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Revision as of 15:10, 22 July 2006 by TSO1D (talk | contribs)(diff) ← Previous revision | Latest revision (diff) | Newer revision → (diff)From Moscow's peer review:
- Remove image gallery (perhaps just replace it with a link to Wikimedia Commons)
Refactor Media section (as it is currently just a list of external links) to make it look more like Johannesburg's Communications and media section.Remove See Also links (like History of Moscow) that are already linked in the body of the article.Remove the list from the Moscow tourist attractions sectionExpand the Education sectionExplain the Crime Rates box betterCopyedit the articleMove Climate from under TourismPut Air pollution in Moscow in a sub-section (as it's too short as it is)Sift through the External Links and get rid of any that are not very helpful.Add a significant number of referencesAdd something about water transport (Moscow has two passenger riverports and regular motorship routes used mostly for entertainment)
Other Items:
Add some image of Moscow sport facilities - Luzhniki and Krylatskoye sport complexes- Refactor Living Costs section, which is quite repetitive.
- Russian State Library (former Lenin library) should be mentioned.
- Perhaps a brief note about schools for students below college-age would be helpful in the Education section.
- Sport section should be improved, Moscow Hyppodrome mentioned.
- Modern city plan nedded to replace old ones.