if anything else. Should I add the template? John Carter (talk) 20:37, 4 August 2013 (UTC)
- Yeah, that's what I thought, there were no allegations of bias. Add another knowingly false statement to the long list. However, I'm willing to stipulate that you are too biased to be contributing to article content in the category of religious articles broadly construed, and therefore, too biased to be participating in talk page discussions in the category as well. Ignocrates (talk) 20:02, 4 August 2013 (UTC)
- Ignocrates. I( do not believe that this irrational insistence on your part that people are somehow absolutely required to meet your aritrary and irrational demands to provide links to statements they make even remotely rational, and certainly I believe virtually any editor coming to this discussion would very likely find such arrogant, presumptive demands such as the above to almost certainly be a misuse of the article talk page. Despite the all-too-obvious presumptuous arrogance of the above comment, I am aware of no policy or guideline which demands such proof. If you can prove to me that somehow policies and guidelines support such irrational and blatantly arrogant comments such as your own above, I believe that would be more appropriate. Otherwise, please consider this possibly the final warning regarding misuse of the article talk page, completely off-topic comments, and other violations of WP:TPG. Thank you. John Carter (talk) 19:42, 4 August 2013 (UTC)
- I remember reading this same excuse years ago: "I some time ago recused myself from editing the article pages because of the numerous allegations of bias some editors made against me". When I asked you to produce evidence in the form of diffs for these alleged "allegations of bias", you were unable to do so. I'll give you one more chance to do it now, PROVE IT. Ignocrates (talk) 19:23, 4 August 2013 (UTC)
- I am really at a loss to respond to the obnoxious, arrogant, somewhat incendiary, and I believe deliberately nonproductive nature of this comment. Let me be honest with you, Ignocrates. Not all editors in wikipedia have displayed the sort of obsessive devotion to a single topic as you have. Some of us are trying to develop other pages as well, such as lists which indicate what topics receive substantial attention in other sources. Also, there are the details of getting together all the instances of misconduct of one other editor for ArbCom, which I believe just got another example of dubious conduct added to it. And, if you can remember back that far, unlike you, I some time ago recused myself from editing the article pages because of the numerous allegations of bias some editors made against me. There are other editors here as well, and they might be willing to weigh in and choose to agree or disagree as per WP:CONSENSUS, which really in general does involve more than just one SPA with possibly very serious issues of POV pushing or religious conflict of interests. Maybe if you could learn to conduct yourself in the manner of a rational adult, and not waste time with such counterproductive, incivil comments as the above, you might be able to do more to improve the article yourself, if actually improving it as per wikipedia guidelines and policies is more important than improving it to support the beliefs of certain non-notable groups. There is I believe a reasonable, well-founded question about the motivations of one editor around here, and some cause to believe that individual might be perhaps willfully behaving in a counterproductive manner, and that is the reason for the request for ArbCom to review the behavior of that editor seems indicated. Once that issue is resolved, however it is resolved, I believe that will make it much easier for others to actively improve the article. John Carter (talk) 16:37, 4 August 2013 (UTC)
- The point is that addressing specific concerns and questions in FAR takes priority because FAR is typically open for a two week period. However, I didn't mean to imply that PiCo's suggestions for improvement of the lead can't be addressed. That being the case: Why don't you
- Ignocrates, the above comment seems to me to demonstrate a very strong inability to understand what the purpose and nature of FAR is, and could very easily be taken as perhaps yet another in what might be seen as a longstanding habit of refusing to address legitimate concerns on the basis of some other cause. If legitimate concerns are expressed here, they will almost certainly be considered in the FAR. Basic logic would indicate that if there are problems which could conceivably cause it to fail FAR, that those problems should be addressed in the attempt to get this article through FAR. Putting them off for later, in this context, is completely nonsensical, and might easily be taken as an attempt at misdirection, which, in these circumstances, would not be considered sufficient grounds, as refusing to deal with problems such as those expressed above is often one of the leading reasons for an article to fail FAR. I very strongly suggest that the above editor perhaps more thoroughly familiarize himself with the process of FAR before making such almost completely incomprehensible and inaccurate jumps to conclusions as are implicit in the above statement. John Carter (talk) 14:58, 4 August 2013 (UTC)
Recent edits
First, I have added a citation needed tag for a statement which very seriously seems to my eyes to be at least passively POV pushing. I have also edited one statement here in a way which to my eyes much more seriously and informatively conveys the facts of the situation. The previous text, "Ephiphanius is believed...", seems to implicitly indicate that this is somehow both a matter of "belief" (which in the context of religious documents can and generally does imply religious belief) to "Modern scholarship believes..." which is both more neutral, more directly informative (by indicating exactly who believes it) and places what seems to me to be the appropriate weight to the assertion that this is an indpenndent academic opinion, which for our purposes gives it more weight. I am far from sure that similar problems might not exist elsewhere, and would very definitely appreciate having the rest of the article examined by independent editors to see if there are other similar examples of leading phrasing in the text as well, and adjust them for clarity. John Carter (talk) 14:53, 4 August 2013 (UTC)
- I have added the requested citation as well as quotations from Richard Bauckham in a note. Ignocrates (talk) 20:50, 4 August 2013 (UTC)
Disputed tag
I have added a disputed tag to replace the removed citation needed template. The quote included in the second citation clearly uses the word "if", and that statement in that source both I think calls into question whether the material actually can be used to source this statement, but also, given that statement's being used by that source, can itself be used as at least an indicator, although probably not as pure "proof," that there is some real question in the academic world whether the existence of this document, and the accuracy of Epiphanius's claims about it, is a matter of question in the academic community. John Carter (talk) 20:54, 4 August 2013 (UTC)
- Yes, Bauckham uses the word "if" because the association of these texts with the Ebionites known to Irenaeus, which Bauckham assumes to be the case for his hypothesis of Ebionite origins, is disputed. The content of the article does not make any claims to proof; it says the GE is an important piece of information. Ignocrates (talk) 21:04, 4 August 2013 (UTC)
- And that statement in the article is not really sourced by the evidence. And the article's statement that it is an important piece of information seems to be based on a statement which is itself seemingly not particularly certain that it is directly relevant. If you can provide other better sources which do not include such qualification, please support them. Otherwise, even if the author "assumes" something, well, it is hard not to see that the assumption he makes may not be really supported by others, and thus some sort of OR/SYNTH problem with the quotes being used to support statements that they themselves do not necessarily make persists. John Carter (talk) 21:24, 4 August 2013 (UTC)
- Given the source citation, how would you propose to reword the sentence so that there is not "some sort of OR/SYNTH problem"? Ignocrates (talk) 21:29, 4 August 2013 (UTC)
- Find a source which clearly states what the article states - that's actually kinda basic and something most people would understand. Alternately, if you can't find such sources, again, basically, adjust the content to say what can be verified and not have OR/SYNTH problems relative to the sources. Duh. John Carter (talk) 21:40, 4 August 2013 (UTC)
- Given the source citation, how would you propose to reword the sentence so that there is not "some sort of OR/SYNTH problem"? Ignocrates (talk) 21:29, 4 August 2013 (UTC)
- And that statement in the article is not really sourced by the evidence. And the article's statement that it is an important piece of information seems to be based on a statement which is itself seemingly not particularly certain that it is directly relevant. If you can provide other better sources which do not include such qualification, please support them. Otherwise, even if the author "assumes" something, well, it is hard not to see that the assumption he makes may not be really supported by others, and thus some sort of OR/SYNTH problem with the quotes being used to support statements that they themselves do not necessarily make persists. John Carter (talk) 21:24, 4 August 2013 (UTC)
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